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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita38

Couldn't comment earlier due to my exams

What an update!!
Mesmerising and soothing❤️. It was a bliss to read🤗

Waiting for bonus parts😉 would like to see sukor going through the pregnancy phase and cherish every moment which they missed earlier and also avya with her sibling( may be little suraj 😉)
This sukor story will forever remain im my heart. Plz come up with new stories.


It's okay Ankita... i hope your exams went well... i'll have my entrance ones next week 😆
thank you having read it... i will update the bonus today you'll like it ... i came up with something new read it when you want its lying around 😆 and hush hush i aint giving spoiler 😳 little suraj or little chakoriya time will tell 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
The best story I have ever read
Thank you so much blushy for writing such an amazing story
You have portrayed every character exceptionally
Whenever I get upset with what they show in the serial I used to reread all the parts of this story.
I have created an image of avya in my mind and whenever I see anjor/saanvi onscreen I remember avya.
This story will remain as my forever favourite ❤️
Keep writing more stories
Eagerly waiting for the bonus chapters😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Hency05

The best story I have ever read

Thank you so much blushy for writing such an amazing story
You have portrayed every character exceptionally
Whenever I get upset with what they show in the serial I used to reread all the parts of this story.
I have created an image of avya in my mind and whenever I see anjor/saanvi onscreen I remember avya.
This story will remain as my forever favourite ❤️
Keep writing more stories
Eagerly waiting for the bonus chapters😃


Thank you sooo much Hencyy!! i am happy this story could cheer you up.. i dig for smiles 😆

happy to see new faces liking this ❤️

Will post the bonus chap in a minute
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor

I m waiting since long😭


me too continuously refreshing 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor


me too continuously refreshing 😭


Coming right away 😆
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Bonus Part 1

Together Forever

"hmmm" Was what he mummured lazily in her ears tightening his grip over her bare waist ... the more she tried to push him away the further he dug his face in the crook of her neck

"Suraj!!! we have work" She reminded him giggling ticklish by his bearded chin as he rubbed it against her shoulder

"Lemme sleep Chakor" He refused to let go of his wife ... her fragrance was already igniting a fire within him and she was there insisting he woke up

Chakor left a sigh as his weight refused to budge from over her... it was a matter of everyday... she loves her family and Suraj more than ever but sometime it was hard to decide whose childhishness was more difficult to deal with"Suraj!!!! I need to get Avi ready for her school" she pulled the mother trick causing him to move away from her reluctantly pouting his lips as she smiled victoriously

She was about to walk away having found her nightdress thrown lazily against the bedframe when he pulled her back falling on top of him... he wrapped his arms around her hips stealing a light kiss on her red lips.. must be from him having spent the night loving them ..."It's all your fault i didn't get enough sleep last night" He whispered huskily against her lips ..his fingers seducing her hips...Chakor bit her lips shyly looking at his hairs .. he had a serious case of bed hairs

"it's a matter of everyday now i have an insatistiable husband i aint arguing with you over whose fault it is" She laughed kissing his lips she learnt arguing with her man child was of no use in a very harsh way .. lets just say that day Avya was soo traumatized she had told Tejaswini she thought her mumma was getting attacked when her parents were only PLAYING without her

After dealing with her husband who insisted his muscles were too sore and he needed a hand in the shower ... she walked to her princess' bedroom to wake her up... already 6...her hairs had grown up..it was all shuffled on her face sleeping mannerism identical to her father... she bent over kissing her forehead slowly .. a broad smile etched on her precious face..."Gooodmorning mummaa" She mummured sleepily before opening her arms to be picked up..."Goodmorning my princess".. another session of shower before they walked to the kitchen smelling food ... her husband had his sleeves rolled up as he cooked ... both she and Avya exchanged mischievious looks before a loud "booo" Rang in the kitchen followed by Suraj's screams and the duo giggles

He wasn't really frightened but for those golden laughters he'd even wear a frock if he had ...with laughters and more mischievious moment they exited the house... Suraj and Chakor dropping their daughter to primary school ... then him dropping her at work before resuming his own

