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Sharona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sonu4ever
Sorry fo the late reply sweety . 😳
Amazing part.👏👏

I like the bond between Deep and Yuv . Both are too good. 😆

Here it looks that Yuv is the boss . 😆

Tanya is pregnant, what a wonderful news . 👏

Cute sister act, i liked it. 😳

Take ur time for the updates hun, i'll def wait sweety 😊. Best of luck with shcool. It starts so early for u

thanks 😊 yuv is not the boss...he was waiting for rajdeep cause rajdeep is always late...so he went to surprise him 😊 maybe i will write the next part this weekend 😊

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Sharona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: *Natasha*
Nice ff! Can't wait to read further....btw i was gonna start a new ff with the same title lol looks like i'll have to look for another one now! lol

thanks 😊 i wasn't sure of the tum se hi title 😆 but i like it with this story

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Sharona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

i wish i could reply to you all but i have to go..all i can say is thanks for the comments everyone 😊🤗

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Candylover

thanks 😊 yuv is not the boss...he was waiting for rajdeep cause rajdeep is always late...so he went to surprise him 😊 maybe i will write the next part this weekend 😊

Oh ok 😆

Ok sweety take ur time 😊

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Sharona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

sorry for not updating, just been busy with school anyways here is the next part 😊

Part 4

Yuvraj : what surprise?
Tanya : yuvraj, uhm.....uhmm
Yuvraj : Tanya? Kya hua?
Tanya : can you come with me for a second?
Yuvraj : uhm yeah sure
They go to their room. Rajdeep comes and stands next to Trishna. Trishna smiles and looks at Yuvraj & Tanya walking away. She turns around and bumps into Rajdeep
Trishna : rajdeep? what are you doing here?
Rajdeep : kya?
Trishna : tumhe sunai nahi dehti?
Rajdeep : trishna tum bhi na kuch bhi bol dethe ho, i'm trying to figure out what's going on
Trishna shakes her head and laughs
Trishna : ok sit down, and i will tell you. Tanya pregnant hai
Rajdeep looks shocked and happy at the same time
Rajdeep : woh maa bane wali hai? tumhe kaise pata?
Trishna : she just told me
Rajdeep : usne pehle tumhe bataya, raj ko nahin?
Trishna : mein uski behen hoon
Rajdeep : par raj uska pati hai
Trishna : tum pir mujhse lar rahi ho
Rajdeep hugs her and smiles
Rajdeep : no my darling wife, acha yeh sab choro aur mere saath chal
Trishna : where?
They get up and walk towards Yuvraj & Tanya's room. They stand outside the door

Inside Yuvraj & Tanya's room

Yuvraj : kya baat hai tanya?
Tanya : mein tumse kuch kehna chaahti hoon
Yuvraj : ok
Tanya : yuvraj mein..uhm mein
Tanya looks at him and then takes his hand and places it on her stomach. yuvraj looks at tanya and then he figures it out. he screamed out of happiness and hugged tanya, he then lifted her up in the air. he twirls around with her and then he puts her down. he goes to open the door and as soon as he opens it and rajdeep fall down.
Rajdeep : uhm trishna meri contact lens kahan ghir gaya
He pretends to look for his contact lens and raj just looks at him, after he realises he isn't fooling anyone, he gets up
Rajdeep : main bhi na, pagalo ki tarha lens dun rahi hoon, i don't even wear them.
yuvraj, trishna & tanya all laugh at rajdeep
Rajdeep then hugs raj
Rajdeep : congrats yaar congrats, tum papa bane wali ho, congrats
Yuvraj : thanks rajdeep
Rajdeep : we have to throw a grand party
Yuvraj : grand party?
Rajdeep : yes grand party, no objections, after all meri yaar baap bane wali hain, were going to have a party
All 4 of them smile

enjoy this part, see you next time..don't forget to comment if you like or don't like 😊

Edited by Candylover - 16 years ago

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Sej

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

aww so cute loved it bout the contacts thing lol loved the update plz wrtie more soon =)

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-DhruviBear(:

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

I love them all, sooooo cute.

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Sharona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

sorry sorry sorry for not updating..school takes a lot of my time but here is the next part...hope you guys like it

Part 5

Tanya is getting ready and Raj walks in. He sees her and is completely lost in her, Tanya looks in the mirror and sees Raj looking at her, she smiles and he smiles back. Tanya gets up but her saree is stuck on the chair, she tries to remove when raj's hand touches hers. They have a eye lock, raj takes the saree out but keeps holding her hand, she tries to go away but he stops her by holding the end of her saree.

