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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 21

recap-vibha and parth had a candle night dinner on school terrace...

Now...

Vibha was very happy and she decided to confess to parth,she woke up,got ready and wore her white kurta churidar with a beautiful leheriya dupatta,she wore her bangles,round ear rings.

On the other hand parth was thinking that how vibha going to react and seeing him tensed from far ankita sees him and smiles and come towards him...

Ankita-hey champ ! wassup ! in which world you are...in deep thinking...

Parth-hii anki ! nothing sweetie !

Ankita-ohoo ! sweetie ! r u alright parth ?

Parth-yeah ! not again..m not in a mood !

Ankita-ok ! tell me whats the problem ? dont lie from me atleast "raising her eyebrow"

Parth-just tensed abt vibha maam !

Ankita-why tensed ! now everything is good ! bdw how was the date with her ?

Parth blushed and ankita teased him-dude u r blushing ! whats the matter !

Parth-it was awesome and was lost in night sequence of date !

Ankita sat beside him and said-your expression says you had a blast and best memorable one !

Parth came to senses and his smile turned to sadness...

Ankita-now what happended ?

Parth-look...i dont know how to say ? bt what i am feeling is very geuine one...

Ankita-i know what you want to say,you want to talk about vibha maam ? i know Parth what you feel for her !

Parth-i dont know whats this feeling is bt i always feel happy around her,i like when she talks to me,share her problems,best part is she taught me to calm down,not to get angry easily and on silly topics...

Ankita- you are in LOVE Mr PARTH SAMTHAN with Miss VIBHA ANAND

Parth-blank !

Ankita-yes my strongest buddy you are in LOVE with her ! ok, tell me do u get upset when she doesn't talks to you or get angry,when she is upset you get more upset than her ?

Parth-yes and its obvio to happen because she is my besti and i care for her alot !

Ankita-look champ ! i dont know much champ but "those little things your crush or the person likes you does for you,it makes you happy,it makes your day ! when they talk to you everyday or not even talk to you but are able to see you and it brings a smile on faces,when you are ill or upset or going through pain..they equally feel the pain or say they feel more pain than you go through.They can do anything for a smile,they are rude,harsh sometimes because they want us to be strong.They bear our scolding infront of others,they protect us like a baby never letting us know,you dont care about the world when they are beside you,you dont want to end or time to pass and wish to spend more with them.They cry,you cry more! !! this is love dear ! you are in love with most beautiful lady on earth !

Parth was in deep thoughts "those flashbacks where coming infront of his eyes that how he gets angry when anyone says ill about her,how he faught for her self respect during boxing match championship" "how he ended the blackmailing of kamini maam on her" "how he got angry and wanted to kill Neil because how he dare to touch her" "how he use to get jealous of Risabh Sir when he use to be extra Nice to her" "how he was sad,shattered when she didn't talk to him,those arguments the next way of jungle night" "he remembered how she use to encourage him,indirectly made him to study harder,how she took care of him when he was ill...etc..."all memorise were coming back and those beautiful lines she spoke everytime" he summed up all and then said "yes you are right Ankita "i am in love with her" "he was smiling...blushing "he was looking the most happiest man in this world"

Ankita-yes dude,now no thanks ok ! now duffer just go and confess it to her before anyone does it !

Parth scratching his head !!!

Vibha was walking in corridor looking for parth and what she heard gave her a shock and her smile fades away with teary eyes...

Parth hugged ankita and said "you are too good for anyone...I LOVE YOU !

Ankita-ok "I know that and "I LOVE YOU TOO" (little did ankita knew that vibha heard this and misunderstood it)

Parth saw vibha and tried to stop her,explain her but vibha went from their with teary eyes...

They broke the hug...

Ankita-what happened parth ?

Parth-nothing,i was trying to stop vibha maam but she didn't listened and went (he didn't said he saw her crying and didn't wanted to make anki feel bad because he knew if by chance any reason she is coming in between them she will back out and wont come back,,,he didn't wanted to lose anki too ) he said "may be she got work so she left"

Ankita-i know parth you are lieing to me but the fact is "you havnt told her about our relationship to her till yet" "i know you dont want me to get hurted so you lied,dont be so good Parth "this world is not good as it seems" "if you aren't going to say her then i am going to say the truth and i am ready to bear consequences but i cant let you guyz be separated" she said in mind looking at parth and smiled and left.

Parth searches for vibha in library but coincidently he hears risabh Practising to Propose Vibha.Parth is shocked that Risabh likes Vibha and wants to marry her,he is tensed but suddenly Parth hears someone entering library and sees its vibha" he hide on other side corner of room not to know risabh that he heard him but could clearly sees vibha and vibha too saw him !!

