'YOUR LOVE IS A LIE' - A Sukor FF- Discontinued (Note-pg16) - Page 12

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Loved sukor nok jhoks😆

Don't end it soon

It is very interesting

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Hi J

Thanks for the update, it was awesome!

Love flirty Suraj, and the flowers was such a romantic move.

I'd like to see more of their nok jhoks.

Please don't cut the story short, it's very interesting.

Looking forward to the next update.

Originally posted by: saniya__

Awesome update. And sorry for not commenting in previous chapters as I was a bit busy. The story is fabulous. Wanna see more Sukor scenes. Update soon.

Originally posted by: J.arora

Friendly warning taken seriously Madam! 😃

Thanks a lot Sania... These lovely words coming from u means a lot😊

I was already in a bit off mode coz I lost some imp data which is taking a lot of time to recover and hence I thought maybe putting such a long break, I would have lost everyone's interest..

But your words they regained my writing fuel..

Either it be suggestion or your kind motivation it had always been with me through this story...

Coming to your question No Mr. AHUJA doesn't knw about their relation.. But he will get to knw in further coming parts...

Will be posting next soon😃

Hey Guys I am back as I promised. Thank you so much for your sweet response. I'll be continuing this ff with the same enthuasism as before credit goes to you all encouraging readers.🤗

This time your comments made me write the next part early and also compensation for not posting a week ...an early update😳

I STILL LOVE YOU

Vivaan had returned in time for lunch. He straight away went to Chakor's cabin. Chakor was on her chair, resting her head back. Suraj had gone out for a moment. Vivaan pulled out a chair infront of her desk and made himself comfortable. He put his hand on Chakor's hand which was resting on the desk.

Vivaan: You seem disturbed? Is everything okay? Did he do...

Chakor( disappointedly cutting him): Don't take his name infront of me! Till from when he has returned, he has been irritating me with his stupid dramas and I am having headache as a consequence.

Vivaan: Okay madam I won't take his name. But atleast come with me now for the lunch I am very hungry and u must be hungry too ..

Chakor nodded in yes and they both moved towards the canteen.

In the canteen, Chakor was mentally chiding herself for she desired to have a Vanilla Iced Coffee Frappe instead of her lunch while Vivaan was checking out the menu to order something satisfying him and Chakor.

While a waitor brought her favorite Vanilla Iced Coffee Frappe, to which Chakor got delighted. She then confusingly asked the waitor.

Chakor: We didn't placed any order then this...Did you, Vivaan?

Vivaan: No, I didn't placed any order. Am I fool to order Frappe at this time of lunch?

Suraj appears from behind

Suraj(with that ever charming smile): I am that fool who ordered this Frappe. Do u have any problem?(looking towards Vivaan)

Chakor: I don't want to have this. Who told you I will have this at lunch time(with straight face)

Deep down Chakor was happy that Suraj Still remembers this small small things about her.

Suraj taking a seat beside her on the table.

Suraj: Oh really Biwi? Common, Biwi we both know that when u r tired and u have a headache ...U need this and don't worry I won't even demand a kiss for it now, U can give it later on( with a wink)

Chakor reluctantly admits it and starts having her Frappe with some trantrums and excuses of not wasting his money.

Suraj( turning towards Vivaan): How are you Bro? After shifting to Lucknow u forgot me , we are meeting after so many years.

Suraj hugged him and Vivaan responded to it lightly. Rest of the lunch, Suraj kept on talking to Vivaan who hesitantly answered him back, which was yet another trick of Suraj to keep him away from his Biwi.

They finished their lunch.

Suraj( to Vivaan): Bro, pay my bill too, afterall I've returned after so long, treat should be from your side. I and Chakor will leave, we have some work(with a smile)...(turning to Chakor)Shall we?

Vivaan Half heartedly paid the whole bill and Suraj smiled to himself watching this

SURAJ POV:

My sweet brother still your habit of taking advantage of the situation didn't go. Now, U have to pay the cost of this advantage...way more to go brother ..be prepared for the next...(smirking)

POV ENDS..

