ARRANGED IN LOVE : SUKOR FF ; LAST CHAPTERS UPDATED: NOV 30! - Page 19

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

The part about the trainee's reaction to knowing that Suraj is married was funny.
This Sukor that we know and love, Chakor is stubborn and Suraj never backs away from a challenge.

Can't wait to know what happens next, will Chakor propose? will Suraj get caught?


Mai...@bold red. . Reading this made me feel like the voice over in the olvs hahaha So cute... Please don't get me wrong


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Posted: 7 years ago
CHAPTER 20



Knocking on the door!
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Thud!
Warden came...
Chakor pleaded to Suraj to go away! But he was lying comfortably on the bed as if not hearing anything. She defeated went to the door only to be caught with her husband or more precisely her mentor. She opened the door and the warden entered smilingly.
Warden, "Chakor! Child take this water and I have brought some Shakespeare books for you." , as she entered. Chakor terrified, turned to be caught.

The Warden near the bed!
"CHAKOR!!!"
Chakor reached her in a second as if she'll say that Suraj isn't visible to her. The warden is hallucinating. ;)
"Did you bring two phones with you? That too this big!"
Chakor checked and Suraj was nowhere!
He must be hiding but where??
Warden, "Chakor! I am asking you something!"
Chakor attentively, "Suraj's! The second one is Suraj's!"
And there was a "Oh shit!" from beside the cupboard that went unheard.

Warden, "How come Suraj's Phone came here!"
Chakor crossing her fingers making sure warden doesn't sees them!
"Mother! I and Suraj were having dinner together...and he gave me his phone and I forgot to return him and he too forgot to take it back!"
Warden, "Ohh! I thought he was here!"
Chakor, "No Mother! He never breaks rules!" crossing her fingers even more tightly.
And someone was giggling in the background.

Warden started arranging the bedsheet and Chakor started helping her.
Warden, "Chakor! Do you know why I asked you all to call me Mother?"
Chakor, "No Mother! Why?" thanking God that Warden didn't doubt her.
Warden, "Chakor! I feel very good vibes around you! You are a happy girl! Your family must be loving you alot!"
Chakor, "I have a very loving family! My both mothers, fathers and husband!"
Warden, "Yes! He too seems a very nice person! He talked to the faculty for one of his students because his mother was ill..also he took the complete responsibility of completing his student's guidance within allotted time and everyone is appreciating him for his kindness!"
Chakor, "I pray his heart always be the same! It's just that he is a bit cruel to me!" realising he must be very smily after hearing good words from her.
"He loves to irritate me! In all he can do anything to piss me off!"
Warden, " Chakor! You are his escapism! Even goodness and maturity can tire you...all needed is to have someone who can bear all his childish acts! And for Suraj, it is you!"
Chakor smilingly, " Can I go to return his phone!" hoping she'll leave soon.
Warden, "Child! He is not in the campus. He has gone out for some work!"
Chakor taken aback by the clever mind of her husband. He misleaded whole campus just to stay with her! Laughing inside and closing the door when Warden goes.

And Suraj comes out frowning, "Am going now! Good night!"
Chakor knew he got angry on listening her complains.
So she stood at the door trying to stop him. But he ignored and approached the door. As soon as he reached the door, she hugged him.

The best thing about them was, what they were to each other, they were not to any other. Any other means no other! Not even to their parents or friends. The beauty of their slow going love was they were opening up to those sides, which they themselves were oblivious to.


Suraj, "I won't stay! I am cruel hainaa!"
Chakor deepening her face in his neck, "As if I'll let you go! Btw, you are cruel!"
Suraj, "As if I can't ask someone else to propose me!"
Chakor, "Ok Suraj! What is the first thing that comes to your mind when you see someone else!?"
Suraj holding her by both the shoulders and breaking the hug, "The first thing I think that, that someone else is not you! Damn it!"
Chakor broke the hug and and sat on one corner of the bed. He followed her to other corner.

She lied down at her respective side of the bed and so did he on his side.
The gap between them defined them more accurately as compared to their proximity.
They looked at each other. Suraj can continue to see her like this till eternity. But she found it more comfortable to look at him with her eyes closed. His image is her heart was very tempting.

Suraj breaking the silence, "Chakor! What are you thinking?"
Chakor, "Just that my unsaid love has it's own beauty!"
Suraj, "So you are not going to propose me??"
Chakor, "Just close your eyes!"
Suraj, "Why!?"
Chakor, "I said close!...May be then it will be easy for me!"
Suraj smiled at her cuteness...took her hand and put it on his closed eyes.
She could feel his lashes under her palm.

She neared him.. because she didn't wanted anyone else in the world to hear what she will say to him.
Because he's the only one entitled to hear this from her.
"Suraj...", tension in her voice!
"Hmm!" , preparing himself to get lost in the moment.
"Suraj! I...I...I...lo...Suraj..I.. lo...!", feeling that today she is going to do world's most difficult task.
"Sura...I... you...I...love..." And at last defeated, she held his shoulder and kissed him on his right cheek. This all was so sudden that the victim below her, couldn't even realize what actually happened. Chakor kissed him! He was shocked plus surprised!

--what did I do!!?...-- cursing herself and smiling at the same time.

His eyes were still closed by her hand. He was numb and so was she. Her simple kiss did so much to him.
Their present position was cherry on the cake.. Chakor was almost over him and as soon as she realized it, she left him and turned making sure she's not facing him.

