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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

amazing update Kinza! good to see this change in Maheen update the next part soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

i love the quotes and i love the change in her.

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

angel! ab wat shud i say! u r just awesome! loved d lil lil changes in maheen! though i missed zee!:(lol..anyways the story is awesome...lovd hw u used d buk's phrases!so tru! do cont asap!tc lu<33

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

KINZUUU!!!!! U WERE SUPPOSE TO POST LINK LN OUR THREAD! :/ WHT IF I WOULD HAVE MISSD IT? :( LET ME ADMIT THIS IS THE BEST PART U EVERRR WROTE!!!!! EACH AND EVERY LINE, EXPRESSION, *UMAR AND MAHEEN* , THE WAY U USED DH LAWRENCE TO PORTRAY SO MUCH ABT MAHEEN'S LIFE, NOT TO FORGET HER REFLECTION!!!! AND THN THE END!!!! *SIGHS* THR IS DEFINITELY SOMETHING MAGNTIC ABT ZEESHAN!!!! LOVED THE PART KINZUUU!!!!! AND U KNW I LOVE U!!!!!! HEHE!!!!!!! P.S. I LOVVVEEE UR SIGNATURE! <3

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Lovely update kinza
loved the change in maheen
very nice part

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

nice update kinza! loved the way you used the quotes!

thnx for the pm!

~jiya~

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Kinza 🤗

Brilliant update. Every word is amazing. I am getting further and further drawn into your amazing story.

I am happy to see the change in Maheen, to see her feeling again. I also love the quotes you have used & related them to her own life. Beautiful.

And most of all I liked how she related the last quote to Zeeshan. Looking forward to their next interaction.

Do update soon,

Nidz

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

beautifeul update kinza...

loved the lines...wht a inspirational thses were...🤗

awsome...

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

double post😆
anyways really liked how her father is influencing somehow n how she is accepting good things n change😃

Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Fanta the small snippets u used...the way u related it to her life n her parents' life was phenomenal👏
loved it totally...keep writing coz ur growin at it 🤗