Parth tries to stop her but she doesn't listen him,instead seeing him,she controls her tears and remembers that during examz to start he said her "he has got a lady,whom he always wanted to be her wife"

Parth was standing back of risabh and risabh saw vibha but not parth and asked vibha infront of Parth "vibha will you go on a date with me"

Vibha makes an expression that she doesn't care for Parth anymore and says "yes" but inside vibha wanted to say no and wanted parth to react and stop risabh from asking her out but "NO he didnt and left from their broken thinking...

Parth was thinking "yes whats wrong in risabh sir"

(kaisi teri khudgarzi...

Naa dhoop chune na chaon..

Kaise teri khudgarzi..

Kisi thor tike na paon (2)

He keeps walking slowly in corridor and says "he is handsome,settled"

Ban liya apna paigambar...

Tar liya tu saat samandar...

Phir bhi sookha mann ke andar..

Kyun reh gaya...

He says "he can finance her family too"

Re kabira mann jaa...

Re faqeera mann jaa,...

Aja tujhko pukaare teri parchaaiyan...

Re kabira maan ja...

Re fakira mann jaa...

Kaisa tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya...

He says "he will keep her more happy and take care of her alot,unlike me who gets angry on silly things,i am not even in a condition to help her out" but his heart says stop thinking such things Parth "you love her and how can you let her go with someone else,you dont even know whom she likes,may be she loves you too then ?

Tooti chaarpai wohi..

Thandi poorvai raasta dekhe...

Dhoondhon ki malai wohi...

Mitti ki suraahi raasta dekhe...

He says "i can only love her,console her or help her in school but this is not reality,to survive we need to earn and she needs that,she wont be waiting for me next 7yrs "

Kaisi teri khudgarzi...

Lab namak rame na misri...

Kaisi teri khudgarzi...

Tujhe preet puraani bisri...

Mast maula,mast kalandar...

Tu hawa ka ek bavandar...

Bujh ke yun andar hi andar...

Kyun reh gaya...

Seeing parth shatterd utkarsh says "ankita we need to do something for him"

Ankita-no utkarsh ! now only Parth can do...yes we can make him cheer up but confession only Parth has to do" and i guess its happening because of me...i am going now to vibha maam and saying the truth of my and Parth relationship"

Utkarsh-are you mad ! how can you think its because of you happen,it can be different reason too,if parth comes to know this then he will be broken more,u know him right ? he never share everything with everyone except me,you and vibha maam in this school,he cares alot for us and now we need to do something to cheer him up !!

Re kabira mann jaa...

Re fakira mann jaa...

His heart kept saying "listen to your heart not mind" "dont let her go,didn't you see her eyes,she was hiding her pain"

Utkarsh and anki went towards Parth...

Utkarsh-what happened Parth ! why you looking so shattered !

Parth-he looked at utkarsh and ankita,nodded in No,said "Risabh sir has asked vibha maam for date and moreover maam said "yes" that too infront of me !

Utkarsh-its ok Parth ! risabh sir has asked for date only not asked her hand for marriage ! cheer up dude and vibha maam is too good for anyone,it was obvio to ask her out !

Parth looked at anki and said "its all over"

Ankita-no parth...it can be a normal date !

Parth says them "No,he said them what he heard in library and Risabh Planning to Propose her and her reply too and said vibha maam is not aware of risabh sir Proposal"

Anki and utkarsh-shocked !!!

Ankita-look champ,relax,she has said yes for out and we dont know whom she loves and it can happen that she says NO to risabh sir !

Utkarsh-correct and looked at ankita and signalled we need to do something !

Ankita-nodded in yes to Utkarsh.

Parth-i need some alone time,leave me alone guyz...

Utkarsh-ok ! we are leaving right now but we will be bck and i cant see you shattered you are my Big bro and i care for you "

Utkarsh and ankita came aside and talk...

Utkarsh-why didn't you told parth that vibha maam too love him ?

Ankita-NO ! let him know by himself and if we had said him before then he wont react much infront of vibha maam ! we all know that whomever Parth gives his heart or care most he can do anything for them and vibha maam is his love,so dont worry,he will confess his love to her !

Vibha in library (tears rolling down ) why me,i have left my career for my family,i found my love in Parth and too taken away,why ! does i dont have the right to live for myself ? why didn't you stopped me Parth ?

Tere aane se meri zindagi rangin hui...

Jo sukhe patte ki tarah bikhari thi...

Tune mujhe jeena sikhaya...

Naa jaane kabh mujhe tumse mohabbat hui...

Main khwaab dkhti rhi tere saath zindagi bhar ka...