In the afternoon Chakor sat on the couch nervous hiding her nausea and dizziness from Suraj.. she had even fainted at work so when she arrived early she had verified her doubt before telling Suraj... they'd been trying for this moment since 8 months one time her cycle was late she'd tell the doubt happily to Suraj who ecstatic ran to the pharmacy only to receive the result of it be a false alert... he was dissappointed but he'd cover it with a smile kissing her on the forehead and saying it was alright... they had all the time for it since she decided to only tell him about it once she was sure... she waited nervously for the 4 tests to show up its result... running a hand over her stomach in anticipation... she wished dearly it was positive... she wanted this... she closed her eyes to only open it after a second and watched the test reveal she was indeed pregnant... all four of them was positive... a happy laugh escaped her throat as she imagined her husband's happiness... it was going to be out of this world... she had a part of them in her... was it a she or he... she could already imagine Avya playing the elder sister for how caring she was with her dolls

A drop of tear escaped her eyes with the rush of happiness that exploded in her... she was going to be a mother for the second time... with her love... how was she going to tell that to Suraj??? was he going to be happy? Who was she kidding too... he was going to be crazy ... trying her hairs in a bun she walked to empty bedroom next to Avya's it was time for this room to get a new life she thought

Two days keeping this news to herself was difficult specially when her morning sickness started brutally... driving her husband crazy... "why are you going at work if you're ill? Seriously i didn't even cook anything stupid... you don't take care of yourself Chakor" his scolding along with Avya's agreeing to it had taken a toll over her... she had a doctor appointment which said she was 6 week pregnant... that evening when Suraj came home he was rushed in worried about Chakor... he had insisted taking a day off but she still sent him off... Avya was happily drawing but funnily even his wife was drawing something next to his daughter.. removing his coat he walked to them giving both kisses respectively "What are we drawing today?"

"Papa the teacher asked us to draw our family.. mumma said we should have a competition who draw best and papa will be the judge" Her daughter announced brightly attacking the box of colors ... he looked at his wife who sent a flying kiss in his wife... how was he to decide the best drawing? Huge dilemma when both poked the drawings in his face

Avya's drawing consisted mostly of stick as a body and a circle as the head... painted in pink was Chakor... blue him and red with a huge smile was she... his smile as wide as his daughter drew them when Avya drew his attention to Chakor's drawing..."mumma whats this??" She pointed at Chakor's drawing which looked similar to their daughter except for the circle instead of the body stick on Chakor with a little something inside.. he was confused too..looking at Chakor her face had the brightest smile with a glimpse of a teary eyes ... her cheeks having her usual blush... he was guessing it alright...but he wasn't sure if it was right not until he saw her hand which rested on her stomach... "REALLLYYY?????" He stoood shouting excitedly surprising Avya but not Chakor she had expected this so she merely nodded chuckling "Oh My God Chakor" He Hugged her picking her up "I love you i love you sooo much" Avya stood watching her parents weirdly not understanding what was happening .. why was her father laughing soo crazily and spinning her mumma in his arms

"I love you too" Chakor could feel his excitement but unexpectedly his teary eyes... she knew this meant a lot to him but never imagined soo much ... she hugged him rubbing his back "it's happening Suraj... its really happening" She felt relax as she did that him nodding against her shoulder still in disbelief but fully content

Soon they both broke apart and watched a pouting Avya who had her arms crossed watching them with suspicious gaze was they planning to eat out without her? her suspicions were cleared by her father picked her up and knelt infront of Chakor right infront of her stomach ... he bent a gentle kiss them before looking up at Avya... "you know how you said Tanya doesn't play with you eversince she got her baby sister?" Suraj explained while Chakor silently watched him disclose the news to their daughter.. if it was possible to fall harder for a person ..she fell harder for him at that moment

Avya nodded her head remembering it "Then soon my princess is going to have someone to play with her" A broad smile identical to their replaced the frown of their daughter

