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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#281

Chapter 14 A

Fantastic Chapter

Oh Chakor and Suraj awkwardness mixed with a little romance made for a cute scene

Argh !!! Shieku did come at the wrong time

but I loved how Suraj had brought all her parents valuables to her that is respectful and yet so comforting too

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#282

Superb Chapter

Chapter 14 B

Oh Ayan is so cute especially when Suraj talks to him

Girija and Chakor bond was actually lovely and both Chakor and Suraj romance

was beautiful it does seem they are now comfortable with each other

oh so the culprits has escaped will this cause any probles to Chakor and Suraj

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#283

Extremely sorry once again for been so late

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: taahir004
Extremely sorry once again for been so late

Oh dear!

Don't feel sad for being late!

Take your time!

😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313
Amazing yr...all are very talented here...👏

Thank you so much dear

Heee yes😉

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Shar456
Hello maithu ,its was an amazing story n I will miss this story a lot but maithu I don't mind for season 2 as the concept was excellent nl👏👏

Thanks a lot dear

Happy you enjoyed reading this story

Well! Let's see about season 2 as first there are almost 5 stories in waiting list 😕

Thank you once again dear

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: katheriene
Beautiful ending, no words for it🤗
Will miss this story

Thank you so so much

It's all your support

😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Beautiful ending sis..
Suraj care for chakor was awesome..
Ayan was so cute..u now sis my cousin son name s also ayan..when i see him it remembers me tis ayan..
Girija was such a amazing lady who gave her life for her children..
I just loved tis story alot like ur every stories sis..
Going to miss tis story very much..
Eagerly waiting 4 RC and ur further stories sis..
Luv u..tc

Thank you so much sis

Happy you liked the care, the love, the happiness, the cuteness...

Aww! Happy to hear that this Ayan has a great impact on you

All stories will soon be updated one by one dear

Thank you

Love you too

Take care🤗

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
first my thanks as my smile never weaned all through your story.

True what a soul is Girija true to the fact many a times our loyal workers turn our unknown bodyguards ... she is indeed the guardian angel of sukoran (well I added ayan to sukor 😉)

lovely Maithu felt so contended that they had the gruesome death.

Was the ending rushed??? no not at all as it was very very subtle, slow, lovely and steady and they have to be left in their privacy (Well I don't mind when you write about the making of the sibling when Ayan ask for 😆😆) but I would be missing Ayan's LOBBUUU, TAAARRS... awwh cho chweet ...

Hope he asks about it early (sumi na can never be satisfied with any amount of your stories.)

thanks Buddy
keep going girl

Thank you so much Sumi for these motivating words all through the story

Happy that my writing could keep up the smile :-)

Lovely name it is Sukoran (Soon you will see the combo again! ;-) )

Well! I love when people get what they deserve and according to me the villains got what they deserved and even Girija as all she deserved was their love and it will always be there

I will also be missing Ayan's cuteness a lot in this story

Let's see in future what happens!

Thank you once again

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: meshmesh
A beautiful ending to an amazing story. I'll miss it.

The villains got what they deserved.

Wish Girja didn't die but the ordeal helped increase Sukor's bond. It's fitting that she died protecting Sukor.

Looking forward to RC and don't forget TTW 😊

Thanks a lot Mai

Glad you enjoyed the end

Will not forget about TTW

And soon RC will see the lights

Thank you once again