Not all Roses Ss Sukor up pg54 - Page 39

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update, no words to describe it 🤗

Just love your writing👏
Everything was perfect


Thank you Katheriene , practice is getting me better perhaps not sure though😆 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Very soothing it is ❤️ So happy for Sukor

Blushy can we get bonus chapters from past ? during 4 year leap ?


Thank you Amrutha ❤️
I dont see why can't you... a good flashback can make a great bonus , i'll work on it for the next part 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
I really really do hope you guys like this part ...idea credit goes to Amrutha thank you for suggesting it and if you guys want to read something from me feel free to give your ideas... i get rusty sometimes but i love exploring themes

Bonus 2

A trip to the past

2 years before Chakor returned to India

It was around 9 pm when she finished her presentation... Chakor rushed to her office finding flowers on her desk.. it was placed by a certain colleague of hers who was trying to court her since days she had made it clear she wasn't interested... leaving a frustrated sigh ... she picked the flowers throwing it in the dustbin in a go and wrapped up her things in her bag quickly... she barely talked to anybody in his office... her priority was her work and thats it.. one of the biggest reason she did that was also because she wasn't interested in anyone poking their nose in her affairs not that she was ashamed of her present but because she liked the balance in her life and felt like it was all what she needed... a simple smile out of courtesy towards those who were left in the office and she ran towards her car

Her hired babysitter was supposed to leave her angel at 8 o clock... she was already late by one hour ... she almost felt tempted to break every traffic light she came across thinking about her daughter.. she was left frustrated when after dialing her babysitters number she didn't pick... parking her car carelessly she ran on the stairs not bothering to wait for the lift and opened her door... she almost broke in tears when she saw her 2 years old daughter on the floor playing with her stuffed doll around a set of scattered cars but then she saw her babysitter sitting on the couch playing with her phone... she stood at seeing Chakor... it wasn't the first time she was late for how demanding her job was... many times she returned home finding her daughter alone breaking her heart everytime... as if sensing her mother the little princess raised her head giving her a toothy grin "Mumma" She exclaimed opening her arms to be picked ... she was breathless from all the running but that didn't stop her from bending and picking her daughter kissing her cheeks

"Thank you soo much Maria... i can't tell you how grateful i am for having stayed until so late" She said honestly feeling Avya place her head on her chest looking at Maria

The woman only smiled back taking the money Chakor gave along with the few euros bonus "I am soo sorry princess.. mumma was soo late na " She whispered to her princess walking to her room... she placed her on the bed asking for how her day went ... her daughter was a bright kid.. she started calling her mumma by the time she was around 19 months old.. now that she was 2 and almost half years she did mess up in her conversating skills but it was clear enough to be understood by her mother... wrapping her doll in her arms again she babyishly asked what to eat tonight???

Avya brightly squealed khichdi.. indian foods her mother always made was what she digged for.. no matter how tired she got she would cook whatever her daughter would ask...placing her on the kitchen counter she grabbed the rice lentils and began cooking... hearing her daughter rant about random stuffs completely forgetting her mother was late... placing her on in her lap... she fed Avya lovingly and herself ... the tough part was putting her to sleep... a much needed thing because the next day Avya would fuss about waking up and delay her for work ... by the time she actually got to work she was drained

"Mumma this mumma pig" Avya spoke showing her stuffed pink pig dressed in orange... then "This peppa pig" she continued showing the other stuffed pig dressed in orange "and papa pig" the fluffy pig dressed in blue wearing glasses... Chakor was trying hard to concentrate on what her daughter was trying to say but her tiredness was taking a toll on her except it all vanished when her daughter asked the next words "where's Avi papa pig?" She asked innocently clutching the three stuffs pig in her arms

Chakor always tried her best to answer every questions of her princess no matter how silly it was but this question was one which even Chakor didn't have an answer too... not once had she asked Bhagya where Suraj was... is he already married to Imli? DO they have kids? A lot of times she thought maybe she rushed in giving him an ultimatum... that was mostly the times when she felt she wasn't enough for Avya...she loves her daughter but it broke her heart whenever Avya had to be woken up early just be to rushed to play school because she had work or when she reached home late ... but stopping herself was memory of how he stood cornered watching her getting titled infront of his parents because his love for Imli was greater than the supposed mistake he had made

