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Posted: 10 years ago
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So guys, I am one of the silent members of the forum. I really love the relationships going on in the show that I just got inspired to write. One of the relationships that really got me intrigued was Vibha and Parth. They have some great chemistry. now I know some of the members aren't really gelling with the idea of a Teacher-Student forbidden relationship. But guys what fun and interesting is a show without some dark and forbidden layers. There is a lot of potential and freshness in this couple. For a change the teacher in the equation is neither male or in their late 30s to 40s. Vibha is only a 19 yr old, still a teenager. I know that doesn't justify a teacher-student romantic relationship, but emotions are emotions, right? I just hope that cv's tread carefully on this topic. Well sorry for the whole lecture and bhashan, here is a preview of my ff.

Poora dukh aur aadhaa chaand

Hijr ki shab aur aisa chaand

Din mein vehshat behal gayi thi

Raat hui aur nikla chaand

Kis maqtal se guzra hoga

Itna sehma sehma chaand

Yaadon ki aabaad gali mein

Ghoom raha hai tanha chaand

Meri karvat par jaag uthe

Neend ka kina kachchaa chaand

Mere munh ko kis hairat se

Dekh raha hai bhola chaand

Itne ghane baadal ke peechhe

Kitna tanhaa hoga chaand

Aansoo roke noor nahaaye

Dil dariya tan sehra chaand

Itne raushan chehre par bhi

Suraj ka hai saaya chaand

Jab paani mein chehra dekha

Toone kis ko socha chand

Bargad ki ek shaakh hata kar

Jaane kis ko jhaanka chaand

Baadal ke resham jhoole mein

Bhor samay tak soya chaand

Raat ke shaane par sar rakhe

Dekh raha hai sapna chaand

Sookhe patton ke jhurmut par

Shabnam thi ya nanha chaand

Haath hilaa kar rukhsat hoga

Us ki soort hijr ka chaand

Sehra sehra bhatak raha hai

Apne ishq mein sachcha chaand

Raat ke shaayad ek baje hain

Sota hoga mera chaand.

- written by Parveen Shakhi

Parth completed reciting the poem. He didn't notice a girl standing in the shadows with tears in her eyes. He got up from the bench and headed back to his dorm. Vibha came out of the shadows wiping her tears she remembered the first she saw him. He had this lost and lonely look in his eyes.

The second meeting was the shocker. The eyes spokes volumes of anger and hurt. His grip on her shoulders wasn't what hurt her. His look of unrestrained emotions assaulted her senses. Never had she seen such expressive eyes on anyone. Those eyes called at her, crying for someone to listen. They shook her to the core. But what she didn't understand was why he didn't like accepting help from anyone. When she had asked around about why the fight had happened, she found out that some of the boys were bullying Utkarsh. Parth got angry and intervened. But when Utkarsh gratefully went to dress his wound, he wouldn't accept help. She had to forcefully give him the medicine.

Vibha couldn't understand why she became weak meeting his eyes. He is her student. Though they had only a 2 to 3 year age gap, she was still his teacher. She had no business having any feelings besides responsibilty towards him.

To be continued...


Please forgive any mistakes. Please do leave feedback so that I can improve. Love you all!!!

P.S. I have encountered many issues of plagiarism before in the forum, I had to really build up my courage to post work here. Please I beg of you, don't plagiarize any person's work. It's beneath your dignity.

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cooljav1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey I really liked it good start 😊 plz do continue I would really love to read more and more 👍🏼
Parud26 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is a great start! 👏 and good on you for packing up the courage and posting this story👏
im still trying to muster up the courage to do that myself 😆
anyways, I hope you update us with part 2 soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start :)
Awesome :)
Continue soon :)
PM me :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWESOME 👏
finally an os on vibharth
plsss continue soon:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mindblowing... a great start.
Very happy to see a story finally on my vibharth.
i just love them.
PLEASE DO CONTINUE SOON.
I cant wait anymore to see how the story unfolds further.
The poetry tht parth recited was just too awesum. I know the 'CHAAND' he was talking about or was referring to is none other than VIBHA.
continue soon.
would love to read more.

Saloni


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