Poem:Be my valentine! -Pg 24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
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sharmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii da poem is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo romaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaantic 😍 😍 😍 😍 oooooohhhh my gosh i feel fainitshhhhhhhhhhhhh wish my mr right or wrong comes and proposes to me like dat 😍 😍

awwww i'v no words lil sis........................ i simply looooooooooooved it

ok now for my wacky imagination.......
it was all lucas and brooke for me....😍 they'r just made for each other and i miss them...
u brought back all lovely brucas moments for meeeeeeee......

here's my lucas & brooke.... my brucas ❤️

Thanks a million Di. . .

Your Mr Right will defo propose you in this way! . . if he doesn't tell me.. I'll give him a nice beating! 😆

Aww... the couple looks great.. whats the name of the show Di? I'll try watching it on Y-tube.. but I remember this guy from somewhere.. I think he is the lead in the movie Cinderella story.. Not sure though! 😊

I'm soooo honored you loved this one!

Love

Sharmi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: -Aish-
*Res.*

A m a z i n g. I don't have more words. (I know, I know, Aishwarya speechless and all. But it's possible. Believe me on that)

Well, I can just hope there's a guy like that, sometime, in my life.

Love,
Aishwarya

I have no words now!.. The chatterbox has no words?... Whoa!... I must've written something either horribly good or something amazingly bad... 🤣. . . Which one do you think the poem is?! 😆

You'll get a better guy sweety... Fikr not!

-Shar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
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Shar! 🤗

Now twas cute and brilliantly written! =) I detest cheesy stuff, you know that - right? But it sorta seemed an honestly felt point of view of umm, some guy. I like it because I did not want to puke, your writing style kept my captivated! It's enigmatic, superb!

Keep writing and me updated! :D

-Kankshita

I know you don't like dreamy stuff, I was apprehensive about posting this one, fearing what you might say... But then I was like, chalo lets see how Kanky reacts!

Now I didn't exactly get what you said, you liked it bcoz u didn't wanna hate my work?.. or you honestly liked it? I'm confused! 😕

Will post the 2nd part soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: -Sindhu-
Hey Shar! 🤗
That's a beautiful poem! 😃 I felt that the guy was sincerely asking the gal to be his Valentine. I mean, you usually don't find this kinda, genuine guys these days! 😆
But if you find any guy of this kind, do give him my number! 😉😆

- Sindhu

Thanks a ton Cindy!!. . .

You usually kadu.. you definitely won't get guys like this dear! 😆 ( for eg -take our life experiences 😉)

Lets imagine I find a guy like this-

Why would I wanna give that guy's number to you? Even I wanna a person like this for myself na... 🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

#185

I have no words now!.. The chatterbox has no words?... Whoa!... I must've written something either horribly good or something amazingly bad... 🤣. . . Which one do you think the poem is?! 😆

You'll get a better guy sweety... Fikr not!

-Shar

Horribly good!! 😉 I'm an oxymoron specialist!

I won't. Nobody would fall for me!! =)

Anyway, have written something. Want you to read it before I post it on I-F.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: -Aish-

Horribly good!! 😉 I'm an oxymoron specialist!

I won't. Nobody would fall for me!! =)

Anyway, have written something. Want you to read it before I post it on I-F.

Stop being a pessimist gal!

I'd love to read it... why don you mail it?!?... You have my id na?

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Posted: 14 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-

Stop being a pessimist gal!
I'd love to read it... why don you mail it?!?... You have my id na?

I'm not being a pessimist. I'm being a realist. Remember that, alright? Anyway, I'm doing it on the 'Ice Angel' thing. Ok?

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Posted: 14 years ago

#188

@Aish -Got the mail. . . Will read and text you by evening!. . . Keep your mobile with ya!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#189

Sorry dear for commenting late...as you know I was on a break and so my Inbox just piled up and I din come across your pm until today when I was deleting it :D

Coming to the poem..it was brilliant...
I mean that too from a guy's pov...its really rare for people to do such a thing..
and I guess you did total justice to it!

too much love was on display...though I liked it :)
at the end it was a nice poem :)

Take Care,
Fatima