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MrsJaimeFraser

@MrsJaimeFraser

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#311

ohh..while i was rambling here,u updated part 13 ...😆

Got late..as usual..see i told u so.m LAZYY...😆..

so-Maheem fears love,fears falling for him.Well,no doubt the girl has gone through so much,but she needs to wake up from her supposed slumber n take note of how much Zeeshan has become a part of her routine..the guy loves her for sure and she can get her share of love,(to put it bluntly as such)if thats what she wants,from HIM...

nevertheless-a BEAUTIFULLY heart-wrenching update Fanta...🤗..u penned it down as always-most effectively...❤️.

update soon...

Debzy...

Edited by -Debzyy- - 14 years ago

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#312

OMG i feared something bad was coming...and i don't wanna see him heart broken...nor do i wish to see Maheen all so confused and suffering all over again...is it neceessary that she faces the same to understand wht her parents have gone thru...

Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#313

omg maheen is so feard from her own emotions and feelings... 😔

hope tht she understands her feelings and zeeshan love as soon as possible...😊

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#314

so she fears the l word.but since she wanted to be loved, the hope is not lost. she will overcome this fear gradually if zeeshan shows patience. hopes are lost for those girl who dont want love.

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#315

lovely update

thanks 4 the pm

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#316

All you really have to fear is fear itself, eh?

Nicely written hun. With all the emotions brought out perfectly. Cant wait to know what happens next.

Update Soon. <3

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#317

wow!!!!!!!!!! what an amazing part kinzuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 i m speechless!!!!!!!!! it was all and much more that u transfered through this single part!!!!!! maheen's dilemma, Zeeshan's confession ... everything... but it was the last line that actually made me shiver

there was everything in her eyes .. but HE was no where ..

fantastic update kinzuuu!!!!!!!!!! eagerly waiting for teh next part!!!!!!! love u bestie!!!!!! 🤗

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#318

awesome update.

right emotion in right place with right words.

i hope, maheen realized her love for zeeshan...n ll accept soon.

continue soon

thanks for the pm.

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amrita vasireddy

@AmritaReddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#319

such an awesome updt 👏
hope she accepts him
i dont knw y she is running away 4m such a
sweet n caring person like Zeeshan
bt i think she has her
own experience in love
n thanks 4 the pm😊
~Amrita😳~