Rest of the day went on with work. Suraj left no chance in getting close to Chakor. Chakor went on explaining him and he taking it opportunity irritated his wife with his childish tantrums.

Soon everyone left, Chakor too reached her house and was parking her car in the lot.

Another car also halted few steps before her appartment. The person secretly observed all of Chakor's activities and he was non other than her very much concerned husband.

He hid himself behind the tree, when finally Chakor had moved out of the parking lot and was heading towards the lift.

SURAJ POV:

She will definitely look back. If still you can feel my presence around you, you will look back Chakor. I know u still love me..Please look back ...

POV ENDS>>>

Chakor turns back suddenly sensing something but she sees nothing and heads back to her appartment

CHAKOR POV:

Why I feel that he was here? He was staring me..i can feel his presence around me...I am damn sure he is here but hiding somewhere, he must be following me to make sure again I reached safely or not like before..

But he won't come here to admit that he is overprotective husband, he and his ego( sarcastically)

POV ENDS>>>>

Chakor left to her appartment finding no traces of him. She msgd Vivaan that she reached safely.

Here, Suraj was dancing with joy,

Suraj( to himself): You still love me Biwi, and see you proved it yourself.

Chakor being tired went for a bath and then after much of deciding she prepared Maggi for the dinner. Taking the bowl, she settled on the couch. She was going to have a spoonful of it when a call disturbed her dinner.

ON THE CALL

Suraj(in a concerned voice): Careful Biwi! U will burn your tongue. How many times I have to tell you that eat slowly by blowing air...

Chakor: Are u still standing outside my house?

Suraj: No, I went away as I saw u getting inside safely.

Chakor(curosity and fake anger): Then how do u know I made Maggi for dinner.

Suraj: Becoz dear darling, I know whenever u are too much happy or too much stressed...u make Maggi for dinner..I had to suffer na so I know.

Chakor(her heart started beating fast) :Neither I am happy nor stressed! Okay!

Suraj: Becoz U are happy as well as stressed. Happy as you have got me back again forever, and stressed as how will you be able to resist yourself from me , seeing me everyday.

Kya hua biwi, I see your heartbeats are not in control right now.

Chakor(stammering): N..Nothing like that.

Suraj( with tears of happiness in his eyes): Between Biwi, You knew right I was following u..

Chakor(not in senses): Yes ofcourse I knew. How could I not sense your presence afterall I...( she stopped realising what she was about to do)

Suraj was dying to hear those words from his jaan...he was desperately waiting for it but controlled himself.

Chakor: Now stop hitting on me. ( trying to be harsh, somehow to hide her overflowing emotions)

Suraj: U can show me that fake anger and also to the world but I knw u are very happy from inside.

Chakor: I am very sleepy ...I want to go to sleep and you also sleep Good Night.

She disconnected the call realising she had no escape. Again her emotions will overpower her and she will melt down infront of him so to avoid she disconnected ...

She sat crying on the floor.

CHAKOR POV...

Not again Suraj...Why have you come back...(Crying and Sobbing) With so much difficulty I had learnt to find peace in living with our memories and now If u shatter my heart again I won't be able to live...

POV ENDS>>

Here Suraj had tears of joy in his eyes...

SURAJ POV...

Thank you Chakor. Now I have full faith that u will be mine again and that too very soon and this time I'll not let you go away from me at any cost and this time I will not let that person bring anyone between (in anger)... but U still love me...My CHAKOR loves me...yes..(with joy)

POV ENDS>>>

<FIFTH CHAPTER COMPLETE>

Sorry Guys it didn't worked according to precap , as before I was goin to cut the story short but based on your opinion I am going to let the story go on with flow...So the precap of next time will be as promised Party Sequence..Here this part already has 1200+ words, with party sequence it could have exceeded more so to not let that become monotonous I'll be posting party sequence in next part...

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