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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Iss show ki mahaan Tejo maata ka kuch nahi ho sakta but…

Iss OS ki Tejo maata teri sadaa hi jai 😆

As always this is awesome Ani 👍🏼


Dubeyji ko semaj nehin ata ki tejo mahaanta ki muhurat is the reason people run away from the show.

Jasmin is being blamed for the soaring in ratings but tbh tejo is also one of the reason despite many like her as a FL.

There are trp viewers who wants to see the strong tejo and their vote counts.

It is not necessary she has to leave fateh and be with angad . .

She doesn't need a man . All she requires to do is live for herself. Don't keep cleaning her sister's mess.

More than jasmin, tejo is annoying.

I left the show coz of her. At one time , she was my favorite character. Now i dislike the way she has been written since the fake engagement .

They tried everything to increase ratings, why not just bring a turnaround in tejo or mute jasmin

Do wonders with the sisters, ur show will rock.

Stop experimenting on the men.

I feel a sympathy for ankit and kvg.

They deserve better than this sh**.

Both are good looking fabulous actors

If i had tons in my bank balance, would have produced a show on them.

Title is

Aek chor aek sipahi😁😁😁

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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U like fatejo but i wrote on sarcastic tejo incase u are keen to read

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Ok. Do give it a try. Since u like jasrik. Let me see if I can write one on them. But a hilarious one with suspense. 😁😁


Oh I would love that. Plz write it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Those who ran away coz of the mahaan tejo , u might consider reading this short story when u get the time. U will like it😁😁

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Aniash that was fun to read, really 🤣


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Posted: 3 years ago
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RUPY RULZZZ 🤪


Originally posted by: Aniash

I left the show long back. Couldn't take the character inconsistencies levels. It's like watching a different show weekly. Recently, a member sent me a link on latest promo, i was not surprised. Already knew that Jasmin will turn virks against tejo some day. Didn't realize would be too soon. I have mentioned this earlier. The character inconsistency is the major drawback of UD. We get that in other itvs but not to this extend that characters changes in mere weeks or after just few episodes.

If this track ( which i am writing) is brought up in UD, rating will increase. Something that i wish would take place in the show. I might even start watching again if this happens. U can leave ur comments after reading



Sarcasm - one shot


Her head was spinning with the anguish pain. God! What's going on. Even a migraine is not as severe as this. She thought to herself. Her distraught mind was restless. Where am i ?? She struggled under the heavy eye lids and then realized that she was in a hospital.


A nurse walked in and supported her to sit. " Ms. Tejo, pls take this pill, it will reduce ur pain".

She obeyed instantly. Anything to get rid of the sufferings of the mind.

She struggled to speak and the nurse calmed her

"Pls rest and do not speak. U are weak. U met with an accident a week ago. A deadly tragedy. U suffered serious head injuries. The car u drove had an issue with the brakes and u rammed into a tree. U were brought into the ICU by mr. Angad Mann and he's the one who has paid for ur medical bills".

She couldn't recall a single moment of the latest events of her life.

" I can't remember anything. Who am i", she whispered nervously.

" Just relax, doctor will explain to u ". The nurse assured her politely.


Minutes later, a neurology surgeon walked into the room and stated that she suffered from a memory loss due to severe head injuries. It might return with time. Not sure how long it would take though.


A day passed

She was broken. All alone in the hospital ward. A few family members came for a visit but she couldn't recognize them

Who am i ???? Her mother, Sati sandhu advised her to give herself some time. It was really painful and absurd that her memory played an evil trick just as her destiny did to her long back when she made sacrifices for her family.


The next day

A tall, good looking muscular gentleman walked into the room stating he was her love .She was shocked and furious.


" Go away, i will never fall for u, u circus clown".

He was hurt. " I understand u cant remember me, but at least don't be sarcastic"

She interrupted angrily,

" Look, mr. Fattu, get lost. I don't know who u are. Don't irritate me. Just go away".

He was upset. " Pls don't call me fattu, i have a name. Fateh".


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She flung her pillow at him and pressed the bell at her bedside alarming the nurse who walked in seconds later to shove the stranger from her room.


Ridiculous. I am in love with this man. Look at him. She was puzzled at the same time. He looked familiar.

Just then.

A tall fair charming gentleman walked into her room and said.

" Apney bahut acha kiya tejoji. I like ur sarcasm".

She was confused. Even this face looked familiar. Both men. Do i know them

Then he continued understanding her plight.

" Tejoji, i am ur friend, Angad Mann".

She interrupted impatiently. " Yes, the nurse told me u brought me in. Thank u for everything. U paid my bills as well. How could i ever repay u???"

He interupted smiling. " Yes, u can do a favour to me. Do not return to that so called family of yours. I have arranged for an accomodation for u. Stay there peacefully and away from everyone".

