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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Hello everyone!

How are you all?

I'm super good and excited for my vacation LOL

Just so you all know, it was difficult for me to imagine those soaps name Hehehe

I watched Madhubala and the next one I'm currently on is Udaan.

As I thought to make this Chakor a serial addict(if I can say LOL), I wanted her to refer to serials, so what I did to think about names is to think a name in English and then translate it LOL

And if you see, she will never refer to same characters as I forgot what name I used where LOL!

So you will face more new names in the rest of parts too!

See you guys!

Take care!

P.S I will not be posting TTW for now, I posted a message there! Hope you all understand!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Happy holidays..

We will wait for you with refreshing thoughts for your stories

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Happy holidays..

We will wait for you with refreshing thoughts for your stories

Thanks a lot dear!

Hope the trip help to get new ideas LOL!

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shakhu

@shakhu

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

OMG its ammmazing maithali...chakor kitne tv serial dekhti hai 😆everytime there was mention of one i was like 🤣 n there names r so typical sanskari hindi soap😆seriously i m in love with this thing in story.

Chakor is soo innocent n suraj is truly a gem of person here.this is such a beautiful love story.i m in love with this story.Already waiting for next part

P.S plz dont apolozise for long chapters😛 infact longer n longer chap r more than welcome😳.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Wow this was such an amazing chapter

the emotions of both Chakor and Suraj portrayed so well

the doubts that Chakor has but yet its no fault to her while Suraj too having his doubts

but I liked the fact that he made an attemt to speak to her and yes though their talks are very limited

but its a start and he is involving her into his life which is great

also liked the fact that he came to rescue his wife before any harm took place and Chakor having courage tells him he is her husband

I'm sorry for late comment

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shakhu

@shakhu

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Hi maithu ...waiting for ur update dear😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: katheriene
Beautiful update👏
No words for it
Chakor is so cute, loved how she is compares her life with serials😆
Loved how you depicted sukor's thought process about the marriage & the awkwardness towards each other😊
Loved sukor moments 😊
Waiting for next
Happy Friendship Day

Thanks buddy!
Glad you loved this Chakor!
Hope it continues!
Thanks for the wishes dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Fabulous👏
Sorry Maithu for not commenting regularly on ur stories,but whenever I see ur PM big smile appears on my face😃

Thanks dear!
No pbm yaar!
No need to say sorry!
Liking my writings is also a big gift for me!
I'm really glad that I can bring a smile on your face!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi sis..
First off all I m very happy to read this story..
Comming to the point...
It was awesome and brilliant work..
Omg...This story makes me crazy today..Both suraj and chakor r so cute lovable couple..
Both of thems olv was fabulous..
Especially chakor she was out of the world..how can she see this much soaps?LOL..Poor suraj without his knowledge she made him a soap hero..😆
Suraj was so cute..when chakor see him exercising,I m imagining myself there at the place of chakor..If I m the chakor there will be no security for his virginity 😉
I was smiling like a mad while reading the whole story..
I loved the way suraj hold her by her shoulder said that he came with her husband..tat line was mind blowing..I thought tat he will beat him up but poor me..
I thought suraj will do some naughty things when he see chakor half naked..but he is more genuine here..If he is a real suraj of the soap then he will do it..😆
If I can,I will say line by line of this part..but poor u sis so i stop with lil..😛
I just loved this part very very much..sis
I was thinking how u wrote tis part..especially chakor's olv..
I m eagerly waiting for the next part sis..
Luv u so much sis..❤️🤗

Oh my dear sister!
A bigy big message!
It's like winning awards having all your love and seeing your happiness!
LOL you brought a smile saying that you were imagining him at her place when he was exercising LOL
May be a bit of naughtiness is here in Suraj, may be in next part!
Do you remember the SP! That is what going to happen LOL (The saree part)

To write Chakor's POV, I became Chakor LOL! Crazy me!

Will be posting in minutes!
Read when you have time as it's night in India and you will your sleep!

Love you too dear!