Looking down she saw her daughter was wide eyed watching her... waiting for her answer... she felt regretful at that moment.. but still she bent kissing her forehead before answering a lie she didn't think wrong at that moment "Avii has her papa... he's just busy right now he has some responsibilities he can not leave also because he knows mumma will love Avya for the both of us... Why?? Is Mumma not important for Avya?" Chakor asked pretending she was offended pouting her lips when Avya wrapped her small arms around her lap..."No Avi loves Mumma sooo muchhh" She said before sleeping in her mom's lap not seeing the tears which escaped her eyes... moments like this made her wish for Suraj knowing the responsibility excuse will work only until Avya doesn't gain maturity.. what about after that?? How will she ever tell her daughter her father's first reaction after hearing about her was repulsion? Will Suraj ever regret it after seeing how angelic their daughter was? It was question she thought was always going to be left unanswered... she slept tiredly with the dried up tears on her cheeks

Back in India Suraj sitting in his office kept on disconnecting Imli's call... he had just lost one of the biggest tender of his life after having worked beyond his limits for that... this company wasn't his dream... he wasn't made for this... he was more of an entrepreneur type but he tried ... least to say his tries weren't enough because he was only met with failures...he wished deep inside there was someone who understood him... the girl his fiance he loves was only demanding for time and fun times... she never even asked if he was alright... she could only see he has become boring... he was asking for a moment alone when he heard cries .. a baby cry to be exact

He was about to walk out and yell at whosoever it was when he exited all were silent except for the child who still kept on crying his lungs out... he was speechless at the little scrunched up face who kept on pouring water from his eyes... kids were soo lucky they could cry without being judged ... the lady was stupefied at Suraj's entry... she couldn't have left her child alone at home because her mother in law was busy so seeing no option she took him at work... she nervously tried to get him quiet but he continued crying... working towards them he instinctively extended his hands to be passed on the child

Taking the little baby in his arms... he felt a certain feeling with a whisper in the back of his mind... "he was maybe a father too" ...he thought about Chakor... her hopeful face which kept on taunting him and render him sleepless... he had never thought about the child... he was mostly guilty towards the girl he knew deserved the best specially when he sat at Imli's place one time and watched her replace Chakor's photo which a random butterfly picture... throwing it in the dustbin

"Why are you doing this??" He had asked wincing and not believe in the immaturity of his fiance

"She left she doesn't have any place in this house" she had said throwing the picture in the dustbin without seeing he had picked it... he doesn't know what made him do that but he had carefully kept the picture in a certain drawer of his room... a drawer which was never opened since

The baby moved in his arms trying to reached for his tie ... he smiled giving it to him... the other people in the office were left in awe at this scene... the kid was silent in his arms happily nibbling at his tie

"You'll make a really good father one day Sir" The lady had said causing his smile to fly in the air... he returned the child to her mother and locked himself back in his room...he would make a good father? he wasn't even able to do justice to his unborn child ... how was he to be a good father? Even if tomorrow he has child with Imli would he be happy knowing that there was perhaps one child who will never know he was his or her dad or maybe there's already someone else who was going to be his or her father .. that thought made him feel worst than losing a project... but for once he wished Chakor was coping... she and her child was happy wherever they were... he clearly wasn't and it was too late to change anything

Back to present

Sleeping in her room she realized her husband wasn't next to her and then heard some mummuring from the baby monitor

"You know Ayu papa hurt mumma a lot... when you grow up be like mumma not like papa" he said to his baby boy slowly rocking him in his arms.. he had rushed to Ayaansh after hearing his cries ... it took him a while before Ayaansh had quiet down since whenever he cried he looked for his mother ...but soon he started crying again... ... at the hospital all had said even his parents that Ayaansh looked just like him when he was a baby... the same one of a kind little nose... curious little eyes and lips... moreover adding to his trait was his wish to always stay in Chakor's arms just like his father

Chakor was about to go back to sleep when her husband entered the room with a whiny Ayaansh in his arms

