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Posted: 14 years ago
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My poor Jacob or whoever you had in mind, such a beautiful poem! You're a writer, for irrespective of your own feelings - you understand how profound a topic you've chosen to pen about and you come up with a perfect kind of product. I'm not that intense a writer, hence people evidently get bits and pieces of me in all my writings. 😳

Keep up the good work, way to go! ⭐️

P.S. Team Jacob, big time!? 😎

P.P.S.
I'm unpredictable, beyond my own freaking imagination so that how I behave around my friends - be it online or in school entirely depends on my mood.

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
nice poem dear sharmila
i think u can publish some Poetic books 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

*Edited*

My poor Jacob or whoever you had in mind, such a beautiful poem! You're a writer, for irrespective of your own feelings - you understand how profound a topic you've chosen to pen about and you come up with a perfect kind of product. I'm not that intense a writer, hence people evidently get bits and pieces of me in all my writings. 😳

Keep up the good work, way to go! ⭐️

P.S. Team Jacob, big time!? 😎

P.P.S.
I'm unpredictable, beyond my own freaking imagination so that way I behave around my friends - be it online or in school entirely depends on my mood.

-Kankshita



Gosh, Kankshita. . . This comment is one of my fav... I mean among the ones that are addressed to me... Thank you ..... You've no idea how honored I feel ... To receive a comment like this from such an amazing writer like you... Thank you dear! . . .
I'm in Team Edward usually... I love each and everything about him. . . But I love Jake all the same.. Love his reckless nature and ofcourse his super hot body... 😆.. . I should actually be in team Bella... Coz I love both of them! ... and I'm a confused soul in this matter!

And pointed noted My sweet and unpredictable dear li'l sis! ... And wats with name of ur blog??.. Sinister soul?? 😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-



Gosh, Kankshita. . . This comment is one of my fav... I mean among the ones that are addressed to me... Thank you ..... You've no idea how honored I feel ... To receive a comment like this from such an amazing writer like you... Thank you dear! . . .
I'm in Team Edward usually... I love each and everything about him. . . But I love Jake all the same.. Love his reckless nature and ofcourse his super hot body... 😆.. . I should actually be in team Bella... Coz I love both of them! ... and I'm a confused soul in this matter!

And pointed noted My sweet and unpredictable dear li'l sis! ... And wats with name of ur blog??.. Sinister soul?? 😲



Am no amazing writer, I just have some polished writing skills - I writer needs to be intense, and you're that. I am not. Besides, my work does not come out systematically because I have way too many ideas flowing through my head. While what you put across is totally clear.

Jacob!? Edward!? IDK - they're both fineeee. 😆

Sinister soul - me! I'm troublesome and evil - I like it this way!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Sucha...nice poem di..:)..

Am a gr8 fan of Twilight saga n esp JACOB..i luv him...he's tooo good..:P..You poem is also very very very very good..I Loved this one...very skilled, you are..:)..>:D<

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

*Reserved*

Will edit tomorrow after my Deutsch internal. Bye till then! 😊


-Edited-

Hey Shar!!🤗

After the sucking Deutsch internal, I didn't feel like coming here! Sorry!!


OMG!! That's a very beautifully written poem. It had all the emotions correctly. Although I love Edward, I can't see Jake in pain. Remember? Me and my emotional self!! 😆

Kudos to you for writing such brilliant poetry.


Love you loads,

Sindhuja.


P. S. Finally, you get an edited comment!!

Edited by -Sindhu- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
lovely poem. i love the twilight saga. keeping up with the movies.😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gosh, Shar 🤗
This is so totally fabulous! This is such a beautiful piece!
All the feelings you've portrayed are so deep and intense. Absolutely heart touching.
You're a brilliant writer Shar! And I really respect poem writers immensely =D
Brilliant piece of work sweety =] Keep it up!
Love
Daania
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh my gosh i LOVED da beginning... would u believe dat i got goosebumps?!?!
i know u meant it for da twilight pair but my mind ws full of visuals of lucas & brooke of one tree hill..... im not sure if u'v heard of dat show but i used to follow it religiously😊

lucas had feelings for brooke and she fell for another guy awwww u reminded me dat season and lucas's misery...ur a fab writer i can vouch on dat😳

btw extremely sorry taking ages to comment as i totally lost track of da pm😳 stupid me

plssssss write more... my kjo

big hug 🤗 🤗
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