Death Talkies: Wheel of Time [Apr/04 P66]

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#231

Hey Sookie,

Hmmm... as always said by you each one differs in their perception. Agree on this. If everyone sees the same in everything then where does variety exists and it becomes monotonous. She is just in-sane. May be liked someone or may never be. Every coin has two sides. Can anyone deny this?

Nice one Sookie. Sorry for the delay.

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#232

Hung out to dry: comment

(noo.. i don't wanna comment..! 🥱)

Uhm, nice, and she's still gonna sign the paper?

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#233

Reveille: comment

The title is suiting the text (from my point of view)

And, ya, nice concept to write about.

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#234

er.. sorry i shouldn't spam ur thread worthlessly... 😆 So i'm writting the comments of the older chapters or stories on this post.

Bounce:

ah ok, i thought at first it was a girl (or a woman) who was narrating, now i can only imagine that its a man who's talking to himself and studying carefully his feelings and her features.

This was almost "not dark" till the last paragraph, and the little dark dots that the swearwords convey.

Ok enough.

Heartland:

aahhh.. 16!! i would get freaking nervous wid one cup, but not coz of the caffeine that i cud have swallowed but coz of the fact that coffee isn't healthy; u know.

Heartland... sweet title. XD

And bitter text development, or scene, or whatever u may like to call it.

In this one, i'll keep the last sentence, or the last two sentences to make sense. 'Cause those r the most similar words combinations to what i beleive in: desiring someone doesn't mean that u love him/her, love is a lot more of things and feelings.

The Inmortals:

no lol.. I dont feel this has got any connection wid that "sparkling vampire brigade" as u call it.

This noble and hideous character is a more realistic vampire actually, bloodsucker suits it more.

Ok.. so, he wanted to end up wiv the thing that caused him feel somethin? Actually, even after killing her he kept almost feeling something. But never mind, he'll just slowly forget it.

Doppelganger:

Ok, either i don't understand this one even after reading the comments and replies, or either i unconciounsly don't want to get it for some reason that i'm yet to come out with.

1st, the title.. 🥱, didn't find any matching word that cud give me a hint about its significance.

Anyway, typing in some conclusions to make it easy, first i thought u were talking about a certain work, there's no doubt that u describe ppl working, but who?.. or better said, ppl working in what? this text cud be applied to every job in world? i don't think that there's no job in world that cud make u and ur life happy and satisfied. I know nothing is perfect but..

And.. honor and honesty have no real meaning? Sorry but for me, they have it, no matter how depressed i am i cannot leave beleiving in certain things, or I wud have tried to suicide more times that years i have been living, very probably.

But ok, i think i may have digressed a bit (or a lot) but i just wanted to assure myself about this.

What about the P.S.: beautifully written, if you wrote the dictionary, many ppl wud have more interest in reading it and thus, better vocabulary.

Call of silence:

woah, amazing title.

oh my god... she's dead, i know, me typing this looks stupid but.. well i'm kind of still accepting the fact.

Well, the starting is like, not dark, realli peaceful and welcoming. Like if u have reserved the most revaling part for the last lines.

Feel bad for her, at the end she cudn't meet her (their) objective.

btw Sookie, this is your style of writting? or u write happy endings too?

Recoil

aww.. poor he.. cudnt she have kissed him just once, for the last time? but she didnt want, and what wud be a meaningless given-by-force kiss?..

But then again... did it have to be a kiss?.. well, what else cud he think about at that moment..

So.. a rupture, nice done writting it in verses, and expressing it all wid less words, it just makes it, more suitable.

ahm.. btw, something that i often can read in here "Guys cry too"

Code of Conduct:

haha i commented on this one, i think saying something like "job is better than school", i think that cud be tagged of subjective too, human nature makes u crawl for what the neighbour has, or what u just gave away.

Nicely writted, anyway. I guess its a thing of barely fifteen minutes to half an hour, and there r many things in there (her thoughts and memories, the presence of that man, and getting a bit drunk.., and leaving the man to himself... etc)

Anyway, i think i shud leave now, if it makes some difference to u, i have been like 2 hours in this thread, reading stories or chapters or whatever; comments; typing; looking for definitions and translations and well, enjoying afterall, the beauty of words.

