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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

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Oh, man! This is one hellova OS - the blow you off kind. ⭐️ Okay, every other thing seems the same to me, but . . . the way it blows me off is a different issue all the time. 😉

It amazes me how people pen down such remarkable stories, without having been touched by any such miserable feeling. I find myself in bits and pieces in everything I write, and hence I believe myself to be no author. And you, umm - are amazing! Like, really! It was an absolute treat reading this OS and the way you molded out a story of your own and yet kept the Anuraag-Taani essence intact is marvelous. Way to go, friend! 😳

Thank you very much for posting this, a fantastic read! 👏

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Sharmila 🤗

Gosh, this is the first OS from your side that I'm reading and you've already made me into a fan of yours.

This piece was so beautfiully written! Absolutely heart wrenching! The way you described all those moments between them and how she misses it all. =(( I really had tears in my eyes.

And the last line was so saddening yet so beautiful, kind of like the gist of the OS was held in that one line.

Beautifully written Sharmila! All the emotions were very well described.

Bravo!

Love

Daania

Edited by -Daania- - 14 years ago

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

very nice os

do write more

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isomers

@isomers

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

wooaahh! that was so heart wrenching! The last line basically said it all, again.

Your descriptions are amazing! How she was(by her, I'm talking about Taani..because it did seem like you had her in mind while writing) thinking about their times and memories, how everything reminds her of him. amazing!

I don't see alot of people writing tragic stories(which is sad really) so it was really nice to see this! do write more!

-nitya
oh and thanks for the PM!

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1517595&PID=35249115&#35249115

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
well im shattered and heartbroken after readin ur ss
seriously choti sis ur just tooooooooooooo dam good!!!!!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
im a big fan of ur poems and ur writing, u should start a ff soon!!!!!!!!! im sure it'l rock big time and a super hit for sure.......👏👏

i love imagining ppl when readin anything be it poem, ss, ff so while readin ur story i imagined ranbhir kapoor and priyanka chopra. i know it ws priyanka who kinda broke ranbir's heart in anjaana anjaani but da story suited them perfectly....😳

especially dese two lines....
I just have one small request.
Please don't break her heart.😳
that's soooooooo priyanka....

plsssssss write more... cz ye dil maange more

lots of love

Thank you soooooo much Di !! .... I'm actually honored that you imagined PC while reading it.....

And yeah.... Those are my fav lines from the OS too..... I was thinking of the sacrifice Taani made while writing it..... Sure.... Having hols now.... You are definitely gonna get more OSes in da weeks to come!

Love ya! 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: marisol45
that was great
loved reading it
do write more😊

Thank you!! 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: shivangi278
WOW.....awesome OS...👏
loved it...do write more...

Thanks a lot dear!! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues
i loved it!!! 😃 you're really talented...and you know what? The last line was the clincher. Seriously..it was like one of the best ending lines ever....keep on writing and P'ming!! 😊

Wow! .... I'm so happy that you think its one of the best ending lines! ..... I'm really really glad!

Thank you!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -Sindhu-
Hey Shar!🤗
Firstly, I'm so damn happy that I got to read this piece of work.
Although I don't watch this serial, Tere Liye I kinda have a vague idea about the story. And I imagined on them itself.

The emotions of a heartbroken girl are wonderfully described. The way she decides to move on even though it hurts, the way she wants to cherish all the sweet and good memories they spent together, the way she wants urges him not to hurt any other girl. It's all so perfect!!

All the words are too beautiful. I so loved it!! Kudos to you gal!!

Love you loads,
Sindhuja

Hiya Sindhu,

Obviously you'll have an idea dear! ... The way I keep bugging you about Harshad.... U would definitely have an idea !!! 😉 😆

Thanks alot for such an amazing comment! ..... I'm over whelmed!😳