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Posted: 14 years ago
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the beauty of this poem is that it comes right from your heart and is able to touch hearts of many. I don't know, but maybe it's just that I look beyond everything or I am just an emotional fool, I was so lost in it.

One day, I was logged in my yahoo account. An invite popped in front of my computer screen. It probably was meant to be that I accepted it by mistake. The person was online and started chatting. At first she asked me my gender. When I told her I'm female, she said she was little disappointed but still she was happy that I talked to her. I'm 15 years old and still learning a lot about this "real world." She asked me if I wanted to do (you know the "p" word). I goggled the word and felt disgusted.
I told her, "I'm sorry but I think you got the wrong person. I'm not that kind of girl. I know you must have your own reasons for what you are today. I'll pray to god that you get your Mr. Right who will love you and take you away from the hell you are living in." She didn't reply back and I still have her in my contact list but even if she's online, she never says anything.
I don't know if what I did was right or not.
After reading your poem, I felt so sad about girls like her. I am a fragile, gullible, and a soft-hearted person. It's really hard for me to say no to anyone and people often take advantage of it. I know they do but in a hope that I'll be paid off, don't say anything. However, I would never suggest anyone to be like me; weak.
If you want to live in this world, you have to be strong. Never let anyone take advantage of you. Being nice is one thing but being so nice that people start taking you for granted is another. Anyways, I hope I didn't bore you with my long lecture. I don't know why but just felt like sharing it. Thanks for the pm. This poem truly made my day. Thanks for writing it. 😊
Edited by cornelia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
it was a beautiful poem!!!wonderfully written!!

divya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Mahak,
this is simply beautiful
loved it

-Tasheen-
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Fantastic poem mahak! Really terrific! I love the way you use words! :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
mahak jaani

first of best of luck for your exams sis

and don't worry yaar

my prayers are with you always

as for the poem it is fantastic yaar




i love it a lot

it is really touching yaae

as usual i love ur work a lot

great job

and u are the best

loads of luv

mahima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
superb and amazing!!!
really a gr8 job 👍🏼
do write more...
and all the best 4 ur exams
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
grr88 poeemm..
really mesmirizingg...
guuuddd jobb..
thnks for da pm..
do writee moree
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
ife snatches all my happiness,
And in return gives me sadness.
It fills my heart with utter pain,
My soul was dirty with stains.

mahak i am very happy to see your pm in my inbox
i think i don't need to explain why i choose these lines mahak ......
lovely poem
mahak u explain very well and beautifully
and i love it plz write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
beautiful poem Mahak 👏👏👏
i m speechless
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
wow mehak awesome poem very gud
thx for the pm

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