"Really??? Where is she??? Papa i wanna play now" Avya insisted innocently making the both of them laugh

"we don't know if its a she or he baby... but you will know about it after 8 months" Chakor explained stroking her little angel's hairs

"8 months?" he asked excitedly

"hmm 6 weeks done" Knowing well ... 6 weeks ago was her birthday... she was almost confident that was the special night their baby here was conceived causing him to feel happier

More and more question was asked by Avya such as why soo much time... where the baby was right now... Suraj replied too each and every one of them with his own fabricated version like the great father he was

He showered and slipped in the bed with her... placing his hand over his on her stomach..."Another Charm is going to have to be added here" he said... he'd add another charm after his wedding... two hearts entwined it was representing their heart "Hi baby it's daddy here... i didn't know you were the reason why mumma kept on getting sick this morning" he spoke having lifted Chakor's pyjama shirt ..."papa is sorry.. but now papa knows he will take care more of mumma.. don't worry just be safe in there and don't trouble mumma" he spoke driving chuckles from his wife who found him ridiculous but needless to say she had spoke to Avya before when she was pregnant so she couldn't blame him

"You make me the happiest man alive Chakor" He said dropping a kiss on her lips

"And you make me the happiest Wife ...i love you beyond words Suraj" She said placing her head over his chest lulling herself to sleep with his heartbeat

She had morning sickness for about 8 weeks more... everymorning Suraj rushed to the washroom pulling her hairs away as she vomited.. her inside clenching as she felt the sickness envelope her body..."Why can't we men get pregnant.. i'd anyday accept being at your place ...i can't watch you in pain like that everyday" He said one morning helping her to brush her teeth ... she had many times told him she was pregnant not invalid.. she had experienced that already with Avya but after the guilt expression with replaced his worried one ...she'd never stop him from doing anything

She stood infront of the mirror adoring her little bump at the 16th week of her pregnancy when she watched the hand with crept around it pulling her into him ...dugging his face in her neck leaving feather kisses "I am growing fat" She said mischieviously before moaning when he bit her slowly suckling on that area driving it a red of passion

"No!!! you make me desire for you more day by day" True to his words she could feel his arousal... her husband was anything but repulse.. if anything that day when he made love to her... he took all his time.. exploring her body with his lips ... she could see it pained him... but even when his body begged for a release he could see only her satisfaction first

During her first ultrasound... he was more nervous than her... the doctor showed them the screen which showed their developing baby amongst sound waves which depicted the thumping of their baby's heartbeat... Chakor squeezed his hand ...asking him silently if he was alright... not caring about the doctor present he cried with happy tears .. he grabbed the tissues cleaning the gel of her stomach not facing her..when she pulled him in a hug "I am sorry for not having been here for Avya...i couldn't hear our princess' heartbeat like this"

"Suraj... don't dwell in our past... this is our future.. me you our princess and our little jelly bean here" she explained leaving a comforting kiss on his cheeks

She had taken leave from her work soon after her 7 month started and baby shower done.. much to her displease but Suraj kept on throwing a fit with Avya by his side... who was actually waiting for the baby desperately... she was already shifting a few of her toys in the newly decorated room... Suraj had taken his baby crib from his place... it was a wooden crib which he decorated with artifical roses peach and white was the overall color combination since they decided to keep the gender a surprise... she slept on the couch tired while watching tv... when she felt herself being lifted slowly and placed on the bed... she kept her eyes closed because when her daughter spoke... Suraj had hushed up saying "Shhh Mumma and baby are sleeping" she could feel they were trying hard to be silent so not to dissappoint them she pretended to be still asleep to actually falling back to sleep in the comfort of her bed

"how is my little princess doing here" he said rubbing Chakor's belly

"Can be my prince too" She argued ... he was hell bent on believing she was a she

"We decided on a little Chakor" He pouted

"What if it's my little Suraj" She asked with a little mischievious tone

"Then i'll give him a little place around but we'll try again then" he replied shrugging his shoulder winxing at her

