Vibhaart OS : my first try

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Everyone,
Ok so its the first time am gona write about Vibhart and as they are my favourite jodi in the show and dont want to ruin their character with a bad writing so whatever it is...please do let me know if you liked it or not and give me advices to write in a better way next time..

The story start where it end in the precap of the last episode of this week...which is the end of the party Parth waking up and fighting with Sid..i will start from there...

Utkarsh : Parth bro leave him !
Charlie : Parth leave Sid what are you doing ??
Thanks to all boys effort they succeed in getting Sid and Parth appart :
Charlie : whats wrong ???
Sid : aray isse poocho ! Mujhse kia pooch raha hai ! I dont know whats wrong with him
Parth : dont act smart with me Siddhart Rajput tu achi tarah se janta hai ke tumne kia kiya hai !!
Sid : acha ?! Kia kiya maine ?! Bata to sahi !!!
Parth : tumne meri drink mein alcohol milaya !!!!
All the boys were shocked even Sid was : kia ? Yeh kia bol raha hai tu ??
Parth: dont act smart !! I know yeh sab tumne kiya hai ! Me chorunga nahin tumhe
Parth come close to Sid and all the boys get them appart again.
Sid : maine kuch nahin kiya ! Party mein sirf soft drink arrange ki thi maine ! Alcohol kaise..?
Parth : jhoot mat bol !!!
Sid : then dont believe me ! I dont care !!
Utkarsh : Parth bro dekh tujhe galti lagi hogi kiuke party mein alcohol tha hi nahin...maine bhi drink li thi aur mujhe kuch nahin hua
Parth : Utkarsh mujhe koi galti nahin lagi ! Meri drink mein alcohol milayi hai usne ! Tabhi to...

Parth start reminding of what he did last time, how he met Vibha, how he touch her hair and how he told her about his feelings..
Utkarsh : tabhi to kia ?
Parth : kuch nahin chor tu nahin samjhega
Utkarsh : Parth bro..ruk

Parth left in anger from there. All boys dressed up and get ready for a new day in the prestigious school of Warrior High. At the mess, all were eating Parth's eyes were looking for Vibha but she was nowhere...Parth left for library to get some peace of mind..he was feeling so embarassed how will he face Vibha after all he said to her yesterday, what she must be thinking of him...so much questions which answers were with Vibha..

Parth enter the library no one was there, he starts looking for a book when finally he found one he put his hand on it but another hand touch his to take the same book.
When he turn on his left he saw Vibha..she was soo beautiful..she was looking at him surprised...Parth suddenly remind of how he told her she was beautiful and how his heart beat faster when she came in front of him, in fact it was happening...his heart was beating really fast..he unconsciously put his hand on his heart as if he wanted to calm him down, seeing this Vibha remind of last night when he put her hand on his heart and the words he said..seeing Vibha's face he remind exactly of the same and put his hand down..Vibha was leaving when Parth stopped her :
Parth : Vibha Maam
Vibha stop and turn she couldnt say a word all the moments she spent with him where coming in front of her eyes..Parth come closer and say : Maam i...me apko kal ke liye...
Vibha didnt let him finish : its okay Parth
Vibha start leaving but Parth stopped her again : maam !

Vibha stopped again closing her eyes why wasnt he letting her go..why they have to talk about that..Parth come in front of her, Vibha opened her eyes and seeing him she was feeling embarassed she was his teacher..she had to act as so..but the moments they spend...
Parth interrupting Vibha's thought : Maam i am sorry about last night..i wasnt in my normal state..and i want to thank you for not telling anyone about it i promise it wont happened again..Maam i know i crossed the line but i..
Vibha left without a word...she didnt know what she could said...but before opening the library door she look back at Parth who was staring at her and she said : yes you did wrong Parth you were drunk which is not allowed here in Warrior High..i hope you wont do that again...otherwise...
And she left Parth was shocked...she didnt say anything about what he said last night...why ? Why she protect him ? She was truely a very nice girl...and so beautiful...parth remind last night and a smile start appearing on his face...what was that ? His heart beat come along this sweet memories and make him remind of the effect his Vibha maam has on him...

End for now...
Please do say how it was

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ankusanu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...jst wow...
I loved it
Short...simple n sweet...
K i guess we hv same fav 😉...
i met u in BB forum..
So i guess a ggian ur ...
Btwn i love veebharth..wld be glad if u
Cum here everyday..wr vl rock together...

Btwn do write more on veebharth 😳
Starwalkers thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written. Simple yet wonderful.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written. Hope C.Vs use your ideas.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Simply wow..
Short n simple..
Really looking forward for more..
Tc
Semeira thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

Wow...jst wow...
I loved it
Short...simple n sweet...
K i guess we hv same fav 😉...
i met u in BB forum..
So i guess a ggian ur ...
Btwn i love veebharth..wld be glad if u
Cum here everyday..wr vl rock together...

Btwn do write more on veebharth 😳

Waow thank you for all the compliments..
maybe..yes i am a GGIAN by heart i will try my best to come everyday buddy😃
Semeira thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all for the compliments...i will make another try😃

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