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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

beautifully written kinzi...it ws indeed forbidden magic...😭

zeeshan ws a gr8 guy bt dey were nt meant for each other...

another beautiful story cums to an end...hatsss offf to u kinzii...👏

loads of love

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#342

*sigh..deep down i was thinking u may come up with something like this & my fear became true...but i m not complaining...this was sucha different story.it may hv not got an happy ending & yes my heart goes out to zeeshan who didn't get what he deserved..he deserved to be loved back equally after all what he done for maheen but life is such ..unexpected things happen .& ppl don't always get what he deserve...maheen never cared for him the way he does...& it happen for the best that they broke up...coz may be some other gal will be able to give zeeshan the love he desrve & ppl like maheen ,i feel sorry for them..they hv seen harshness of life & that made them so scared that they close the door of their happiness forever so that no one can break it again or hurt them again..maheen is alive but she may never be able to live again!
u r a fab writer kinza...but u know what ?to tell u the truth first time i m happy u didn't write this story with Mayank -nupur.i may hv never be able to take the ending if this was mayank -nupur in the place of zeeshan & maheen...but yeah it was a great story to read .thank u so much for this!🤗...

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#343

shocking updt!!!!!!!!!
i know...sometimes what happens in other ppl's life affect us too much...bt tht doesn't mean u have to restrict urself from all tht...
i think here...maheen was wrong...wht happens to ur life is in ur hand...so wish she had given herself a chance...

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Heart-wrenching but beauifully ending Kinza i fel so bad for Zeeshan it's true though u can't force some1 to love u thanks for he pms

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Reserved ...

Edited

I don't know what to say.. I didn't expect this end...

Hmm.. When the story started I had thought that they would break free from this "forbidden" sign, but it didn't happen because it was forbidden..

I understand Maheen's view. Its better to break the realtionship now rather than 15 years later because till then the damage has already happened...

So she did it to give him and herself justice...

But there's one thing I don't understand, she did it so it won't damage later.. For her own sake this was all good.. but what about Zeeshan he loved her.. how will he live?

Her decision might be right but it was selfish, and to be very honest.. How could she know this was a forbidden relation?

He was the fountain of love, and he would shower love on her till eternity,.. The only he thing he needed was her by his side...

Just because it happened to her parents doesn't mean it will happen to her...

She drained the fountain of love just because she left...

I wouldn't say if the ending was right or wrong... Because I don't think there will be any correct answer..

But it went with the story so I assume its okay...

Wonderful story Kinza, you have written it beautifully... On your side I think you did full justice to it...

The names, the story, and the end.,..

It was one of your best stories, and I would say after "Weaving the Magic" this is my fav. story from you...'

Do write more stories like this on MN, and on original character too... I would love to read... :)

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us... 😳

-Laiba-

Edited by .SilentPrincess - 14 years ago

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#346

awesome updt kinza
you beautifully expressed Zeeshan's emotions
thanks for the pm

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#347

Awesome update

loved it loadzz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Muahhh

Xxx

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#348

awesome update.

poor zeeshan.

feel sorry for him.

lovely story.

thnaks for the pm.

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#349

forbiden it was ...frobiden it is...

sorry cant say more ...

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Nikitha

@niki_09

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#350

i just started reading it ..n ua fab ..do continue 👍🏼

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