"Ouchhh" she screamed breathing heavily having felt a kick almost causing Suraj to roll down the bed

"what happened Chakor?? Are you okay?? should we get the doctor??" He asked in a heatbeat worried as hell ...but then a smile broke on her face...he didn't even realize he forgot to breath in that fraction of second

"He kicked!!!!!!!!" She announced happily dragging his hand on her belly... it felt soo perfect at that moment when she yelped again as he felt the little kick...it was as if she was eager to come out "Heyy baby..papa is here...don't worry you want to play football when you'll come out.. you papa and Avi di will play...just a few more days we will be together" He kissed her stomach where he felt the kick feeling more movement with his lips ... his wife running a finger in his hairs "I need to give your mumma some attention now" He said pulling himself up kissing her lips

Her eating tendencies were troubling him... he was consistently worried specially when he saw her eat freshly fried potato chips dipped in chocolate ice cream... even Avya winced at that specially when Chakor asked for mango pickle to be added in the already weird combination... they had wanted to say something but her mood had gone frenzy ... she would either burst out crying or go on talking strike even when Suraj refused to taste her weird food she was just about to fill her brown orbs with tears when he pulled her hand in his mouth forcing the chip in his mouth... it was horrendous

She sat sleepless shuffling through channels at around 1 am ... Suraj was looking at her expectedly massaging her swollen feet which lazily laid on his lap.. he knew she wanted something from the little pout on her lips.."I want to eat pani puri" She said out of the blue sadly "but its okay its too late... i'll try to sleep" She stood walking slowly to their bedroom... she did go crazy with hormones but she'd never ask him to do anything over the top ... picking up his car keys he rushed to the door..there must be one stall ... just one... he drove finally finding one

Where was Suraj? She opened her eyes after a short nap.. he entered the room with a plastic bag in one hand and a plate in the other "Surprise" he said placing the plate infront of her adding the pani puris on it... "Surajj" at that moment he looked more desiring that the pani puri...she captured his lips in a love filled kiss ...he then fed her before taking his spot ...stroking her head on his chest until he was sure she was asleep.. leaving a kiss on her forehead

A week before her due date Suraj took his leaves off work...he was more nervous than Chakor... he roamed around with pillows for when she sat...her food timings...when he wasn't at home Avya was his dutiful bodyguard.. he had turned into this clingey husband Chakor was tired off.. she loved him but she needed some space which wasn't given even when she had to be in the bathroom

She moved letting him place the pillow at her back when she felt a hit of contraction... it was too early ... during Avya days she had this false alarm it was braxton hicks... she didn't want Suraj to go crazy over this so stayed silent not until she felt another contraction after which she let out an uncontrollable yelp...causing Suraj to rush by her side...she looked at Avya who looked at them with curious eyes no longer keeping her attention at her cartoons... she faked a smile.."it's okay Suraj..i just have to use the washroom" She said inspite of the suspicious eyes of Suraj.. he was already cracking up..she could see the sweat beads on his forehead... when she stood she felt a large gush slip out of her slipping down ... "Chakor????" He shrieked her face contoured with pain while his with worries.. she simply bit her lips shaking her head pointing at Avya... "It's okay... it's okay Suraj...we'll be okay..we need to get Avya at your parents place and then to the hospital"

"no no no we are going to the hospital" he was panicking ...she shook him strictly "Suraj!!!!! Don't make me yell at you...and listen to me" She said strictly feeling scared when he nodded vigorously with teary eyes... just like she thought...he was panicking

He picked her bag ...taking Avya by his side "Avi i called Bhagya masi you're going at her place for a while mumma and papa are going somewhere" He said lovingly to his daughter but his eyes were fixed worried on his wife who smiled through her pain not to let her daughter freak out... it was obvious she was in pain...her fingers were dug in her stomach and her pain was causing him pain