She was puzzled. " Huh".

He continued'" they are selfish people . All of them. Sandhus and virks".

Then he narrated to her the recent happenings in her life adding a few more spices here and there boiling her blood that she stood up at once.

"How could i be so selfless. That is mere stupidity. I was used many times by my loved ones".

He smirked. Plan worked

He added more spice to her plight.

" Yes, stay away from them . All of them. They are bunch of selfish people. They never appreciated u".


The next day, she was discharged . Angad offered her family that he would bring her home from the hospital and before that he instigated her again.

Sandhus were having tea when tejo walked into the living room .

" Attention , ladies and gentlemen. From now onwards, u are disqualified from being my family. I despise u all. Purchase a toy plane and fly off to Canada coz u can't afford the real one. U are just a bunch of idio**. I am leaving this home where a lunatic family stays. May God spare me from being crazy. U can't handle ur younger daughter who had turned into a hurricane. I am saving myself. From now onwards my life, my way".

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They were shocked. Mouth widely opened except for one who was relieved. Her own father. Thank god now she realized that she was too selfless. At least in this way, she will start a life of her own.


Sati tried to stop her but Rupi blessed her and even kissed her forehead.

" I had waited for this day of ur sarcasm. When will my daughter realize. Carry on . Papa is always with u".


The next visit was to virks.

They were glad to see her but she remained silent standing at the entrance. They were extremely shocked with her words that fateh's grandma fainted then and there.


" Listen u bunch of selfish losers. From now on solve ur own problems. My whole world doesn't spin around u, u as*hol**. U think i am a wonder woman that i can solve ur problems . I have my own life. Useless and good for nothing. And u , my so called little sister. U carry on with ur tantrums , i care less. U are dumb as u have always been. And u fattu laal, i dislike ur face. U are nothing but a clown. U cheated me after all sacrifices that i did for ur family. Now u think i will accept u?? Blady rasc**. Get lost. Go to the jungle and become a Tarzan. That suits u more., U lunatic. Stay away from me. And u, so called mother in law, gurpreet virk, U are nothing but a selfish bimbo who can't see anything beyond her kids. And the rest of u all belong in the same category. U are nothing but bunch of idi**".


She walked away. They stood still. Couldn't believe their ears. Grandma was admitted to ICU, suffered from major shock.

Her sarcasm was unbearable. She was such a sweet girl. A major turnaround. What happened to our darling daughter??


Tejo put up in a condominium purchased by Angad. The power of attorney was transferred to her name. She was the owner of a lavish property. She didn't join college but ran her own business. A garment factory. Also sponsored by her dear friend.

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She lived her life her way . Fateh singh virk still on her trail to woo her back.

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She gave him a tough time with her sarcasm. Virks were devastated that they had no one to save them from the evil jasmin. Their saviour , tejo Sandhu drifted..

They were still puzzled. What exactly happened.


In the flight to London.

Angad took off after he settled tejo.

He smiled widely as he read her text message.

" Thank u for everything, Angadji".


He closed his eyes and recalled the events in flashbacks.


On the day of accident.

Jasmin messed up the car brakes during tejo angad marriage track when sati instructed her to purchase a few items for the marriage preparations. Angad was busy. So he informed tejo to use his car. Jasmin overheard their phone conversation in virks. Angad left his car and took off in a cab for an urgent meeting. Jasmin grabbed the opportunity. Just kill her and solve all problems in her life in a go.

Tejo freaked out when the brakes were not working as she drove speedily towards the mall and rammed into a tree. Angad's meeting place was nearby and he witnessed the tragedy . Rushed her to the hospital. Surgeon stated severe head injuries. Chances of memory loss. Angad took the opportunity to remove tejo from the mess. Instigate her against the families.

Sarcasm , the best medicine to end her sorrows and sacrifices


The end


I hope KVG's closure in the show brings benefit to tejo. The sarcastic tejo is very much required who will put everyone into their places especially virks. I will resume watching if this happens 😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
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the above post

Edited by thunderbird - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Who would be chor and who would be sipaahi in your show 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


I knew u will like this one. U never wanted tejo to return to fateh.

Everyone who ran away will return to watch if this happens 😁😁

Exactly Fateh Doesn't Deserve Tejo.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SilverBell

Exactly Fateh Doesn't Deserve Tejo.

Aree sometimes i feel they do deserve each other she is itna mahaan ki no one can do anything and i got irritated of her before leaving the show

Im sorry but even if tejo is a goody too shoes she is not a great charecter, way too forgiving , trusting. why on earth did she need to do fake engagement for those 2 idiots who insulted her, after EMA she should have left Virks, on top of that she expects everyone to be as forgiving as her.

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