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Hey Sookie,

Hmmm... as always said by you each one differs in their perception. Agree on this. If everyone sees the same in everything then where does variety exists and it becomes monotonous. She is just in-sane. May be liked someone or may never be. Every coin has two sides. Can anyone deny this?

Nice one Sookie. Sorry for the delay.

Hi Prasanthi,

Thanks for your comment. :-) No, I cannot deny your statement. I think that is one statement which would bring an argument to stalemate.

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

Hung out to dry: comment

(noo.. i don't wanna comment..! 🥱)

Uhm, nice, and she's still gonna sign the paper?

I think she signed it! :-)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Girl_2007
Reveille: comment
The title is suiting the text (from my point of view)

And, ya, nice concept to write about.

Thank you archana,...

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#238

I had to revisit all the stories once more to respond to you.

What can I say Archana? I am really, really touched by your gesture. Spending two hours reading and commenting on this thread for which I am so very glad.

I am very glad that you liked few of my stuff here and that you deemed important enough to write about your perception on them. For that, many thanks.

To answer few of your points:

- This is my style of writing yes but this thread is specifically for non-happy writing. Angst I believe is the driving factor and for a write gives too many opportunities to explore. Dark themes are not very easy to write but they are easily found in our lives. I write humor and quite serene stuff in fan fiction section. I keep tragedies for this thread alone. Example: Search for "Revenge of Brother's Grimm" in FF section. You will be in for a surprise :-)

- In Doppelganger the analogy is perhaps lost on you as you are a student and is not absorbed by the corporate culture. If you have worked, then it must be at a really good place. Honor and honesty surely has lost its meaning in certain aspects of work "ethics" its not what I believe in. Its what I see around me. That is the difference I see.

- "Guys cry too" Why not? Are they not humans? I cannot understand the stereotype that people seem to have towards men. For me crying is just a natural reaction to an emotional trauma. If the guy does not cry, then I would see him as an un-caring person. Now would that not be a bias?

Again thanks for reading and commenting Archana.

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: Sookie*
I had to revisit all the stories once more to respond to you.
sowiie...

What can I say Archana? I am really, really touched by your gesture. Spending two hours reading and commenting on this thread for which I am so very glad.

it was realli a pleasure.

I am very glad that you liked few of my stuff here and that you deemed important enough to write about your perception on them. For that, many thanks.

well, not few, but all actually 😊

To answer few of your points:

- This is my style of writing yes but this thread is specifically for non-happy writing. Angst I believe is the driving factor and for a write gives too many opportunities to explore. Dark themes are not very easy to write but they are easily found in our lives. I write humor and quite serene stuff in fan fiction section. I keep tragedies for this thread alone. Example: Search for "Revenge of Brother's Grimm" in FF section. You will be in for a surprise :-)

that one sounds interesting, besides i think i was willing to read that time ago, i will do it now, thanks for reminding me 😃

well, and it just depends on the mood in which u are, sometimes writting comedies might be easy, sometimes not, for example.

- In Doppelganger the analogy is perhaps lost on you as you are a student and is not absorbed by the corporate culture. If you have worked, then it must be at a really good place. Honor and honesty surely has lost its meaning in certain aspects of work "ethics" its not what I believe in. Its what I see around me. That is the difference I see.

Fine 😊

I think, i shall wait till i finish my studies and get some job to really judge it, instead of insisting on the beliefs of my imagination, well, and some things are hard to find, or hard to be noticed.

- "Guys cry too" Why not? Are they not humans? I cannot understand the stereotype that people seem to have towards men. For me crying is just a natural reaction to an emotional trauma. If the guy does not cry, then I would see him as an un-caring person. Now would that not be a bias?

Lol, i was just naming few of the facts and happenings that i have noticed in this thread. Yes, they do cry, i know.

Again thanks for reading and commenting Archana.