Setting Free.......[Poem] - Page 5

Originally posted by: crazilycrazy

Hi Mahak, Hey.

You are a very prolific writer and I really admire your style.Do you verse regularly? Thanks a lot yaar. Nope, i use verse only when i write poems. Thanks for admiring my style.

I like the flow of the poem,basically the subtle hinting in the background describing her predicament. Thanks a ton! Glad u liked that.

Anyways,in the very last para the girl says she wants to set her soul free...by jumping off the cliff?

Death is better than the life I live?

Maybe in her given circumstances...but it is my belief that whatever be the circumstances,sucide can never be the right option.Will jumping off the cliff set her soul free,will it not bind her soul in the subsequent life as well? I guess no. Jumping off the cliff won't set her soul free, but it would only ease her soul from getting stains. Suicide is never the best option for sure. But in her case, she was an innocent girl who got into all this due to people. she hates it obviously, and when cheap men don't care for her and do such things, then she feels hurt. Yesterday night was enough for her, she couldn't bear it any longer. That's why she attempted suicide. As for her, death was better than dying every single night.

This was just my POV.I ramble a lot :D .....All in hope of constructive critisism. Criticisms always make me improve for better.

btw Have you read Brida.Its a book by Paulo Coelho. Nope, i haven't. How's it?

Gosh, em totally spellbound. . .What to say, its just out of this world. . .Just so superb!!

If you have anytime, please read my first OS and tell me about it. . .I really want your opinion on this:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1511152