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awesomee!!! 👏 keep it up!!! you think up of the best scenes!!! 👏

soz that i havn't written anything but will soon 😊

wonderful work yaar
interesting
carry on

O MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS THE BEST FAN FIC EVER!!!!!!! 👏

yea i cant wait either 😛 !! when are you continuing?

are you continuing soon? i just cant wait! 😳

i am starting now i no after a longggggggggggggg time soz


A=aryan
n=neel
v=vaidehi
m=mumjij
h=harsh
the other family member went to london(i forgot to write soz)

everyone is at the breakfast table and mumjij says lets go for picnic, everyone like the idea. A was playing around with his spoon and dropped it on the floor.
he bend down to get it and sees V n N holding hands, he got really jealous. he got up and goes to his room. V follows. A in the room is really angry and throws stuff around.

v: tum kyun ya aya, chalo(soz i am not that good at writing like the indian words in english so i hope u can understand so can u send me some words to help me write a understanding fan-fic)

A: na

V: Kyun

A: maini kya kahar ta, neel ka saat

v: oh i see, tum na neel or mujhe

A: ya

v: sweetheart don't make a big deal out of it.

A: big deal? u are my wife meri biwi ho tum

V: U just remembered now( walks way)

aryan sits on the bed n remember wat v just said and the time when she found out the he sent N in here toom.

aryan comes down n haves breakfast. everyone gets ready and leaves for the picnic(they are going to there other farm house near the river+ water fall)

everyone arrives there and V sets the picnic and goes to get the food form the car when her foot slips and N saves and picks her up and takes her to the car, all this is watched by A who is really mad.

after setting up the picnic . everyone eats and plays. then V goes near the waterfall and goes in the water and gets wets and everyone comes. aryan is playing with the water when he sees V all wet playing with the water. water drops on her waist and arms.
suddenly it starts raining and everyone is running towards the car V is running when A holds her arm and takes her behind a rock.

A: aryan choro, kaya kar raha ho

suddenly the there is a thunder noise and V hugs ayran, A loses control and starts kissing V and she doesn't even stop him. then she just pushes him and is about to go and he holds her arm and pushes her to the rocks

V: aryan mujhe jana do

A doesn't listen and kisses her againxxx

👏 i finally got to read it! thanks good job 😳