vibharth ! OS ! PART 21 updated pg 36 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
i vote for outside date 👍🏼😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: henryst046

i vote for outside date 👍🏼😳

tysm dear...I will write on outside date..hope u will luv my work😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Anybdy else...who wants outside date or date in school...I got 1 vote for outside date😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 9
recap-kamini got exposed...vibha faint...parth to know vibha lied to her...
now...further...

in medi room...
utkarsh was there and asking abt her health...suddenly a student comes and gives a get well soon card to her...

vibha-utkarsh...wats this going on...i mean i heard u students have complaint abt kamini maam...who did this...
just then Parth enters...

utkarsh-maam...we students did nothing...all was done by Parth...if he had not complained then dont know wat would next kamini maam had done to you...we didnt had the guts bt parth did it...we all students dont like her...she doesnt understands our prob rather she blames us...

vibha-wat have u students ???
utkarsh-nothing much...parth went on the platform and gave a mindblowing speech that nobody said no...infact whole batch stood and was quite...was thinking that he nevr speak to nybdy had raised his voiced...he laughs...😆 he is giving shocks these days to us😆

vibha-wat...was shocked...literally he did it ??? she was staring at parth bt parth was angry on her and she could sense that...she knew he wont utter a single word to her now...she has to break the silence😊

parth-utkarsh...we shud leave now...let her take rest...giving him a look that y he told her abt this ????
before they both were abt to leave...

dadi-surprise😊
all the 3 togethr dadi u r here😛

dadi-yaa...i just thought to give u surprise visit...i didnt knew in my second visit i will meet u in medi room😲 bt thanx to Parth utkarsh and those students who managed it😳

utkarsh-dadi u brought balusahi sweets this tym too...i luvd it😛
parth-giving a pat on his head...giving a look wat r u doing..is this a way 😡

dadi-its ok parth..y u r scolding him...i like it...even i like u all gel together😉 yes utkarsh beta...i brought it😉

vibha was staring at parth...
dadi noticed it...there is spark...her face lights up wen she or ny of them are around eachothr...wats this he is a bit angry on her and vibha is tnsd...definately sumthng has hppnd..i need to sort out😳

parth utkarsh excuse themselves and leave...

that day passed...
vibha couldnt talk to parth..she was desperate to talk to parth and dadi could see everythng...

next day...
it was another beautiful day😳
Vibha was feeling far better...
parth utkarsh was too present...

anvesha-m sorry vibha...watevr kamini did...i know its wrong bt u shud have confronted me abt this bt thanks to Parth who told me...well m sorry to disturb you vibha.. there is a prob

vibha-sure maam...u can say me...
anvesha-see vibha...u know that our school does charity and last month u went bt this tym you have to go coz i cant trust kamini now...risabh kartik to be present. here..moreover u have to go further to hospital for check up...i wont take risk...as doc recommended so i will glad if you do my work...

dadi-yup she shud go...she will feel better and i would say send Parth too with her...both will manage well😊
anvesha-u r right...sending her alone wont be good...parth is responsible one...
so Parth just go and change ur clothes u r going to orphanage and help ur maam in hospital for check up...

parth-ok maam...he leaves

dadi-in mind...now they will have tym to solve their prob😉

they were walking...
vibha-parth...u r still angry 😭
Parth-i didnt said nythng ??? not looking at her
vibha- u r angry...otherwise u would have said me..scolded me bt no..u didnt...
parth-its nothing as such...we reached the orphange...

vibha-told the lady that the parcel has arrived and told peon to kp it..go and inform anvesha maam...we are going further...will come back soon...

peon leaves...

both reached the hospital bt during that phase...there was a pause..both didnt uttered the word...she was upset that he is not even looking at her...
i felt at all along...
we are gonna end fast
faster than the light

painful trace end
we teared alot
we are still crying
we wont stop !!!

our life is our enemy
it teared us apart
its not fair
but thats alright !!!

i have a hope
we will meet someday
if its not in this life
may be after we die
hope fully will meet

she kept staring him...he sensed she was really hurted by his action...he too looked at him and they had their eyelock...which said everythng bt he still didnt responded...

they reached the hospital...

in doc chamber...

doc-so wat relationship u have with her ?
parth-didnt said nythng
doc-ok means u guyz are seeing eachother...means boyfriend...cool...so mr...
parth-Mr Parth Samthaan
doc- ok..she is perfectly f9...nothing to worries...just tkcr that she takes her proper meals...she vei weak..no medicines required...


vibha and parth both came out from the hospital...

vibha-parth...i seriously trying to talk to you and u r not even responding...

parth-wat ???

vibha to cheer up parth...

vibha- parth letz go there...pointing towards a sunset spot
parth-we will be late vibha...looking at her..i cant tk risks😳

vibha-nothing will happen...letz go...she holded his hand tight and forced him too come...
vibha-bhutta...she screamed...she rushed at the bhutta stall...said bhaiya make it 3 ???

