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hope u like the fan-fic

i am writing it when aryan n his dad tell neel to u no... n aryan is jealous

-x-Feeling Jealous-x-

(In A-V room), Vaidehi comes out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel casue she forgot her clothes. she is about to take the towel off to get dressed when suddenly the door burst open and vaidehi is shocked to see ayran coming in, who is too busy reading his files that he doesn't notice da vaidehi is wrapped around in a towel.

He looks up and sees Vaidehi in a towel(like one of his dreams comes ture.......lol😊) and just stares at her with his mouth opened(lol).

"Aryan , tum... can u plz got out so i can get dresses"

"why vaidehi, i am your husband.. y be shy"

hearing this vadehi gets mad and takes her sari and goes inside the bathroom.

aryan in his mind"kitni khubsurat hai, i can't belive that i never brothered looking at her"

At the breakfast table ayran is still thinking about what happened in the morning and smiles. Vaidehi comes form the kitchen with breakfast and gives ayran's breakfast to neel, which ayran gets mad at and leaves for Office without eating anything. on the other hand neel and vaidehi laugh and mumiji also comes and laughs with them.

vaidehi:mumiji aap

mumjij:ha beta, lag rahe hai ki aryan ko tum or neel saat..

neel:ha

the day passes and ayran comes back clamed.

aryan:Vaidehi, vaidehi kaha ho tum

vaidehi comes in the room

aryan:where were you, apna preme kya saat

vaidehi:(smiles) ha kyu

ayran:meri baat

vaidehi:baat he to maina maini ha, u told me to be with neel

aryan gets mad and comes closer to vaidehi and holds her tightly

vaidehi:leave me

ayran:kyun

ayran pushes vaidehi on the bed and comes more closer

vaidehi:kaya kar raha ho, choro

ayran comes closers and kisses her neck

aryan:agar maini tumhare aus ko neel k saat dehka to... bahot paas... hope u understand and leaves.

vaidehi gets up and smiles.

hope u like it sooooo far

pink-09

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Posted: 18 years ago
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w0wwwwwwwwww..awesomee..loved ittttttttttttt 😆
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awesome!!!! 👏 loved it cant wait to read the next part!! 😃 i always wanted 2 write a fanfic but i never have the time!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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is good 👏 👏 plz continue
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great jobb
continue soon 👏
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that was great, plz continue soon 👏 👏
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wow the story was great i loved it can u please continue the story more i loved it superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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thx for the lovely comments 😊
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the next day ayran is getting ready for office and is looking for vaidehi, he checks the whole house and just passes neel's room and hear's vaidehi's voice and openes the door a bit to see wat is happening.

neel(getting ready to got to office)--vaidehi, mera wallet kaha hai jaan

vaidehi:are wahi to bed par para hai, tum be na neel(goes to get it)

vaidehi picks up the wallet from the bed and is moving towards neel and sudenly she slips and falls on neel and they fall on the bed. they are looking at each other, aryan is watching all this and getting so much jealous and walks off.

Neel n vaidehi get up and smile, then vaidehi goes out the room and neel simles again.

It's afternoon and aryan goes to talk to his dad in his cabin about neel n vaidehi.

aryan: dad who neel, i swear i will kill that son of a bitch.

harsh:kl down ayran, i will think something about neel, tum apna kam karo.

aryan leaves and gets on with his work.

2 weeks past and ayran is getting really jealous. the family decide to go on holiday for 3 weeks.
they are going to their farm house in mussouire.

all finish doing there packing and get in their cars and drive off to mussouire.
all arrive and are tired and go to sleep.

ayran wakes up the next day and is looking at vaidehi, who is wearing a light pink beautiful sair(see through 😆) her hair was flying in the air cause the window was opened. she was trying to do her doir from the back then suddenly aryan gets up and comes and stands behind vaidehi, she turns around and her sair dupatte falls down and aryan just stares. vaidehi quickly pulls her dupatte up, aryan turns her around so she faces him backwords and helps her tying the dori, vaidehi's expression was like 😳when aryans figures touched her(lol)and then turns her around again casue he finished tying her doir, vaidehi is looking down with shy.

aryan comes close to vaidehi and is about to kiss her when she pushes him away and runs off

pink-09
Edited by pink_09 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hope u like it soz if to short i have alot of h/w

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