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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey just read the entirestory gr8 part cant wait to know who this mystry guy is cont soon



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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow love the ff di!!!!!!!! epec part 3!!!!!!! it was my fave!!!!
and in part 6 my fave part was the kis!!!!!! why wont that kind of stuff in the show????????? its almost always the kiss and something/someone always interupts i hate that!!!!!!!! hey do it in movies why not in the show???? but anyways love this ff!! thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: indianchaklii

+ reserved + will read and edit; can't wait [:

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wow great update [:
i loved the beginning, awwwh a kiss how cute
please cont soon



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushe khan

so cute.....please post more



thanks, will try to post the rest soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: diva*angel

wow love the ff di!!!!!!!! epec part 3!!!!!!! it was my fave!!!!

and in part 6 my fave part was the kis!!!!!! why wont that kind of stuff in the show????????? its almost always the kiss and something/someone always interupts i hate that!!!!!!!! hey do it in movies why not in the show???? but anyways love this ff!! thanks



thanks for reading 😊 really appreciate your comment 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok i continued this on word and now i'm posting it. I thought really hard who to put as the new entry but i finally found someone. Hope you guys like this part 😊

Part 6

The guy smiles and starts walking. He stands in front of Tanya. Tanya looks at him but doesn't say anything. (oh btw the guy is played by Jatin Shah)

Guy : arre tum to mujhe aise dek rahe ho jaise pehli baar mil rahe ho

Tanya is puzzled and doesn't know who he is. He leaves and everyone is left wondering who he is. Then they see him returning, he holds a box. Tanya looks at him and then at the box, he opens it and a couple is dancing, there is a cute music playing. Tanya smiles and so does he, the guy reaches in his pocket and gets a chain with a pendent that is in a half heart shape and says "st nds". She sees the chain and remembers something.

"Flashback : A little girl and guy sitting by a tree, the girl looks sad.

Girl: mujhe chor kar jar rahi ho?

Guy: hmmm, jaana pare ga, mummy ne kaha hai

The girl looks down and is sad, she gets up and runs away. The guy wants to go behind her but just stands there. After a while he feels a hand on his shoulder, he turns around and sees the girl.

Girl : apne aanke baand karo

Guy: kyun?

Girl: aakhe baand karo na

He closes his eyes and she takes his hands and puts a box in it. He opens his eyes and looks at the box and then at the girl. She is smiling at him.

Girl: jab bhi tum mujhe miss karo ghi tho yeh music box dekhna aur phir mujhe tumhare zaamne dekhe ghe.

He opens it and sees the dolls dancing, he reaches in his pocket and gets a chain. He gives the girl one piece and keeps one piece to himself. They hug. Flashback over"

Tanya looks at him and hugs him. everyone is stunned. She shows him the chain which has the words Be Frie" written on it.

This is the chain:

Both of them laugh and are practically in tears, Tanya then realizes that people are looking and wipes away her tears. She drags him and introduces him to Raj.

Tanya : Adi, Yeh mera pati Raj hai, aur Raj yeh mera best friend Aditya hai.

Aditya : Hi, nice to meet you

Raj : Same here

They shake hands. She introduces him to everyone and they all seem pretty happy with him. Aditya gets a call and leaves for a while

Raj : Tanya?

Tanya : Hmmmm

Raj : tumhne mujhe aditya ke bare mein kabhi kuch nahi bataya

Tanya : jaanti hoon, woh kya hai na ke adiya aur mein bachpan ka dost hai. Ek din usne mujhe se kaha keh uska family delhi mein shift ho rahi hai, I was very sad and the day that he left I gave him the music box and he gave me a chain. Itne saalo ke baath phir mila hai mujhe, you can't imagine ke mein kitni khush ho. Jab mein chota tha tho ussi ne mujhe sab sikaya. He's a great friend

Raj : tumhare chehre par yeh muskurahat bohut acchi lagthi hai

Tanya smiles and hugs him

Raj : by the way woh hai kahan?

Tanya : use ek call mila aur chala gaya. I can't wait to talk to him, I have so much to ask him.

Tanya keeps talking and raj looks at her lovingly. He then keeps his hand on her mouth and pulls her closer. They share a eye lock but are disturbed by rajdeep, trishna & adi

Aditya : wow kya scene hai, aisa lagta hai ke real life nahi par film chal rahi hai

Rajdeep : absolutely right

Adiya takes Tanya and raj's hand and brings them to a chair, he makes them sit and look at both of them

Aditya : kya Jodi hain, very beautiful.

Both Raj and Tanya smile.

Adi : how did you two meet?

Tanya looks at raj and remembers how he married her and under what circumstances. She feels a little uncomfortable, raj notices this and holds her hand.

Adi : kya hua? Itni emotional kyun hua?

Tanya : aisa kuch bhi nahi hay, yeh khusi ke aanso hai, kyunki aaj mujhe mera dost mila aur yeh party ek aur khusi ke liye hai

Adi : khusi? Kaunsa khusi?

Raj : Tanya pregnant hai

Adi : what? No way, really? Congratulations

He hugs raj and congratulates them both

Tanya : accha yeh baat chor, mujhe yeh bata ke tum kaise ho? Itne saal ke baath mil rahe ho..aur tum itna badal gaye ho. I can't believe it

Adi : kafi handsome lag rahi hoon na

They both laugh

Adi : jaante ho jab mein delhi mein tha to meine tumhe bohut miss kiya. I looked at that music box everyday and remembered you, our talks, everything. I just got a break from everything and came straight here. First I went to your house but no one was there then the neighbor told me that everyone was at this address and here I am. Lekin mujhe yeh nahi pata ke tumhari shaadi ho chuki ti aur ab yeh bacha. I'm very happy for you.

Tanya : I missed you to, tumhari bohut yaad aayi. accha tumhari koi biwi ya girlfriend hai?

Adi gets shy and looks down.

Adi : ek ladki hai par woh mera saath nahi hai

Tanya : Saath nahi hai?

Adi : use to yeh pata bhi nahi hai ke mein use pyaar karti hoo

Tanya : naam kya hai uska?

Adi : abhi nahi batao ghi, yeh din tumhara aur raj ka hai

He smiles and gets up. The music starts playing and everyone is dancing. Raj and Tanya get up and also start dancing. Everyone is having fun, dancing and partying.

Ends


Edited by Candylover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow loved the enry of adi gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow loved the enry of adi gr8 part cont soon



thanks glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
ok part 7 is almost done....will finish it and upload it tomorrow 😊

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