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CHAPTER 23

Chakor woke up in his arms. She checked her wrist watch only to find the time as 3 am. Giving him a kiss on his forehead and carefully moving out of his arms, she peeped out of the tent by making a slight opening in the chain. The beauty of nature was adorable. She decided to have a morning walk because the cold breeze took away any remaining traces of sleep from her eyes. She looked at Suraj, and found him deep in sleep wrapped in the blanket.

Typing a text on his phone, "Good morning, I am leaving for a morning walk! And will come back soon.", she got out of the tent and went towards the woods, that had a mysterious beauty surrounding it. She loved nature, so she was very much fascinated.

After almost forty five minutes, in an attempt to turn in sleep, Suraj sensed an emptiness near him. He sleepingly used his hand to feel his surroundings and was wide awake with a shock that Chakor was not there. In the ecstasy, he picked up his phone and saw the text. Morning walk! Seriously! At 3! He immediately took his jacket and moved out to search her. In these kind of situations, network plays the role of biggest enemy!
"The number you are trying to call does not exist! Please try later!"
His heart beats were faster than before. He too moved towards the woods because he knew there is high probability of finding her here.

He kept on shouting her name, "CHAKOR!!! CHAKOR!!!!" and all he heard was the echo of his own voice. There was the redness of sun outside, but inside the wood because of dense trees, it was still dark. He doubted whether Chakor would come here, but also cursed her,if she really came here!
"How can she be so careless!?!?"
"Height of irresponsibility!!"
"Where are you Chakor!!?? I am now having bad thoughts!?!!"

He searched for more an hour than what seemed to him like eternity. The sun rose and now it was a blissful morning, but there was a huge havoc in his stomach. He thought to return back and check if may be Chakor was in the camp.

As soon as he reached there, he found other trainees and co-mentors searching them.
Suraj told them everything that he is not able to find Chakor. Everyone divided in teams and searched in every possible direction, but Chakor was nowhere.

Suraj was usually calm in situations like this, but this time he was not. And his tension couldn't go unnoticed by all people there.
Finally they decided to take help from villagers. It was 7:00 am now.

Now when all villagers gathered, speculations began!
"We told you a tiger is roaming here! But then you all didn't believe us!"
"Anyone who goes to the wood, never comes back!!"
"This wood is kilometres wide. It's almost impossible to find her now. She is lost!"
"What if she is kidnapped! There are some dacoits in the middle of the wood!!"
"Yes! Those dacoits even steal our household things!"
"Yes! That's a complete community of dacoits!"

There was boiling in his stomach. He was so scared that he was on the verge of breaking down. Where could be she?? She is definitely in some problem... otherwise she has never been this careless anytime in life. All kind of dreadful thoughts clouded his mind. And his heart. With each dreadful speculation by villagers, his heart was sinking. He felt thunderstorms in his soul.

"What if I lose her!?"

And this question startled him to such an extent that he rose instantly with , "Nahiii!"
All shocked , looked at him.

"I know she is very brave, even if she's in problem, she must be trying her best to save herself! Also I know and believe, that she is alright. All we need is to find her anyhow! I am going!", and he ran as if a delay of one single second would take him away from her.

The woods were deep. And the sunlight peeped in from the gaps between trees. He was moving in the woods, accompanied by some male members of the institute and some villagers to direct them.
After covering almost a kilometer, they reached an isolated place
"Please don't go there!!! Behind that elevated area, is the place that belongs to the dacoits. We can be killed!" ,said a villager.

Suraj instantly replied, "if she is here, then I'll go!!"

Seeing him, others too accompanied him.

It seemed that the woods was cleared from these specific portion. It seemed as if there was some celebration going on. Some half dressed men were beating the drum, and small children were dancing. Suraj and others decided to move quietly.

It seemed as if they were going to have a feast there.
Suraj, "Is there any festival today!?"
One villager, " They celebrate when they kill someone from our community!"
Suraj glared at him angrily and regretted asking him the question!

He could see many, but Chakor was nowhere. Others refused to go in front but Suraj was adamant to not stop.
He moved out from behind the small uplifted land, to be revealed to those 'dacoits'. He was alone and there was sudden disturbance in the reverie of the habitant there as they saw Suraj. His shirt, jacket definitely revealed that he was not one among them.
They all were having a axe in their hands, and they must be twenty to thirty in numbers. Looks were horrible! Long beards which he knew, must made Chakor hate them. He used to call this style as "SUKHI JHAADI". Almost all had healed cuts on their forehead and face. Lower body clad in a long cloth. Upper body exposed.

Suddenly one, who looked like their leader broke the silence and shouted, "How the hell you have come here!?!?"