"Your son doesn't like my face" he complained to Chakor passing Ayansh to her watching as she cuddled with him... he had toned down the cries but still whiny

"He wasn't crying because he doesn't like your face... he's just hungry" She said looking at how her prince was sucking his thumb while leaving small cries

He almost shook his head at Chakor who still didn't believe the little devil Ayu became in her absence but stopped when his wife began breastfeeding him... he sat next to her kissing her forehead ... Ayaansh was hungrily suckling on his night snack "dare tell me he's not like you" Chakor taunted amusingly... she had caught Suraj sneaking for timely night snack a few times

He winced guiltily "he's a little devil" he said while helping Chakor with her nightdress before stealing a kiss on her lips

Soon they were joined by their sleepy princess who was disturbed by all the chaos... she tiredly climbed on the bed laying her head on her father's chest... the first time Avya saw Ayaansh was at the hospital

She was bewildered by how tiny he was... she had approached him smiling at him before placing her teddy next to him..."what's his name?" She asked excitedly for once she wasn't interested into toys but in her brother

"Ayaansh" Suraj told her adding to her happiness but then "But papa he's soo tiny how will he play with Avi???" She opened up her only worry causing them to snicker

"give him some time princess... soon he will grow up and start playing up with you and by that time if mumma is nice enough she will give you another doll to play with" He spoke naughtily winxing at a fully red to the roots of her hair Chakor ... but their daughter was convinced... to seal the deal she bent leaving a little kiss on her brother's head who left a beautiful smile on his little sleepy face ... a flash breaking the scene from Bhagya's camera

"Ayu don't cry please" Avi whispered to her four months old brother feeling him curl his finger around her index finger ... as if listening to his sister he went back to sleep after burping whatever gas his little tummy held

Placing both their children on their respective bed they entered their room ... "why didn't you wake me up?" She asked him

"you were sleeping looking delicious so i decided to let you sleep" he said nuzzling his lips in the crook of her neck

"lemme sleep now" Chakor knew her husband.. if allowed he'd go all romantic on her whole night but he was the most caring and loving husband and father

"Chakor you never found anyone in italy?" He asked out of the blue ... a question which kept on haunting him for 4 years.. he had been thinking she'd find someone for herself and their child

Thinking about it now... she knew there was many who pursued her but she could never find it in her to give them a chance... at that time she thought it was Avya but now she know why "No because my heart and soulmate was here in India and i don't regret it because i know i wouldn't have been able to love someone else as much as i love you and no one else would have been able to love me as much as you do" She whispered against his lips before rolling over him feeling pull her nightdress over her head... it was going to be a long night after that statement which might have woken up every inch of her husband "Chakor!!!!" He moaned "I love you soo much"

Edited by Blushy_Auntacid - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
First thanks to Ammu... Love you.
Blushy can a night be so soothing yes after reading this one.

Just loved it, you have blended it so beautifully.. Soulmates indeed aren't they.

Awwwhhh next one ufff...


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Posted: 6 years ago
Blushy... bonus ...balle balle 👏👏
Fantastic dear...

Next part...jaldi jaldi😆😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
Another beautiful update
Sukor were apart but somehow connected to each other without realisation😳
Chakor was working so hard for giving Avya a better future, she was regreting her decision due to Avya😭
Suraj was also guilty about having a child whose whereabout is unknown to him😭
Sukor's present moment with Avya & Ayansh was bliss👏
Suraj is a great father, ayansh is so naughty, little devil😆😉
Avya & Ayansh moment was so cute😊
Suraj question about any guy in Chakor's life in Italy shows his possessiveness😉
Loved Chakor's reply😳
Sukor's moment was beautiful

Edited by katheriene - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Perfect. Just perfect. SuKor, such a natural and amazing couple. One can so imagine sukor in this story and these situations. Lovely😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb
Loved the insight into Suraj's feelings
Avya and Ayansh scene was cute
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Posted: 6 years ago
My heart skips beats when I read the way you describe what their life was. Suraj's life in the past years is something we are knowing properly for the first time and it's so so so nice to know it. It just exploded the depth. Thank you so much
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you so much dear .. interesting very interesting❤️.

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