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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 6
Harjeet left shortly afterwards and he took Raj with him and his men. Manu sat in her room recalling what Amba said to her.

"Manu, ab jab Gunjan ki shaadi teek tai hochuki hain, main nehi chaati ki kuch ar garbad ho. Rajveer Bajwa sirf ek ladki chaate hain. Woh ladki kon hain, muhje koi farak nehi padta, lekin uski shaadi Raj se hone chaiye. Uski shaadi kar ke agar us Bajwa ko kuch din ke liye hum shamal sakte hain, toh phir main samaglungi ke us ladki ne hamare kuch kam pe aya. Ek ladki ke zindegee hamari maksat ke age nehi hain.", Amba said.

How could Raj ask to marry her. He knew that condition was impossible to fulfill. She wasn't an ordinary girl, who could get married and be his wife. She had her own responsibilities. Was this Raj's plan to bring her secret out?

Manu's phone rang to break her train of thought. It was Raj, "Before you overthink things. Listen to what I have to say. I liked you Manu Pawania. I liked you a lot. Before you were Preet, you were my friend. That doesn't change that you betrayed me and lied to me throughout our friendship. In spite of that, I expect you to do something for me, as a favor. Be my wife and help me remove Mohini permanently. Push her to the furthest ends of the earth, that she can never find her way back to my family. Think of it as your payment for lying, and in exchange for helping you get Aman for your Gunjan didi. Since we aren't friends, I expect this as retribution for everything I have done for you these past few days.", Raj said.


"Raj, yaar...ask me for anything else. How am... I supposed to be your wife, it will put my secret in jeopardy. What would I say to my mother? Why would I be gone, where would I go?", Manu stuttered. She didn't understand why he was asking this of her. Just hearing him say the word wife...even angrily, made her remember how he held her in his arms and voiced his attraction to her when he thought she was Preet.

"I don't know anything about how you'll handle being Manu, Preet... I just know that you will do this. Or else your secret won't last very long", Raj threatened.

He wanted Manu to be his wife, even if for a few days. He wanted her, to understand what he felt about her in his life. There was no reason for her to be the girl he married. Raj truly wanted to end the Bajwa-Pawania enmity but there was no reason for Manu to be a pawn. Except that he wanted her to be a pawn...in his games.

"Raj...paar...tumko mere se shaadi kyu karna hain. Hamare pind mein bohut saare ladkiya hain.", Manu tried to argue. In her heart she didn't want to him to think of all the other available girls. She remembered how she felt when asking her mother of how she would look in a sehra. Manu wished she could be a bride but knew it was beyond the realm of her reality.

"Manu, don't argue anymore. Tomorrow tell aunty that you'll be going away for a few months. Think of any excuse. Or even tell her the truth if you have the guts. Just know that you need to be gone for a long time because her coming around and asking questions will cause problems for you.", Raj ordered.

"Teek hain Raj", Manu said. She never thought her yaar would ever risk her secret for his own personal mission against Mohini.

But it seemed like the easy going Rajveer was gone for now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 7
Manu held out her hand to knock on Raj's door and stopped herself. She couldn't do this...and she began to turn until his door opened. Rajveer rested her eyes on Manu, she was wearing a simple pink churidar with white and pink bangles. Beautiful he thought. However, she didn't look like how he expected her to look today.

"Raj...I can't do this", Manu said. Raj replied "Manu, you can't back out at this moment. Everyone is waiting for us downstairs and you know what will happen if you don't do this." "Nehi, yeh baat nehi hain Raj", Manu said shyly. "Then what is the problem?", he asked feeling exasperated. "This saree you gave me. I have never worn one. I don't know what to do with this. Maine socha ki Mohini ya Pammi toh madat nehi karegi. Kuch aur pehen nehi sakti main?", she asked. Raj didn't say anything so she decided to just leave. There should be a servant who would help her...

Rajveer pulled Manu into his room and swiftly closed the door shut. He was wearing sweatpants and a t-shirt, with his hair still wet from showering. Taking his phone out he began to furiously type. "Raj, what are you doing? I can find someone to help me with this saree, don't worry...", Manu said. Raj placed his phone down on the dresser and leaned it to face him. He started playing a youtube video where a girl was describing the methods of draping saree. "Manu, follow this video...and you can drape this by yourself", Raj said with a smirk. He felt extremely proud of himself for his brilliant idea.

"Ab jao Raj, main pehen kar aungi", Manu said as she pushed Raj out of the room. "Yeh toh mera room hain", Raj teased. Manu ignored him and started draping her saree as per the video.

to be continued... guys I like updating but I sometimes lack for inspiration. Please comment with thoughts, ideas, anything to inspire me. If you want the story to go in a certain direction please comment your ideas or pm me. I don't mind direct requests if I feel they work with what I want the characters to do.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sana




Originally posted by: .Suchi.


I am asking your name.. 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5
Wow!! Raj in angry man mode!!
excited to see how he will convince Harjeet to marry Preet!
and mystery behind this move unfolds!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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All right!
awesome update dear...
Raj made her to agree with his terms otherwise her secret will disclose!!

Raj is such a mastermind ..hitting two birds with a stone...in order to get rid from mohini...he will marry preet!

Mannu/Preet is in big trouble now...

Waiting for more!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 7
I am really loving this story...superb job dear and claps for your dedication !


Raj is too much...He solved her problem ..and showing his Rajgiri
on mannu

Eager to know how will marriage take place!


Keep updating dear!!

waiting for more!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice name Sana

Dear don't get demoralize ...just continue your work ..I am with you!
u know..I am quiet funny type of person just like Raj..😆..so I don't know how to give thoughts or ideas for your story because of the track ...but don't worry, I would suggest some ideas😎...It is up to you whether you like it or not!😃



1. May we get involve some character in their plan...sukhi/pagal pammi or anyone...to irritate that Mohini !😆..(.I want to her to get mad in Bajwa's house 😡..)

will tell you for good ideas!😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Now I'm confused where is mannu exactly in the story in the Pawania house or in Bajwa's ?... from part 1 to 4 I though she was in the bajwa house..😒
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Btw I'm enjoying this .nice story 👏 please keep writing. Please update soon 😊.
P.s. sorry for any grammatical mistake I'm not good in english. 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I imagined her to be in the Pawania house, for the marriage she is at the Bajwa house


Originally posted by: rani7131

Now I'm confused where is mannu exactly in the story in the Pawania house or in Bajwa's ?... from part 1 to 4 I though she was in the bajwa house..😒

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