Suraj, trying his best to stop any vulnerable expressions, he had because of those dreadful thoughts, and acting stern, "I am here to find someone!"

The leader, "Who are you!?"
Suraj, "Suraj Rajvanshi!"
Leader, "What do you want!?"
Suraj, "My wife!"
Leader, "we will hel..." But just then he saw a number of people coming behind Suraj, including some villagers, who they could recognize. This pissed them off. Because the villagers before also came in groups to attack them and thought it was another attempt.

He ordered to attack and capture them. And suddenly it seemed like a complete army approached to capture them. They couldn't fight because they were less. Also, Suraj stopped them from retaliating because he thought Chakor can be with them.

His heart was sinking and throat was dry. He was fearing that every moment passed by, could take his Chakor away from him.

After tying them up, the dacoits made them sit in a group and employed men to guard them. Suraj pleaded, "See! Please leave my wife. I will do anything you want! Okay I can stay here, but please let her go!!!"
The dacoits as if not hearing, began with their celebration.
They were tied with extremely thick ropes, which were rough too. Any attempt to get out of them, bruised the hand brutally and Suraj's hand was completely red now with scratches here and there. But this didn't hurt him. What killed him from inside was Chakor's absence.

It was 9 am that is six hours since Chakor left. He was angry as well as worried on where Chakor could be. On hearing carefully the sounds behind the drum, he heard a loud cry from a woman. There was pain in that cry. But when those dacoits heard it, they started playing drums even more violently as if that cry increased their happiness.

That cry felt like it tore Suraj's heart. He couldn't clearly hear but that voice wasn't familiar, hoping she wasn't Chakor! But another thought crossed his mind, "What if it was Chakor!!!!"
And he instantly roared at them, "STOP DAMN IT!!!"

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Posted: 6 years ago
Surprising that u updated and it's filled with shocks😆
Waiting for next !! *restlessly*
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks Thanks a lot
Vanshi what an update.

Show me laga jatka aur idhar me bi...

Kyaaa yaar, thought there will be some nice Sukor romance in the woods😳

Arey bomb bomb everywhere!!!

Super thrilling!!! loved it

Now I demand you to update sooon...

Thats lovely dear!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Interesting & shocking update😲👏
It was so thrilling👏
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow! Can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing update, so thrilling.
Loved how you described Suraj's reaction.
You ended on a cliffhanger where is Chakor? how will Suraj get free?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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CHAPTER 24



And the rage in his voice startled them. Startled so much that they actually stopped and silenced. And that background voice of a woman screaming became clear. Suraj got suspicious about it!
"What is happening there!?!?!"
"Why is that woman screaming so much!?!?"
At the back of his head, he feared that may be something bad was being done to her. Because whatever their encounter revealed till now, he couldn't think anything good about them.
However, he was clear it was not Chakor!

The dacoits were silent and so were the others. It was only Suraj's and the voice of that woman audible there.
After a lot of effort from Suraj, the dacoit leader finally uttered, "That lady is..."
As soon as he reached this point, a shrill cry of a baby filled the place.

As they heard the baby cry, the whole community danced in joy...and the drums were played again. They started celebrating.

Things were obvious but Suraj was still confused! So he again shouts, "STOP IT!!!! WILL ANYONE TELL ME WHAT IS HAPPENING HERE!"
The leader of the dacoits said, "A lady of our community has just delivered a baby!", a smile formed on all the other faces there except Suraj! He was not getting any trace of Chakor. There was sudden hub-hub in the tent from where that woman's voice was coming and all looked in that direction.

There came Chakor, with a baby boy in her hand wrapped in a white towel. Firstly Suraj couldn't make out what or whom he just saw, but as soon as he realized, he raised his eye only to see his Chakor there. Those tears finally came up, who he had restrained since long. Sigh! Tears soaked in. Confusion took over. Every one astonished!

Chakor handed over the baby to a man, whose expressions said that he was the father of that child. And everyone again danced in joy! And this time everyone means everyone. She was happy.

On moving her eyes around the place and looking at her wrist watch, she realized what the time was. She looked around and found Suraj with others tied there. She almost shouted, "Suraj! You!? Here!?"

The dacoits looked at her expression and approached her, "Madam! They were trying to kill us! These villagers always interrupt in our happiness!!"

Chakor almost glared at him, "He is my husband! Damn!"
And soon the Revelation turned the world upside down for the dacoits!...they shocked to hell..had there mouths left open...!!!
Chakor, "What have you done to them?? Please open the ropes!?"

And whole community ran to open the ropes. And apologized million times for misbehaving with them. After they were released, Chakor ran to Suraj and hugged him. He felt as if he got his escaped life back!! And she was happy being in her best shelter. But shocking became the situation, when Suraj removed her from the embrace and backed off.

