FS: Walk With Winsomeness (Completed - 22/08) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Hi sis..

Happy Independance day..

It was a fabulous part sis..

I loved tis part a lot..

Suraj was just perfect and chakor was so innocent and cute..

Thunder scene was awesome..

Next day suraj distraction over chakor saree was very funny and superb..

The way he explained her abt his thoughts was very genuine..

Coming to the chakors question over suraj junior..lol

Really sis..i can't stop laughing after reading tat part..still i m laughing nd my stomach starts to pain..

How can such an innocent girl in tis world..poor suraj😆

The explanation of suraj to chakor abt the baby making process was so cute..😉

Omg their first kiss is hillarious..i never thought tat she will kiss him..

Overall i loved tis part a lot..sis

Eventhough here its night in india..my sleep is far away from me for waiting to read ur stories..but now also i think tat i can't sleep after reading tis hot update..

Luv u sis..tc

Originally posted by: maithu_

Hey dear!

Thanks for the wishes!

Glad you liked this part sis and enjoyed their different moments.

Sorry for hurting you with Chakor's innocent question LOL

Happy that you enjoyed her innocence.

So the kiss from Chakor is a shocker or a surprise?

I just wanted to show that she will be like this only LOL! Not knowing what to do.

OMG! You stayed awake! Sorry and thank you dear!

Hehehe hot updates!

I think I should post XHR earlier morning, without a date announcement! LOL

Thanks a ton for your love and lovely words!

Originally posted by: katheriene

Happy Independance Day

Amazing update, no words for it👏

Love sukor talk about their marriage😊

Chakor is so innocent,all her knowledge is from serials😊

Hate chakor's chacha & chachi for their behaviour towards her😡

Suraj's gesture of taking chakor to orphanage was nice😊

Suraj was distracted by chakor's saree😉

Loved the bedroom part, chakor was so naive, suraj was embarrassed😆

Loved sukor's kiss

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Maithuuu.. wow as I say I did chew my cud back and worth the wait!!!

Wow. Wow. platonic is the journey. Well just a jump before i comment on the whole -- with regards to the "junior" and the "banana" in EMI what a different shade of our Chakor!!!!! I could not hold myself and started laughing but at the same time just could feel the difference of the upbringing and novice the rural young generation go through. maai closed my eyes!!! i could still relate as going through the same in my early ages!!!

I just loved and could relate this to the show as Chakor was always so cute and vulnerable and her "self" when she is with Suraj especially the ghost scene where she was extremely innocent with the slight punch at Suraj and the way he held her... i could feel that here when he carried her to the bedroom.

Just loving this Suraj Mr. Perfecto and the innocent but the anxious Chakor who is absolutely a wonder...Ms.Naive... . as that of a adolescent where your heart thudder but your mind is so worried about what your parents say!!!...

As said earlier i like him to provide that warmth of the cocoon to the beautiful pupa who is soon going to turn into a butterfly. Give her the confidence...

Loved the way he was making her feel comfortable and also controlling his lust for her while dining.

Yes truly saree is the most dangerous one to turn on even a saint and LO here is our SR... but he is dam cute especially the thunder and watching the football scenes.

it really takes a huge effort to be calm and explain it and here the Sun is ready to tone down to give the bird the sense of becoming one by soul and body...

loved the way she wants to be his queen and also as per her showwalis want to be always thinking of him and his interests.

hahaha really liked the "disturbance with your treasure"... so sweetly you have worded it without being errotic as it would have been otherwise. Your play of words is awesome..

superb how he is taking it through and am sure this will be a beautiful poem... but I want a change of chakor into a bold and confident lady... and for a change here it is Suraj who is moulding her.

Just love it girl!!!!

Originally posted by: meshmesh

A belated happy independence day!

Loved it!

They've started opening up to each other and they're getting closer.

It's good that Chakor will start working with children, it will help her grow as a person.

Suraj has to control himself around her. Like how he's always thinking how she'll react to his actions.

Chakor is so innocent, I don't envy Suraj on having to explain the facts of life to her.

Eagerly waiting for the last part.

Originally posted by: amrutha131

This is just awesome 👏
Loving both Suraj n Chakor ❤️
Waiting to see how Chakor will be at the end of story !!

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

I m just waiting for tat sis..😉