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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb ending!

Chakor has grown a lot as a person. Loved her confidence with the outside world and in her relation with Suraj.

What to say about Suraj, he's a perfect husband, mentor and friend. It was interesting to see how he took things very slowly to keep Chakor at ease.

Loved Sukor's journey.

Thank you for this beautiful story!

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Posted: 8 years ago
This is such a beautiful story 👏
But d story ended 😭 I will miss this Sukor especially Chakor
Anyways, waiting for ur new stories n TTW !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maithu

sorry for being late just that caught with too much of work at work...


Also honestly the last episode just put me off and actually I just wanted to get over it and as I say always i quickly run through my eyes when i get your PM but chew and enjoy the cud back.

I must say it was like a poetry which was amazing...

the journey was so beautiful like a melodious song and as I said earlier for a change Suraj is here the one moulding his chakor.

What to say every aspect of making her understand and slowly making her imbibe, get into his soul was superbly done. the back hugs and peeks and the slow invasion of her (rather his) assets of hers was a melancholy ...

so naive she is that he had to tell her when not to kiss too (aawwh I felt that tooo cute)

and the soaps... she better stay off

hahah i started to laugh at her idea of getting a night drress when she has the most seductive saree which is ofcourse turning her man but for his control...

i liked the way "it" happened as it was i felt, was not rapid, only that ignited has to get ignited and happen... lovely

I had my high respects for him when he was so concerned about her having babies as he does not want her to undergo the pain... WOW Suraj you really won me! wish all men think like that than merely thinking as baby making machines (especially in the rural).

Loved the way he gave her the confidence to get her own identify and at the same time taking the caution in protecting her be it...

You both have truly walked and i foresee lots of Wins to the (whole)someness!!!


Great Maithu

waiting for the XRH and TTW

Take your time.

Excellent...


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Posted: 8 years ago
just loved it
beautiful story of two soulful people
speechless maithu 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful and again so Awesome Part

I've always loved stories on arranged marriages and this one by far has been my most favorite read
thank you for that !!!
I really love how Chakor always questions her hubby's actions and words while he too questions but both of them has fallen in love and I suppose this is what makes arrange marriages so solid they learn to live with doubt first then awkwardness then they become friends and finally lovers
Chakor so cute always comparing her life to the soapies , and the fact that she want babies that is indeed very cute yet so soulful too
I like how Suraj guides her how he advices on their relation and life and indeed she has found her
Prince Charming now she can live her life in blissful happiness as she found her new family who has accepted her
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Hi sis..

It was a superb ending..
I loves tis part very much..
Especially this lady omg..wat a soul she is?such a pure bliss..
Our hottiee was such a cute husband..he s really a prince charming..i want my prince charm to be like him..
His love to her was really a pure..
Poor suraj..she always makes his harmone grow with her actions as well as her reactions..
While reading every chakor's part i was laughing like a mad..
Oh my suraj baby how caring he s towards chakor..he always thinks abt her..love him a lot..
Really a great walk for us with mrs.winsomness..
Tq for the cute lady and the hottiee sis..
U r such a fabulous writer..waiting for ur XRH and many more sis..
Want to drench in ur further writings..
Luv u sis..tc

Hey dear!
Thank you so much for your lovely words dear!
Happy that you enjoyed reading this story!
Wishing you all the best that your Price is as Charming as this Suraj! ;-)
Happy that this Chakor could make you laugh dear!
So pleased reading your comment dear!
Thank you so much once again!
Hope my other stories are as interesting as this one!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing ending, no words for it🤗

Loved the innocent chakor & hot suraj as a cute & understanding husband😊
Loved the journey of sukor from strangers to soulmates😊
www journey was beautiful
Waiting for your next story

Thanks a lot buddy!
Glad you joined us in this travel of Winsomeness! and enjoyed every part of it!
Thank you :-)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Superb ending!


Chakor has grown a lot as a person. Loved her confidence with the outside world and in her relation with Suraj.

What to say about Suraj, he's a perfect husband, mentor and friend. It was interesting to see how he took things very slowly to keep Chakor at ease.

Loved Sukor's journey.

Thank you for this beautiful story!

Thanks a lot buddy!
Happy that you liked this story and loved their journey!
It's fully my pleasure that you enjoyed my writings!
Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amrutha131

This is such a beautiful story 👏
But d story ended 😭 I will miss this Sukor especially Chakor
Anyways, waiting for ur new stories n TTW !!

Thank you so much Amu!
Awww! Me too missing this Chakor but what to do? Everything needs an end and this story reaches it's end here!
Will try my best in all of my other stories!
Thank you so much!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Maithu

sorry for being late just that caught with too much of work at work...


Also honestly the last episode just put me off and actually I just wanted to get over it and as I say always i quickly run through my eyes when i get your PM but chew and enjoy the cud back.

I must say it was like a poetry which was amazing...

the journey was so beautiful like a melodious song and as I said earlier for a change Suraj is here the one moulding his chakor.

What to say every aspect of making her understand and slowly making her imbibe, get into his soul was superbly done. the back hugs and peeks and the slow invasion of her (rather his) assets of hers was a melancholy ...

so naive she is that he had to tell her when not to kiss too (aawwh I felt that tooo cute)

and the soaps... she better stay off

hahah i started to laugh at her idea of getting a night drress when she has the most seductive saree which is ofcourse turning her man but for his control...

i liked the way "it" happened as it was i felt, was not rapid, only that ignited has to get ignited and happen... lovely

I had my high respects for him when he was so concerned about her having babies as he does not want her to undergo the pain... WOW Suraj you really won me! wish all men think like that than merely thinking as baby making machines (especially in the rural).

Loved the way he gave her the confidence to get her own identify and at the same time taking the caution in protecting her be it...

You both have truly walked and i foresee lots of Wins to the (whole)someness!!!


Great Maithu

waiting for the XRH and TTW

Take your time.

Excellent...


Hey!

No need to say sorry dear!
I know how it goes when a work start with all the meetings and loads of things to do.
So no sorry from here on!

awww it makes to be in cloud nine with your lovely comment and beautiful words!
But I need to get down else I will not move from here LOL
Thank you!

Hehehe I think she is full of joy with all the soaps here ;-)

And of cours!
The western people need nighties while Indian ladies just need to drap a saree in correct way to get their hubby LOL

I really hate when men see women as baby making machine and working slave.
They are also humans and need respect.
And this Suraj just made this as a statement here and I'm happy for that!

Thank you so so much once again for all the words and appreciations!

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