Par kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha...

Tum aaye they kuch dino k liye...

Aur dil todh k ankhon may anson de kar chale gye...

Yeh keh ki abh jaane ka waqt hogya hai...

Aur phir se meri zindagi berang hogyi...!!!

She remembered their beautiful moments,dance,teasing,whenever she was about to fall he use to catch her,his smile,his change,songs and everything...

Precap-parth to sing a song,vibha goes with Risabh on date !

Thnk you and I am really sorry for late update,I was busy so couldn't get time to post...hope you all like it😃

Thnk you to all my readers and the ones who demanded any scenes in my OS..hope I had fullfilled it as you all wanted😃

Much love ! Tc

Ankita

Edited by anki01 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a brilliant update !!!!! Waow ! Well done Anki you did an awesome job i really enjoyed reading it.
Bechare Vibharth misunderstanding hogayi...poor them..you describe sooo well Parth emotions, the way he slowly realise that he is in love with Vibha...great job Anki..

And i love the intact mystery of Ankita and Parth bond...its really awesome..until the end of the update we are hooked because we are desperate to know whats the bond between the both..very well done Anki..

Rishab asked Vibha yuck !!!! Stay away of our lady love please !!!! Stay with your Kamini maam spare our Vibha...

In resum very well done..its a brilliant update..bohot interesting wali full of emotions and misunderstandings lekin koi nahin saab theek hi hoga after all writer is the sweetest.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update anki 👏! Two corresponding jealousy tracks 😲 !! Hopefully the confusion will be over soon 😉. Parth seems to be flirtatious in your ff 🤣.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part👏
continue soonish😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow that was fab..
the way ankita helped parth realize he truly loves vibha was what best-friends are for..are they best-friends or something else?? coz i guess so from ankita's talks😲
why did those idiots have to say i love you and i love you too after the talk😡 bechari vibha ko rula diya😭
then vibha said yes to rishabh coz she listened to her mind and not her heart aww
hope parth listens to his heart atleast and wins her back!!😉
anki and utkarsh are really awesome friends..hope they make a pair soon😆
kabira ohh my fav sad song😳👏
parth sings oh i am eagerly waiting but not for rishabh-vibha ki date👎🏼 (hope it getts spoiled🤣)
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Angevil786

What a brilliant update !!!!! Waow ! Well done Anki you did an awesome job i really enjoyed reading it.

Bechare Vibharth misunderstanding hogayi...poor them..you describe sooo well Parth emotions, the way he slowly realise that he is in love with Vibha...great job Anki..

And i love the intact mystery of Ankita and Parth bond...its really awesome..until the end of the update we are hooked because we are desperate to know whats the bond between the both..very well done Anki..

Rishab asked Vibha yuck !!!! Stay away of our lady love please !!!! Stay with your Kamini maam spare our Vibha...

In resum very well done..its a brilliant update..bohot interesting wali full of emotions and misunderstandings lekin koi nahin saab theek hi hoga after all writer is the sweetest.

tysm dear 😃 m glad you loved it :) yes everything will be ok soon...next part or the last part😃 Parki bond is still a mystery😃
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Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

Nice update anki 👏! Two corresponding jealousy tracks 😲 !! Hopefully the confusion will be over soon 😉. Parth seems to be flirtatious in your ff 🤣.

tysm dear alot😃 yup confusion will be over soon 😃 hehe..Parth only flirts with anki n vibha😳😃 abit flirty is good😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

nice part👏

continue soonish😊

tysm dear alot😃 m glad u luvd it😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

wow that was fab..
the way ankita helped parth realize he truly loves vibha was what best-friends are for..are they best-friends or something else?? coz i guess so from ankita's talks😲
why did those idiots have to say i love you and i love you too after the talk😡 bechari vibha ko rula diya😭
then vibha said yes to rishabh coz she listened to her mind and not her heart aww
hope parth listens to his heart atleast and wins her back!!😉
anki and utkarsh are really awesome friends..hope they make a pair soon😆
kabira ohh my fav sad song😳👏
parth sings oh i am eagerly waiting but not for rishabh-vibha ki date👎🏼 (hope it getts spoiled🤣)
continue soon

Tysm alot dear 😃 I loved ur detailed reviews...I love reading it..hehe Parth & anki relationship mystery...aww you want Utkarsh & Anki to be Paired soon😳 kabira song is my fav too...haha parth not to sing song for risabh-vibha date...hehe..letz see what happens next :)😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow anki 😆
No one describe parths emotion like you 😆
Awesome part ...

And anki uttu pair is really interesting😉
Can't see vibha cring .. Bahot bada MU hogaya 😭

Thanks for the pm

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