parth-vibha y 3

vibha- 2 for me and one for you..she said by giving him her special smile on which he had fallen...

they sat on the ground looking towards the sun...

vibha-was eating like wen sum1 gets their fav things u forget everythng...slowly slowly she shifted towrads parth...who was sitting a bit distance coz they had respect for eachother and wont cross the line that wont affect their friendship😊

vibha- m sorry Parth...i know u are angry on me...
parth-m not angry...m just hurt that u didnt even tried to tell me truth...u dont even bothered that how left out i felt...i felt that u dont trust me...

vibha-its nothing as such parth...u know that i trust you more than myself...she shifting abit more...the gap was not there...its just that i feared how will you react...well i liked it u did for me..u exposed kamini maam...i fear of losing you parth...

parth-looking into her eyes...she was abt to cry bt he kept his hand on her shoulder and said m sorry i overreacted...well u know vibha i cant see you in pain...i promised u that i will be there for you when you need me bt that time i wasnt...

vibha-parth...u alwz stood for me..see we are here...
parth was satisfied and finally he gave his special smile which he alwz did for his lady love😊

vibha-wats ur plan next yr
parth-wat pln
vibha-next year u will pass out...u will go away far from here and i will be still standing here all alone..said in sad face 😭

parth-who says...u will be all alone...will go together...will marry..have kids...wll have a small yet beautiful house where will have a pet dog...cat...balcony everythng...i wont let you leave here alone...

vibha-her face was lighten...wat kids..u have already decided so much...u remembered i love cats

parth-afcourse i do...dont u remembered our washroom locked moment...
vibha- yup...u were in towel and that basin tap got broke..we were wet..she excitedly said coming so close that they could hear eachothers heartbeat and feel their breathes...

vibha-realised wat she did now..
parth-i think we shud leave now not to let her feel embarassed..

vibha-chnging the topic...the sun is abt to set...i dont know abt the future bt i can say dont miss this scene :)
u never know wen will get to see this scene nymore...

"life me jitna bhi try karo.
kuch na kch toh chootega hi
toh jaha hai wahi ka maza lete hai na"

she touched his shoulder and said...see how beautiful it looks...

as the sun was setting...that yellowish...orange rays were falling on them making them more beautiful...
in short...the view was like sun was hiding away slowly and a beautiful couple"s shadow was reflected on it :) yes it was vibharth...they had their chat...they were not behaving like student or teacher rather a future hubby with his wifiy

they were lost into each other...they were abt to kiss...hardly their lips had touched...she closed her eyes then a water droplets falling on them...breaking their first kiss❤️
yes it was raining...


precap-will vibharth reach WH asap or not...for that wait for next part...

i would love to know ur ideas and criticism...i wont mind it...if u want than can pm me...i wont feel bad...m just trying to make u feel connected and happy by reading my OS...i will waiting for the critixism and suggestions 😊

ty
ankita or anki😊
hope i was entertaining

m not writing long one coz i feel u peeps dont want it









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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
OMG !!!! that was such a wonderful update👏👏👏👏👏
So romantic, so beautiful and so well written loved it.
I hope they never reach WH😆 and stay together always
Please do continue soon...very good story keep it up
Edited by Angevil786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg soo beautiful..😳😳
perfect timing fr dadi entry😉
oh dadi ko sab pta hai.😉😆
that bhutta and sunset part was dann lovely and that dialogue superb one,😳😳
waiting fr the next😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another amazing part. I am liking how you are incorporating scenes from Warrior High into your OS. Waiting for the next part. Hope Parth could be a bit more romantic, his in a rush to go back to WH, rather then spend time with Vibha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Such a beautiful part it was Anki 👏
I LOVED IT TO THE COOOREEE!!!❤️

it is fantastic elastic and plastic you know?!!😃😃

Don't bring them back to WH 🥱
Parth is so cuute in this 😆

I am falling for your OS daily 😆

Continue soon and Thanx for the PM👏
Edited by Helping_angel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Angevil786

OMG !!!! that was such a wonderful update👏
So romantic, so beautiful and so well written loved it.
I hope they never reach WH😆 and stay together always
Please do continue soon...very good story keep it up

Tysm dear...m glad u luvd it 😳 lol they will reach wh for sure 😆 yup they will stay togethr...yup next part wil be updated asap dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansinarang95

omg soo beautiful..😳😳

perfect timing fr dadi entry😉
oh dadi ko sab pta hai.😉😆
that bhutta and sunset part was dann lovely and that dialogue superb one,😳😳
waiting fr the next😃😃

tysm dear...m glad u luvd it😳 these grannies knows evrythng from before😆 ty dear..that dailogue mine fav one😳

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