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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

beautifuly described!!
so both side fire of revenge is alive n growing with them!!
old mantri had gr8 hopes and both shakti & vanhi promised him to take revenge!!
ohh senapati is same cruel as he was before king!
and felt pity for his poor wife!!
and did rudra knew all truth
as he is hating vanhi he must not!!

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

di ud soon...

bohut w8 kar liya...

n plzz PM me...

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: shruja
beautifuly described!!
so both side fire of revenge is alive n growing with them!!
old mantri had gr8 hopes and both shakti & vanhi promised him to take revenge!!
ohh senapati is same cruel as he was before king!
and felt pity for his poor wife!!
and did rudra knew all truth
as he is hating vanhi he must not!!

shruja thanks ..was waiting for your comment
well rudra shouldn't hate vanhi so as vanhi shouldn't hate him
but this hatred , anger and thought of revenge had been injected into them from very beginning by destiny..they are on the age when people are beyond any logic...that's why i told this is a very hostile story

thanks anu for comment

saheeba and sparksify okk updating as soon as possible

Edited by aru_86 - 13 years ago

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

so rudra does not like vanhi at all...

continue soon...

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they went together to learn it...nice...

Edited by Tyro - 13 years ago

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702755

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

i will read it and then comment.😃

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sultanahabeeb

@sultanahabeeb

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

hmmm true bond of friendship between the trio.

thanks for pm nd i love ur story.try to up it soon

thanks again

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

thanks for commenting tyro,amirfan,sultana

lucy and priya take your time

sultana you were eager to read my ups..i expected a bit long comment😊

anyways thanks

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

lo ji hum a gaye...the great fr8ship b/w the trio...destiny...whom rudra n vanhi r dreaming to destroy...the same people are slowely becaming part of their life...
n poor queen...i really took pity on her n her daughter...kaisi kismat hai dono ki...queen wants to help commoner's but they denie by hatred...this king is really B*****d...
n Dhwanivedan...dono ek saath ek dusre ko khatam karne ki vidya sihne ja rahe h...lets see what is written for them...
update soon
luv u :-)

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

di plz plz plz plzzz...update rahenge sada and yeh sheher hai aman ka...i m really dying to know the first meet of raj n rupa...
n also for suhan n pali...but most raj n rupa...i m crazy about that story...i really like this story just couz of it's name n banner...''Rahenge Sada''...di apko ye title aya kaha se tha...pehle ye batao...so apt...n so...so...sry words nahi mil rahe...but plz di update that one soon...
luv u... :-)