Death Talkies: Wheel of Time [Apr/04 P66]

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#151

Oh me!! Why did she do that? Uffff... all her emotions are so beautifully unfolded. The pain was felt all through the read. An awesomely written one Sookie!

Quote

@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

Reserving my space again.

Edited my comments on pg 18

Edit>>

bummer! everything was going great till the end, why do i forgot how these pieces are themed to end. humans are strange - its hard to say what happiness comes in the form of- but seemingly she probably had everything besides that- even an office on the 45th floor wasn't enough- because she wasn't happy from within. thats my reading...

Edited by olive_green - 15 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#153

hey sookie*
another lovely one..
u have put out the emotions of that lady in a very nice way,she was hurted physically and mentally too but she tried to get comfort in words and conversation with a stranger she met in the lift....
but she could never say that to him how much she needed him...and have ended her life....but still posted a letter to him..
hope i got it right!!
good wishes,,,
sri:-)

Quote

Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

Ooooohhh!! Recoil was so sexy :D i swear, i was grinning throughout, KNOWING you'd give it a drastic end, better than the flow through out it...victorian witch :D i laughed on that! :)

Code of Conduct: Hmmm...loneliness CAN be a bitch, but only if you dont ignore its existence, like she stopped caring...being single...hmm! :D time, as aria said (YES, i go thru your comments too :P)..its a moulding of people..from one form to another as it crosses by! hmmm....nice read!!

yet to read the latest...but well :) u were nice enuff to comment straight away, i shall follow suit :P

Kiran

Quote

Mridhula

@Mridhula

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

very nice...she obviously was hurt in her life and she needed help; although she didn't spell it out. she felt relieved, at least during her conversations with him, and she isn't able to tell him that he helps her in that way. her emotions were very well portrayed.

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: olive_green
I am not spamming

**reserved**
😊

Edit>>

I really wished this was longer...has to be one of my favorites- just the sheer irony- people are mere puppets in the hands of time..love how she makes a statement by paying for her drink....this one's going to stay in my mind for a while

Hmm...True...you summed up pretty well! Nothing left for me to say...

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Oh me!! Why did she do that? Uffff... all her emotions are so beautifully unfolded. The pain was felt all through the read. An awesomely written one Sookie!

Thanks prasanthi. :-) Maybe she just got tired of pretending everything is alright..?

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey sookie*
another lovely one..
u have put out the emotions of that lady in a very nice way,she was hurted physically and mentally too but she tried to get comfort in words and conversation with a stranger she met in the lift....
but she could never say that to him how much she needed him...and have ended her life....but still posted a letter to him..
hope i got it right!!
good wishes,,,
sri:-)

Hello Sri,

Thank you. Yep, you got it right! :-)

Sookie

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Pebblez
Ooooohhh!! Recoil was so sexy :D i swear, i was grinning throughout, KNOWING you'd give it a drastic end, better than the flow through out it...victorian witch :D i laughed on that! :)

Code of Conduct: Hmmm...loneliness CAN be a bitch, but only if you dont ignore its existence, like she stopped caring...being single...hmm! :D time, as aria said (YES, i go thru your comments too :P)..its a moulding of people..from one form to another as it crosses by! hmmm....nice read!!

yet to read the latest...but well :) u were nice enuff to comment straight away, i shall follow suit :P

Kiran

He he...I thought Victorian Witch was a very nice touch! I used it and also used the word "mock" in the same sentence :-) Gimme some credit here! *cough*NJ*cough*

Yeah, its always matter of time when you have get over something; be it people or an emotion.

Well, still waiting...

Sookie

Quote

Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Mridhula
very nice...she obviously was hurt in her life and she needed help; although she didn't spell it out. she felt relieved, at least during her conversations with him, and she isn't able to tell him that he helps her in that way. her emotions were very well portrayed.

She escapes from her daily life when she spends few minutes with that stranger.
Thanks for your comments.