Setting Free.......[Poem]

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

It's really a very beautiful poem ....you've captured the emotions of a girl whoz dying silently and full filling men's desires...and the excruciating pain she goes through...I'm rendered speechless... expressed and written beautifully !!

loved it dear 👏 do write more !!

Ahh....I forgot to add I'm following your blog...it's good; do have a glance at my blog too the link is in the signature !! 😊

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Mahi.. I read the poem on the blog.. you have poured your heart out in this poem.. conveys each and every emotion of yours.. Beautifully written..

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Sach batavun mahii...it was beautiful..

But for the first some lines, i thought its ur feelings - because u told u were feeling low..mein dar gayi thi ki patha nahin kya hua ki itne depressed hogayi..

Fir patha chala ki tum call girl ki kahani bata rahi ho...Wonderful lines Mahi - Tumne uski pain achi tarah se bayan kiya hai... love you for that.. For voicing their true feelings..I feel sorry for those unlucky girls..

Tum itni choti ho aur itni achi tarah likhti ho...vaada karo ki tum kuch bhi ban jaaye zindagi mein doctor ya teacher ya engineer ... kabhi bhi likhna nahin chodna..Its a rare gift..

🤗

Edited by Nirvrithi - 14 years ago

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maria

@marisol45

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

beautiful poem
the feelings were so well expressed
keep it up!

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Fatima

@waniya_fatima

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

awwwwwwwwwwwww mehak.... it was suplended effort jana i loved each and every word of urs superb... keep it up honey

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Wow mahak nice poem.
Like it

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Loved it...........it ws simply supurb............great.

thnks 4 pm.

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Thanks a lot guys!

After exams, i wud surely reply to each one of you...

Thanks a lot!

love,
Mahi

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Beautiful poem, Mahak!! Really, you've done an amazing job! 👍🏼

Heart wrenching, eh! What makes you write such depressive things, I would wanna know girl. Either you are way too expressive or this comes straight from the heart. As always, there's no other better medium to flush your emotions out than writing.

I really appreciate your work, gal. You're awesome! Keep writing! =)

And hey, I wanted to tell ya . . . that I still haven't ressumed Life as it Comes. Pardon me. 😳 And, that's so very cruel of you . . . you haven't been reading any of my stuff, mean gal!! 😆

-Kanky

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago