She his weakness OR Thaakath!- the K-Jodi - Sukor - a Bonus. - Page 8

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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Sumi dear🤗🤗

its getting better and better, more awesome.

first thank you for the friendship day gift. its more than what we could as for.

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And the way you entwined friendship day moment in sukor moments, that entire sequence infront of library , the happiness, the meet, wearing bands, the pull , then dropping her, she turns, he waits...she caress the band..

uff..loved it.

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sukor story progress, their moments, the concerns, the little happiness, the way he searched band and wished good..

the evil faces unveiled to an extent, all falling into place slowly with respect to BN..

reading entire update

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so happy the way sukor story progressing, other things progressing but sad that this part update ended 😁


And precap... oops is she kidnapped, was he asked to bend down, are they in danger and the lines..if this what you call love, i want to love you.. omg I am

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for next part.😊


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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Thanks Sonia...

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Another fantab & fantastic update 👌👌👌 Finally SuKor told about their past to each other & SuKor love story started First time they started to feelings for each other & so inspector Ajay is alive to save too many lives Suraj shot Dr Ajay & it,s surprised Chakor also & Our clever Chakor solved powder mystery Suraj concerned for Chakor it was nice indeed all update are Superb & precap is also intriguing Looks like Chakor is kidnapped so I think next update is full of action Eagerly waiting for next update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#73

Thanks Smita

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Part 6:

Wow such a fantastic, amazing update Sumi 👌👌, perfect gift for Friendship Day👍😍😍. It's good that Suraj supervised his ancestral business with the help of friends but the unpleasant experience of his past made him aware of everything. Loved that he was happy to get her message of going out though there was an unknown feelings but an ambivalence in his heart & mind too, her smile getting the reply but Tanu's query about the message left Chakor in discomfort 😜😜 Then his coming to see her offering to take her to the quarter for her safety reasons😊😊 her getting excited seeing him & coming fast to him😁😁, It seems both were lost in each other seeing in casuals 😍😍. Then the unexpected but lovely Friendship Day celebration👌👌💓💓. How beautifully you connected the day with sukor story.👌👌 They made each other their first friend. Loved his pulling her to save, their closeness because of the biker though it may caused an accident. Then the "Palat" scene💖💖😍😍 (reminds me famous scene of the movie DDLJ), seeing each other standing , the spark of happiness on their faces was so evident that they have stared to like each other😍😍😚😚 Let's see how & when their like turns into love 😍 😜😜. But his instability of losing the band & happiness after finding it, kissing the band, concern for her safety, her caressing the band, it doesn't seem like we have to wait too long 😊😊😍😍.

It's great that finally Suraj got some clues, found some resemblances with his father's murderer & the information about these reputated businessman & they are no longer saved from the uncontrollable, desperate DCP Suraj 😉😉😀😀, but It's unfortunate that someone was watching over him & the miscreants have identified Chakor as his weakness 😔 .

Precap is quite interesting & exciting, looks like Chakor will be abducted by the evils, so we'll get another action packed sequence & looking forward to seeing sukor relationship develops in the next phase 😊😊. Over all a excellent update 👌👌, great going.Thank you.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#74

Thanks Sritama

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Fantafab Sumi di👏👏how beautifully u merged d friendship day celebrations n d Sukor story👌👌Suraj got a vital clue abt his father's murderer&tht person is closely associated with dis drag racket 2..fr sure he will leave no stone unturned to unmask d man.Loved d way Suraj smiled seeing her call😍Chakor's happiness seeing his jeep n seeing Suraj's concern for her😍how both of dem jointly said no to being a couple bt happily tied d bands to each other&accepted each other's friendship😍❤both of dem were so adorable n cute❤❤Suraj saving Chakor from that speeding bike,pulling her😍😍just a picture perfect moment❤👌Kabir n co.using kids for his dirty drug business..horrible..glad that BN is already in Suraj's radar..both d brothers days r numbered now coz Suraj will very soon show dem their right place...super intriguing precap..Chakor will b kidnapped n dey will try to harm her to deter Suraj from his investigations..Suraj accepting he loves Chakor..can't get better than dis❤❤

Eagerly waiting for d next one..it's going to b a out n out blockbuster for sure😍😍N last bt not d least belated Happy Friendship Day to u Sumi di❤❤

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Posted: 6 years ago
#75

thanks all for the lovely comments.... I am unable to reply to each and all I hold to my heart.

As promised I will be posting the updates late night..

Once I am done with my official prework I shall reply to all your comemnts.


a big big thanks to Niki, Sritama, Mai, Uma, Mahsa, Smita, Sonia for taking the time to share your lovely feedback which motivates me and also lets me know my story is sailing fine.

love you loads

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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Chapter 7 A

The De-weeding…

His eyes were growing in surprise looking at the report and understanding everything… the ugly thing happening…..

Ajay was getting fine and up as Suraj was calling him on the phone. Tanu was checking him along with his physio who told him that he is fine but to be on the guard. He smiled saying thanks.

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The District hospital

Asha’s parents had returned to their village and were literally lifeless running to Kanpur after being told about the news.

They were at the hospital and Chief was briefing them.

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Suraj’s office – the strategies

He spoke to the narcotics chief and looking at the reports he said, So my doubt is confirmed. He met the two and then called the media inside.

The boyspoke:

I came from the Gokul lodge and since Asha was coming directly to the bustop we were walking together towards the bus stop through a lane which was dark. Suddenly we were held from behind and before we could understand some thing was covered on our nose and we fainted. we don’t know what happened and woke up in the hospital here. We can vaguely remember some riverside but nothing more.

The girl cried… I don’t know what happened and if anything happened to me… She was traumatized to the core. She was consoled that she was perfectly fine in all ways…

Suraj reiterated the media present that they are fine and they donot remember nor can identify anybody or anything and so they are being sent to their village soon.

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Kabir Nath bungalow

Kabir Nath was very upset that the goodwill of Gokul Lodge has been put to stake as the boy stayed there, the name had been making rounds on social media and on TV channels. He turned to his brother and said Bhero it is very sad, how is that you are not aware of this. Bhero said, We have many lodges and many staying, though we ask for their ID proof etc and lay rules not to drink or smoke but still the younger generation are bad. He did not want Kabir to suspect any foul.Hmm he said I will tell Deeraj to be more strict, spoke the Evil.

Kabir left but said…henceforth I will also visit the lodges and help you out. He was very very upset. This brought the shade of dark on Bhero and Deeraj’s face.

Bhero turned to Deeraj and said, it will be disaster if brother knows and then he will start digging things. Deeraj do something fast… what happened to Asha..Deeraj said she is still in Coma not to worry, she will not wake up… ok but this Officer is like sniffer dog.. he will sniff and find out things.

Find out his weakness, he is single and has no one and does not believe in love or anything. A cut throat fellow you saw him he was ready to kill his own man Ajay, when Deeraj got the call and his face grew bright. He said.. we found his weakness… who??? asked Bhero. Deeraj said, that Doctor.. our guy is there…he told about both of them going from the library to the hospital… we will take care he said… be ready to celebrate.

Bhero said Deeraj ask the boys to quickly move stuff and change place as Kabir may visit the lodge and also the international clients are asking for more videos, new ones, so we have to do things fast.. there are now too many stringent laws so we need to go deep into the rural to acquire land she said… and also ensure the lands are from those poor farmers and not any popular persons. Dheeraj gave instructions to his thugs and along with another quickly got on the white van to the hospital. Few others went to the lodge…..

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The painful process of de-weeding..

Asha wokeup slowly but again fell unconscious…Ajay and Tanu was there beside.

Chakor was running to the gate to see the man fallen holding his chest. She called aloud get the stretcher. She was checking him holding his pulse when the man suddenly held her hands tight. She thought he was scared and she said bhai saab don’t panic, you will be alright trying to release her hands… he was holding her more tight…. the crowd started to gather around. The white van sped fast and before she could realise the man holding her hands stood up and quickly pushed her into the van..hitting the crowd the van sped fast…She shouted who are you?? Where are you taking me..

Suraj called Ajay and was giving him instructions… when………….Ajay heard the commotion at the gate… the doctor, the doctor… she is taken away in the van. One in the crowd quickly took a pic on his phone and noted the van number.

Giving the phone to Tanu Ajay doubled up when Tanu ran behind him… Ajay what happened she asked running behind him… I don’t know but something wrong when he quickly realized and told think Chakor is kidnapped…. She froze. He said call Suraj when she held his hands and said… please be careful, take care.. He just held hers and said I will,pressing hers… He ran but could not locate the van. He quickly asked others and the guy who took the pic gave him his phone and he called the control room and gave the number.

Realizing she was indeed holding the phone, Tanu saw the id Suraj… before she could speak…His voice was firm… and said listen to me…. She just listened and was just saying ok ok…... Tanu cried Chakor…he just kept quiet driving looking at the band on his wrist. A blob but quickly controlled himself and was busy on the walkie talkie.

She called the Chief and went to Asha’s room.

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Suraj ran quickly to his jeep giving instructions to the control room trying to locate the van. Ajay was on another jeep with his walkie talkie.. He said Suraj… when he said I know the dirty game is being played…the traffic was being cleared with announcement on the loud speakers,the van went into a subway and came through up going through wen Suraj caught the van and followed while he called Ajay and gave instructions. Ajay was surprised.. but why, he asked… Do what I say said Suraj…

Ajay reversed and went and was following a black car which came out of the subway and was going to the remote outskirts of Kanpur….

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Bhero along with his few men quickly went to the lodge and moved things…..a big van was heading towards the outskirts to the remote bungalow.

Bhero followed in a black car which is Kabir’s and had stacked few carton boxes.

He did not realise that someone was indeed watching him and called…...

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Suraj was following the white van when it stopped at a very very lonely area. He quickly doubled up and held his gun and asked the man to freeze. Deeraj got down alone but there was no Chakor!!! Where is she? he asked. Who? Deeraj acted very innocent. You know whom I am asking about Deeraj… he said… Deeraj laughed, you think you are too great!! My boss now would have got your lady…

Suraj held him and said a scratch on her…. When Deeraj teased… no no she will only be killed or may be… when Deeraj was surrounded which he did not expect as he saw only Suraj… I know where she will be but mind you said Suraj..…Deeraj laughed…if you do anything to me you know my boss will not spare your Pyaara Lover. Suraj asked his men to take him to the closed van which was parked there.

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Her mouth was gagged and hands tied.. Leave me Chakor shouted once they reached their remote place. It was a huge bungalow but looks as though sparingly used

She was tied to a chair. Bhero walked in along with his guys. She looked straight into his eyes..

So you are behind all this nonsense… who are you? And why have you brought me.. You are a coward…she said.

The thugs were angry but Bhero calmed them saying, let her speak..

He said poor doctor is going to die now he said. She said I don’t fear death and you will not be spared.. she said so you are the one behind Asha and the two youngsters state. What a sick person you are. You have drugged the innocent. He laughed yes yes.. its me….

She said you have done wrong you will be punished. He applauded her grit saying… you are too bold… but you are so unlucky as those two don’t remember anything and did you know the latest news…switching on the TV which was announcing

Dr. Chakor is missing!!! The cardio Surgeon of the district hospitalhas gone missing..

The search is on.. She saw Suraj and the policemen on his walkie talkie when a blob of tear came down… she straightened herself.. he was talking to the media saying yes she is missing we have not ruled out kidnapping but we have not received any call from anyone. We are doing our best to find her…

Next comes the flash news

The girl Asha who was in coma after being stabbed by the poisonous knife has succumbed to her injurious. She has been declared dead at the district hospital..

Earlier we had informed that the boy and the girl have returned to their villages as they could not give any clue about their dazed condition.

Nooo Chakor yelled out… No it can’t be… she said give me the phone I have to talk to my hospital.. I am her doctor…

The evil laughed… Your that officer your lover cannot prove anything… all witnesses are dead and gone….and see you are trapped here…he switched on the monitor which was showing the compound through the CCTV camera. You see we are in a very far off area and even if I kill you or do anything to you no one will know especially your lover.

She said…no no even if there are no witness and no proof, he will come looking for you. The Devil he will butcher you…He will not spare you.. but please

Let me call the hospital she pleaded..

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Far away from the bungalow was Ajay’s jeep… He called Suraj and said yes you are right…indeed she was in that black car and they have taken her inside…

Suraj said…. I know…. Watch out and keep updating me of every move….Ajay… he gulped..Is she hurt??? His voice was chocking… No just gagged and hands tied said Ajay …Suraj held his band tight…..

Ajay said looks like there are lot of thugs inside and also a huge van went inside… they are unloading something but I am unable to see. He said shall I go inside when Suraj asked him to wait for his orders.The commissioner was with him. he said he is sending force to cover him and they will be there any moment.

Suraj got the call from an unknown number... Hey officer… called the Evil….

She was given to speak…………

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Hello she said…there was a calmness on the other side…Are you ok he asked. Yes… she said Asha… he said firm she is dead…. How can that be….She asked.. before she could talk Bhero grabbed the phone.…………..

Bhero laughed Officer I know … you will not do anything to him. he is my trusted guy… Suraj said you know me I care none.. but said Bhero you care for one…I have your weakness with me… .Ha ha…. He hit Chakor on his cheeks… Aaawwh she shrieked….

His eyes turned red, fisting his hands.

she cried looking at her band.... please dont .....

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Posted: 6 years ago
#77

Action packed update

Seems Kabir doesn't know of his brother's illegal business.

Clever Suraj, he figured out that they'll move Chakor to another car.

Tanu and Anjay are getting close.

I think Asha isn't dead, it's Suraj's plan.

Loved how Sukor kept touching their friendship bracelets. Loved how you showed their growing bond: Suraj chocked from worry when inquired about Chakor from Ajay and she was sure he'll punish the gang.


Eagerly waiting for next.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#78

Thanks Sritama that's lovely

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An out n out edge of d seat thriller👏👏👏it's getting more n more gripping n highly engrossing..👌👌up until now I was thinking both Kabir Nath n Bhero r equally involved in d drug business bt now it's clear that only Bhero is d mastermind n he is keeping Kabir in d dark..Bhero calling Suraj a sniffer dog suggests that he is very much aware of Suraj's power n in high insight he is scared of him n that's why he was so eager to know abt his weakness..Chakor getting kidnapped was d biggest turning point😞 Suraj maintained his firm resolved amidst all d adversities..bt Suraj looking at d band at his wrist while driving clearly stated his inner turmoil..as always Chakor too maintained her brave,determined resolved n gave strong befitting ans to Bhero..bt Asha's death news was a shock..bt somehow I feel it's Suraj's plan..he deliberately spread d news though d media so that Bhero gets overconfident n makes some wrong calculations..Suraj is always one step ahead than d enemies😍

Due to his alertness n prefect planning Ajay chased d black car n found Chakor's whereabouts..Suraj's concern abt Chakor,him asking Ajay abt her well being ,holding his band tight..Chakor getting emotional seeing Suraj on TV..both of dem r going through d same pain..d pain of separation😢it's pretty evident that Bhero wants to use Chakor to blackmail Suraj..he wants Dheeraj's release..Bhero hitting Chakor,Suraj's eyes turing red hearing her pain,Suraj fisting his hands..can't wait to see d raging Sun's roaring entry into d villain's den to save his love..eagerly waiting to see Suraj teaching Bhero n co a befitting lesson n admitting his love for Chakor👊💪😍❤ ❤super exited to read d next part❤❤

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Not sure if he will make a roaring entry as Khatri is khatra and more of strategist type so let's see but sure it will be daring 😜😜.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nemo316

Action packed update

Seems Kabir doesn't know of his brother's illegal business.

Clever Suraj, he figured out that they'll move Chakor to another car.

Tanu and Anjay are getting close.

I think Asha isn't dead, it's Suraj's plan.

Loved how Sukor kept touching their friendship bracelets. Loved how you showed their growing bond: Suraj chocked from worry when inquired about Chakor from Ajay and she was sure he'll punish the gang.


Eagerly waiting for next.


thanks mai

yes not both the bros are bad..

@ bold black he he sure you and Niki must be happy!.. 😆 actually i didnot have AjNu in my thoughts at all...

@ bold red yes happy you are liking it...


thanks so so much for the dam quick response too.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Full on action dhamaka nail biting update sumiiii.....i love the filmy feel to it....fast paced, so more so enjoying it.

Even i had thought that kabir was involved...so only bhero is a surprise!!!

suraj's idea, tanu ajay(hee hee hee)😉, chakor maintaning her calm👏, their touching the friendship bands❤️❤️❤️all made for a good entertaining interesting read.

waiting for the update

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