She was shocked and so were others from the training institute that included Chakor's classmates and one professor.

However, to lighten up the situation the professor approached, "Chakor! Where were you!? Don't you know how scared he was!? And what are you doing here!?"

Chakor one by one answered," Sir it so happened! That in the morning, I came in the woods for the morning walk. It was almost after a kilometer walk when I heard a woman groaning of pain! When I moved in the direction, I saw that some of these people were taking this woman to the hospital using the worst transport mean, that is 80 km away from here. She was having labour pain, and if delayed in her delivery, she could even die on the way. After making hundred attempts to call the ambulance, I with some other ladies here, decided to do the delivery here!And here it is!"

And hearing this almost everyone started clapping for her. He saved two lives today! Did what an IAS OFFICER is meant to do!

The dacoit continued, " We pray to God when any of our mother gives birth, in this way. Once she delivers, we celebrate! We are apologizing for the misbehaviour as we thought that you all have come to kill us and abandon us of our land! That's why we tried to stop you all!"

Professor, "No we understood the situation! Ultimately everything's fine now. Congratulations for the baby boy!"

Suraj as if Chakor isn't visible, " May I know what is the reason for this enemity between villagers and this community!"
Villagers, "Because they are dacoits!"
Dacoit, "We are dacoits but aren't snatching your land. (To Suraj) Sir, we are living peacefully here, but we have been named dacoits because these people don't accept us as humans just because we don't endulge in their social customs!"

A discussion was held and Suraj acted as a mediator in resolving the disputes between the communities and he was successful.

Then everyone decided to go back to the camp side. In all the while, Suraj didn't talk to Chakor. Even the professor requested him to forgive Chakor this time, but he simply said, "Sorry sir! I think we should go. Tonight we have to head to another destination!"

The camp brightened up seeing Chakor back with Suraj, however in no time, everyone knew Suraj was extremely angry at Chakor. As they reached, he directly entered his tent, without saying a single word to anyone.
The warden headed towards Chakor, "Dear! Are you alright!?! You know what was Suraj's condition!! He turned so vulnerable without you!!"
Another girl, "Yes Chakor! If it was not Suraj sir, we would have lost the hope of finding you!!"
Chakor was feeling bad, on how she troubled Suraj. He was in such a good mood last night and today she hasn't seen him smiling even.
She didn't do anything deliberately and she was well aware why he was behaving this way.

The warden asked Chakor to talk to him and persuade him. He will definitely pardon her!

Chakor went in the tent and saw him sitting there, by a support, his hand rested on his head and eyes were focused up. She slowly went and sat near him. Sighing she began, " Suraj! It was situational. I know that it would have been better if I would have went with you. But I saw you sleeping silently. How can I disturb you!?!Just keep yourself at my place! You'll understand!"
No words from him.

She said, "C'mon Suraj! You love me naaa! Just pardon me this time!! I will never leave you like this again!"
He simply stood up, took out a towel from his bag and went out. Chakor tried to stop him, "Suraj!!" but he left!

At the lunch time, she deliberately sat near Suraj. He didn't go away because that could be insulting for her when everyone is sitting around. But he didn't utter a word.

Today, Chakor learned another thing about him. If he was angry at her, it would seem that he is angry with everyone else also. The other people couldn't digest his gloomy face, which usually makes other lit in happiness.

Just when he was about to have food, Chakor noticed bruises on her hands and there was redness all around.
She immediately became alert, "Mother, see he has bruises! Please give me the first aid box."
When the warden brought the first aid box, Suraj took it before anyone could, "I can do!" and left from there, with his food.



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Posted: 6 years ago
Woah double update!
Loving it.
I loved the way the emotions are surfacing naturally. The twist was cute and relieving.
Update soon. 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Holaaa double damaka..
You made it for the delay.

Wow whataaa lovely twist.

A aawwwhh loving this angry ziddi big child..

Not easy Chakoriya but waiting for the making up in a sukorilicous way pleaseee

Thanks a loads

Hehehe greedy me... When is the next update 😛
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

Holaaa double damaka..

You made it for the delay.

Wow whataaa lovely twist.

A aawwwhh loving this angry ziddi big child..

Not easy Chakoriya but waiting for the making up in a sukorilicous way pleaseee

Thanks a loads

Hehehe greedy me... When is the next update 😛

Definitely not tonight😆😆😆
Enough of dacoits today...yeah anger will lead to something good.
Actually I don't have any pre planning...I just pick up my writing place and scribble my thoughts there😆...
Exams are on head...but as I complete some chapters there, I will definitely give a treat of chapters here😉

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