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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#231

OMG...Angel...u hav like bcum an expert in writin romance...!!seriously...i luvd every bit...but sumwhr i fear that nthng shud go wrng...anyways ths chap was Awesome!!!
keep writing.!!!*hugs*

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#232

ur updates are leaving me red n speechless...

amazing

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Amna

@AmnaIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Beautifuly visualized date Kinza..it was a treat to read..👏👏 - Loved the kiss in the rain concept..😳

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

it was amazing kinzu😍

so beautiful... and romantic☺️

thnx for the pm🤗

~jiya~

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Awesome update

loved it loadz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Muahhh

Xxx

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

it was the beautiful update...
the way u explain diffusion and liked it to their feelings uff...🤗 🤗

ur every update made me speechless ans stuned...

Remarkable...👏 👏

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

wow this s what i call absolutely romantic update! ohhh my heart is still beating so fast ...lol. read so many things yet ur writing has this effect on me.kinza.u r a wonderful writer i m telling u again!!!!

love the confidence zeeshan had i him...it even made nupur.to break her barrier !!! wow! can't wait to c what happens next!!!!!!

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

w o w..

Kinza this was just awesome. No doubt the best update in the whole ff so far...

From Zeshaan's date & Maheen's non-date to the holding hands and at last the kiss...

mesmerizing chapter Kinza, one of your best..! 😍

Truly loved it, and I re-read it n'th number of times.. & I still can't get over it.. Simply amazing...

Update soon...😳

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Kinza!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗

U r awesome !!!!!!!!!!!👏👏⭐️⭐️

Read part 7, 8 & 9..

My heartbeats & pulse was increasing as I read them...& the 9th part is outstanding...I felt as if I was in place of maheen..& cud feel the vibes & I was blushing all the time..☺️☺️☺️

Zeeshan is too good...wish someone so caring & understanding comes in life of all..😍😍😍

Plzz..plzz...update soon..😃