Tanya : Raj, please let me go
Raj : Kyun?
Tanya : I still have to get ready
Raj : I think your looking beautiful

Tanya smiles and blushes, Raj starts pulling her saree making her come closer to him. When she is close he puts her arms around her and gives her a kiss, Tanya turns around to kiss him but just as she is about to kiss him Sanjana comes in

Sanjana : oh my god, sorry sorry sorry i didn't knock, party mein sab inthezar kar rahi hai, so put a pause on this romantic scene aur party ke baath phir continue, ok
Yuvraj : Sanjana ek minute do, Mein ready nahi hoon
Sanjana : ok but hurry up na

Sanjana leaves smiling and Tanya goes away to get ready. Raj looks at her for a minute and then leaves to get ready.

Raj's Outfit :

Tanya's Outfit :

After a while both of them come walking down to the party. Everybody looks at them smiling.

Trishna : wow Tanya your looking beautiful
Tanya : Thanks di
Rajdeep : congratulations once again
Trishna : yeah congratulations

Tanya sees her parents and goes there
She hugs her mom and dad
Kul : congratulations beti, aaj ke din tumhare liye bohut hi khaas hai
Mr. Kohli : jaanti ho ke hum kitne khush te jab hame yeh news mila

He hugs tanya and kul smiles. Then they hear Rajdeep's voice and everyone turns. He has the mike and is saying something

Rajdeep : Ladies & Gentelman, aaj ke party bohut hi special hai kyun ki mera bhai, yani ki raj aur uski patni jo mere bhabhi hai are excepting their first child. so i would like to ask raj and tanya to please join me here

Raj & Tanya come walking and see a big cake and on the cake "Congratulations Raj & Tanya" are written. Rajdeep hands Yuvraj's the knife and together with Tanya, he cuts the cake. Everybody is clapping while they feed eachother cake

They lights go off for a while then there is a spotlight and some dancers come out. Raj & Tanya both wonder what is happening when they see rajdeep standing in the middle singing "Let's party from the movie God tussi great ho" Trishna also joins him after a while http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvi_Y5rKUZc while their dancing and singing Raj & Tanya are having fun by looking at them. when the song finishes everyone claps and Rajdeep & Trishna look at eachother, Raj & Tanya notice this and tanya takes raj's hand and goes to stand next to rajdeep and trishna. Tanya makes a sound and both rajdeep and trishna look at tanya who is laughing, Trishna realises why she is laughing and smiles nodding her head. Rajdeep goes by Raj and whispers something in his ear, Raj smiles. The music starts, Both Rajdeep & Raj smile while Trishna & Tanya are left wondering why they are smiling. The music is playing and Rajdeep & Raj start singing "Mast Kalander from Heyy Babyy" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5kCCQOaIP7U&feature=related

(read the lyrics - It' Imp cause in the lyrics you will see who is singing and there is a suprise so please read the lyrics)

Raj & Rajdeep : Dil da mamla hai dilbar
hone na sone hai is dil par khalbali dil ke andar
Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar-2
one two three four Dil da mamla hai dilbar
hone na sone hai is dil par khalbali dil ke andar
Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar-4
Dil da mamla hai dilbar hone na sone hai is dil par khalbali dil ke andar
Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar-2
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar-4
Raj : meri nazar toh tumpe pare toh man me tha tera sedhai
Rajdeep : betabion ko lahat mili toh dhoor hui meri tanhai
Both :mere rang ka tere roop ka hai aasar tere surroor ka
mere haal se mere dard se tu hai bekhabar
dil da mamlaaaaaaaaa
Dil da mamla hai dilbar hone na sone hai is dil par
khalbali dil ke andar Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar-2
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar-4
Rajdeep : teri hawa mein jadoo hai ladoo karta hai mujhko deewana
Raj : meri tamana kehti hai mujhko sirf mujhe hai tujhko pana
Both : meri arsoon meri guftgoo tu hi tu hain
bas meri jasmajhoo kya bataoon
tere baghair me kitna besabar
Mystery guy enters : ohoooooooooo

Every one looks at who it is

Mystery guy : dil da mamla hone na sone hai
Dil da mamla hai dilbar hone na sone hai is dil par
khalbali dil ke andar Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar
Mystery guy : aya me aya leke mohabbat tehjanoo mujhko behchanoo
meri nazar me hai ik chera mano tum chaho na mano
meri chahatein meri rahatein badi namchami teri haskate
mere khwab hoi raat din pehta mansafar
All 3 of them : dil da mamlaaaaaaaaa Dil da mamla hai dilbar
hone na sone hai is dil par khalbali dil ke andar
Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar-2
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar-4

The song ends and everyone is wondering who the guy is. He smiles leaving everyone wondering who he is

enjoy this part, see you next time..don't forget to comment if you like or don't like 😊

Edited by Candylover - 16 years ago