'YOUR LOVE IS A LIE' - A Sukor FF- Discontinued (Note-pg16)

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Holla Folks!😃
I am new to this forum though not new to watching this show. I started watching Udaan post the leap and since then I was intrigued to it... Suraj and Chakor are one of the favourite onscreen couple of mine..

Few days I ago I visited this forum and co incidently I happen to see Maithli di's FS I read it and loved it since that day I read stories of many members of this forum and believe me I couldn't feel more elated to read such wonderful works on the beautiful couple...😳

I've wrote stories but for the first time I want to attempt writing a short story on this pair...I had an idea revolving in mind since many days now penning it into words...hope u all like it...further story to be continue depending on your reaction if you like it..

PROLOGUE:

Morning sun rays fill a beautifully decorated room. A young lady in her mid twenties twitches her eyes and then finally wakes up removing her quilt. Still drowsy, she gets up and makes her way towards the window welcoming the rays of sun. The bright rays falling on her radiant skin making it glow even more.
Suddenly a pull on her waist makes her crash onto a chest of a well built muscular man standing a few steps behind her. The hold on her waist gets more tighter as she tries to push the person.
"How mean of you Biwi to leave me alone in bed like that?" A husky voice whispered in her ears.

"Suraj leave me !" was the only thing that escaped her mouth after feeling butterfly kisses on her neckline.

"Chakor how can u ask me to leave my own wife?" , Suraj further exclaimed after receiving that smack on his chest from his dear beautiful wife.

"U have become so naughty dearest pati dev" -Chakor said while smartly moving out of his grip and turning the other side to run away.

"Catch me if you can" -She shouted while running and suddenly, turning to find no one standing there.

"Suraj !" -Her eyes became moist as she sat down leaning on the couch beside her.

Thousands of memories flashed before her dark brown orbs with tears rolling down her cheeks. A curve formed on her lips remembering those and suddenly that smile faded away on recalling a memory she never wanted to recall again. No matter how much she tried to avoid but that memory crossed her mind everyday since past 2 years.

Wiping her tears , She declared in a firm voice "NOT AGAIN CHAKOR! , YOU HAVE TO FORGET , YOU CANNOT WASTE MORE TEARS ON HIM"

Index:
Prologue - page 1

Character sketch - page 3

"I STILL CRAVE FOR YOUR LOVE " part 1- page 4

"YOU STILL RULE MY HEART" part 2 - page 7

"MEETING U WAS A DREAM OR NIGHTMARE" part 3 - page 9

PART 4- page 12

"I STILL LOVE YOU"part 5- page 15

Note - page 16

So that's it for the prologue Do drop down your comments to let me know how was it 😊
Sorry for the errors and mistakes if found 😆



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting Prologue!
Is it similar to the show?
Want to know what happened and what is going to happen!
Continuee...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start👍🏼
Want to read more !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow
quite interesting

Two Years!!! long period!!!

Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: maithu_

Interesting Prologue!
Is it similar to the show?
Want to know what happened and what is going to happen!
Continuee...

Thanku di 😊
It is not similar to storyline of the show though the characters remain the same.
Will continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrutha131

Interesting start👍🏼
Want to read more !!

Thanks dear. 😊
Will post next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

Wow

quite interesting

Two Years!!! long period!!!

Waiting

Thanku😊
Will post soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chasa

Nic,pls continue...

Thanks 😊
Will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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looks very very interesting eagerly waiting for the first part 😃
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Nice start..
Waiting to know abt what happend before..
Continue soon..

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