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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

part1

intro is awesome...& it's sounded like a story...nt novel😛
eng convo with lines...GOOD😳

with their hope too...conservative people...
bt natural at all
in those age perhaps princess wouldn't get permission to rule👎🏼

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

I like this story more than ehesaas😉 coz short upd😆

part 2

salam to d pm👏
king is broken bt convinced 😊
good storyline as well⭐️

...countrymen happy...snapati unhappy

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

part 3

description of Vanhi's growing up is really beautiful...just like fairy tale⭐️

1 yr older boy...Rudra??
u compelled me 2 do so...nt false at all

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

part 4:

tiny butterfly?? vry good comparison👏

a beast never hears prayer- very true😭

vanhi will become a real vanhi...impressing line👏

witness of murder...suspense👍🏼

with wild animals?? like Mogli??

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

part 5

diff be2n 2 twins-process of taking decision😆
good description of 3👏
unfair discrimination of society...😆 nice realization

two storms like us together seriously🤣

secret pain
suspense again😛

last line is superb👏

will com on other parts asap...going 2 ehesaas😉

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi
If you continue this story please let me know...I will surely read this one. on this regard I am giving you my words.

to let one know about update writer must have to pm that person ..and pm can't be sent those who are not on buddy list/pending list/waiting list .specially writer is unable to pm those who removed the writer from friend list..so sorry

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

to let one know about update writer must have to pm that person ..and pm can't be sent those who are not on buddy list/pending list/waiting list .specially writer is unable to pm those who removed the writer from friend list..so sorry

First of all Chill...You don't need to be angry or worried as this is not a big deal.
Next...it is up to readers not WRITER how to read a story...you are writer...please do your job and write the story, develop the drama whatever way you want. Then leave the rest on your readers...now it's there call whether they will read your story or not...if your story has the power to draw the attention towards it and its character ...readers will come and read your story without invitation...as far my words...I will keep them. Don't worry.
And lastly...Don't be sorry...because you didn't do anything to say this.
Btw will you plan to update this soon????

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Seriously I want this now.I was reading this story...and after reading this again...now I want this story to continue and end soon...or otherwise instead of Rudra and Vanhi...I will start sword fighting...but with whom?? May be with you Ms Writter in my dreams.And then I will fill all the pages of this thread with my rubbish chants.

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