They drove to Avya's house where even Vivaan was present..."Move away i am driving" he said knowing his brother needed his help more than anything... he left the driver place rushing to the back seat to his wife... taking her in his arms kissing her forehead...she was sweating in pain but comforting him "It's okay Suraj..we'll be fine...in just a few minutes we will have our baby" she spoke difficulty between her pain ... he knew he'd cry if he spoke so he just stayed calm picking her up in his arms having reached to the hospital

She was rushed in the labour room.."she still have time ...she's just 4 cm dilated we need to wait" The doctor had said when he felt like punching his face... couldn't he see his wife in pain...hadn't been Chakor holding his hand he'd go crazy

She refused to take the epidural before... her more frequent cries broke his heart...he knew it was going to be bad but now he felt like he wasn't ready... he wasn't ready to watch her bear such a pain...not when she had told him it's okay you can leave the room... she knew his fear for hospital and medicaments but he only kissed her lips saying he loves her and they were doing it together

About 6 hours later she was ready for delivery... her pain getting unbearable ...she was unaware of her hurting Suraj's hand and wished to leave it but he didn't let go...he stayed stroking her sweat covered hairs away from her face...no matter how panicked...frightened and nervous he was ...he kept on whispering how proud he was of her..."i love you Chakor... i think i love you eversince i saw you for the first time coming in that detention room with a frown on your face which said you wanted to be anywhere except there i was too much of a fool to understand it" he said making her laugh through her pain

"take a huge breath then push" hee whispered against her lips "it hurts" she finally admitted crying frustratedly

"i know baby just one more" nodding she listened grabbing his hands tighter...she could almost feel her life on the line when her yells were replaced by baby cries ...the both laughed through their tears...she was tired so was he..but their tiredness were taken away when after cutting the umbilical cord the doctor gave them their baby..."it's a...boy" she said ...Chakor was over the moon when they placed him on her chest... his tiny little self wrapped in a little towel but covered with a white substance..she still kissed his forehead before giving him to an over excited Suraj..."My Son" He said admist his tears still in disbelief they had created another angel... "his name?" he asked to Chakor since if it was a girl Suraj was to name her

She had been looking for boy names since days so she only smiled weakly ..running her tired fingers over his little head "Ayansh" my ray of light from my sun

"Ayansh" Suraj whispered back to his little boy who curled in his arms...his first movement in his arms

He reluctantly gave Ayansh to the nurse who took him for a shower... sitting on the bed.. Chakor was worn out her eyes was droopy...he bent kissing her lips " have i ever told you how beautiful you are?" he said looking at her with immense love

She rolled her eyes saying "no" making him laugh

"You're the prettiest Woman i've ever seen" he whispered to her genuinely holding her hands while she dropped in a sleep filled with dreams her fingers curling itselves around Suraj's


Edited by Blushy_Auntacid - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Blushy
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Can it be anything but super!!

Amazing, he made made up for everything he missed for Avi and loved the way he prepared Avi.

Thats simply beautiful.

I just loved Chakor, proud of her she knew him and took control though she was in pain.

Thanks is a simple word but straight from my heart.

This is excellent. No mini essay but emotional thanks.

keep writing deary
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Posted: 6 years ago
Blushyyy!
Have I ever told you how pretty you write?
Your stories are the prettiest in the world.

I loved every bit of this. I mean every single bit.

Oh my goodness!! Gonna read this again.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Blushy

🤗

Can it be anything but super!!

Amazing, he made made up for everything he missed for Avi and loved the way he prepared Avi.

Thats simply beautiful.

I just loved Chakor, proud of her she knew him and took control though she was in pain.

Thanks is a simple word but straight from my heart.

This is excellent. No mini essay but emotional thanks.

keep writing deary


Sumi🤗 your words are as precious to me as a 350 words essay would have been seriously i said and will say it again you guys are the reason of this chapter becoming bonus chapters 😳 thank you sooo muchhh
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor

Blushyyy!

Have I ever told you how pretty you write?
Your stories are the prettiest in the world.

I loved every bit of this. I mean every single bit.

Oh my goodness!! Gonna read this again.


you have told me like a billion of times being a awesome writer yourself 😳
Thank you ☺️

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