'YOUR LOVE IS A LIE' - A Sukor FF- Discontinued (Note-pg16)

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Interesting update👏

Loved sukor nok jhoks😆

Don't end it soon

It is very interesting

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Hi J

Thanks for the update, it was awesome!

Love flirty Suraj, and the flowers was such a romantic move.

I'd like to see more of their nok jhoks.

Please don't cut the story short, it's very interesting.

Looking forward to the next update.

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saniya__

@saniya__

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Awesome update. And sorry for not commenting in previous chapters as I was a bit busy. The story is fabulous. Wanna see more Sukor scenes. Update soon.

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: aishagup
hii first of all pls don't end it in two or three slots..
I for one did not lose interest
its amazing..
loved sukor
❤️
waiting for the party..

Thank u so much aisha 😊

Will post the party sequence soon😃

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: maithu_
Hey dear!

We are still waiting for you story, so try to not shorten the story.
It's really going good and I would like to read more.

I know how it feels to loose datas.
It happened for me when I was writing the 2nd part of Flechazo and I have to rewrite everything once again.
It's hard but it helped to restructure things and it became better.
Hope you lost nothing important.

Coming to the story!
They share a cabin!
And Suraj played his card nicely by melting her with his talks and touches.
Next part Party and it will be Sukor only I think!

Thank you!

Thank u di! 😃

Yeah rewriting the next part helped me to add some new things,I was able to make it more better hence... 😊

Yeah it will be Sukor ofc😆

Who knows next time they might share a house😉

Will be posting soon😃

Edited by J.arora - 8 years ago

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Hey J !
Please continue the story !! It's still very interesting and engaging👍🏼
Coming to this part,
Sukor love is so hearty❤️
Enjoyed their scenes
Waiting for d party sequence !!

Thank you Amrutha dear! 😃

I am glad u liked it!

Party sequence will be posted soon..

Stay tuned 😊

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi J bebe,
First of all welcome to forum once again..
Y u r thinking tat we lost interest in your story..if we lost insterest means then how we will ask u write further part..
Everyone s waiting for ur upadate..u can see tat also na..so don't tell like tat u r going to end the story..whatever the thing just continue it..
We just love this story a lot..
Comming to today's part..
It was awesome..
The way suraj flirt with his biwi(chakor) was fabulous..and cute..
They both sharing the same cabin..suraj had a good time to play with her..
Is Mr.Ahuja know abt the sukor relationship?
Overall I loved tis part..
Pls continue soon..And don't stop the story..
This s my friendly warning to u..k..
Always think positive dear..

Friendly warning taken seriously Madam! 😃

Thanks a lot Sania... These lovely words coming from u means a lot😊

I was already in a bit off mode coz I lost some imp data which is taking a lot of time to recover and hence I thought maybe putting such a long break, I would have lost everyone's interest..

But your words they regained my writing fuel..

Either it be suggestion or your kind motivation it had always been with me through this story...

Coming to your question No Mr. AHUJA doesn't knw about their relation.. But he will get to knw in further coming parts...

Will be posting next soon😃

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: arena99
Hi J
Just love ur story
Pls continue
Eagerly waiting for next part
I request you do not stop ur Story pls continue😊😊
Take your time
Pls continue and make long story,don't stop with 2-3shorts

Thank u arena 😃

Happy Seeing your comment first time! 😊

I'll continue the story surely and that too soon with more parts!

Edited by J.arora - 8 years ago

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: ndivyateja
Please continue with more parts. Dont stop with just 2-3..
Would love to read..👍🏼

Thank you divya😊

Happy to see your comment

Will continue with more parts!

Edited by J.arora - 8 years ago

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Hi j
Superb superb

Loved the melancholy of suraj around and about his wifey..

Felt sooo nice their chemistry you have awesomely maintained...

Loved the ove lust with the fakeness as she inevitably melts in his gaze and touch.

Waiting for the party

Way to go girl

Update soon

And
Thanks a lot