He gently opened his eyes only to find her at a distant cuddled in herself, facing opposite side. He didn't disturb her and laid at his place facing the ceiling and cherishing his moments of love. He was smiling at how innocent she is in love. He could make out why it was so difficult for her to say I LOVE YOU to him. She believes in feeling more than speaking. And it is her nature to be quiet...after all he fell for this only.

After almost fifteen twenty minutes, he went to see her and found her asleep. The hub hub outside was now seized. And nature started spilling it's love in the form of snow.
He covered her with the blanket and went to the washroom to get freshen up. As he was about to wash his face, he noticed a gloss mark on his cheek. Cancelling the idea to wash his face, he wished he could preserve this mark like a fossil.

In the morning, Chakor woke up on hearing the alarm at four. She saw through the window and found the mesmerizing snow fall. Suraj was nowhere, may be he left. However there was a note in her hand,
"Good morning!
Am leaving! But will surely return your favour!"

Favour! What favour! And the events of last night flashed in front of her eyes. She smiled saying,
"I LOVE YOU SURAJ!"

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful update, no words for it👏
Sukor's moment was beautiful😳
Loved Chakor's proposal
Sukor are so adorable
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's beautiful
Had a smile throughout

So placid the way he kept quite after the proposal that was really different no knee jerk emotions

Loved their knok jok haha evil cruel...

Hope she gets a good return😉 for her favour..

Lovely
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Posted: 7 years ago
CHAPTER 21
Days passed!
Suraj and Chakor both were focused in their respective works. Chakor was concentrated on developing herself as an administrator, full of enthusiasm and energy. Suraj, on the other hand did his best to inculcate best in his trainees.

The only time they met not as mentor-trainee was the breakfast, lunch and dinner.. talking to their families once a day, talking about each other etc. Suraj nowhere mentioned his wish to take their relationship to another level. It was almost three months in the training camp. He probably enjoyed having Chakor as his girlfriend. ;)
Suraj was a very disciplined person but all his flirting hormones would become active as soon as Chakor pops up. And these hormones worked more to irritate Chakor rather than please her. He used to flirt with OTHER girls in front of Chakor to activate the possessive side if his GIRLFRIEND cum wife. And most of the time, he was successful. She hated when he even looked at another girl. And she would shout at him as if he caused an earthquake!
" Why don't you marry one of them!?"
"Or rather you should go and stay in their rooms! One is staying just beside me!"
Suraj would act like bechara, "Chakor! I was just talking with them!"
Chakor, "Haan you were just talking that whether they are committed or single! As if you find them single, you'll search a fool for them!"
Suraj, "As I am already taken!" pouting and receiving a flying pillow at the same time!


Chakor on the other hand, was slowly being mentally prepared to kill the awkwardness that arises between them. However, that awkwardness had it's own beauty. They came near in some or the other consequences, but this awkwardness acted like a comma, breaking the sentence of love. If that awkwardness failed somehow, there were many things.
One such instance was when Chakor went to Suraj's room and found all clothes and things spread all over the room. Yes! He was never like this but he became so habitual to Chakor that he almost forgot some good habits he owned from his childhood.
Chakor, "Suraj! I haven't seen such a careless person as you! You would have at least told me before!"
Suraj, "Chakor! It's not my fault! Why have you started doing all my work...I have lost the practice now!"
Chakor assembling all his t-shirts and folding them, "This kind of practice loosing can cause you harm later, Suraj! God knows! Where we will be posted after this! May be at the two extremes of the country."
This saddened him and he sat on the bed near her.
"Chakor! It will be very difficult for us to meet even once a week."
Chakor, "This had to happen Suraj...we will have to face it."
And he stood up and hugged her from behind, "If this continues for a longer time, I'll definitely resign from my post."
Chakor adjusting herself in his hold and holding his hands, "Suraj, may be living far from each other will result in intensifying our love! Be positive! We have both our passion and our love!"
Suraj, "BTW, what do you mean be intensifying love! Our love is already intense! If not yours then at least mine!"
Chakor, "Oh! Someone's trying to hide his shyness!"
And that was an alarm!
He shifted her hairs from the back of her neck. He didn't even proceed further, still Chakor had those unusual sensations. His breath was enough to make her lose herself. His fingers worked on her neck.
Outside it was very cold and so were his fingers. It was night time and snowfall is a usual phenomena. But today it looked like snow is falling to witness the love that was blooming in Suraj's room.
She got afraid and excited thinking what would come next. And he was hell bent on proving he isn't shy!
His face neared her neck and in his husky voice, "You'll see today, how shy i am!"...kissed her. As his lips touched her skin, she squeezed his hand that she held telling him what effect he had on her. He further proceeded to the back of her ears, "You can give up!"
Chakor realizing what he is up to, "Is it a race!?"
Suraj, "hmm!",and hmm was definitely a turn on! However Chakor was not an ordinary. She was sure Suraj won't exceed beyond a certain limit and Suraj was sure Chakor would stop him.
A race! Definitely a race! To prove the other person shy! TYPICAL SUKOR!!!
He moved further to kiss on her ear lobe. She was all the way losing herself but she can't lose against him. He too was in shock that why and how Chakor isn't moving away or hitting him. So MR.RAJVANSHI PROCEEDED!
He made Chakor turn in his arms and face him. He was sure that there exists no tomato in the world which could stand in front of her at that particular moment. Her eyes were closed, hands on his shoulders and lips redder than her face.
She was definitely the most beautiful girl on the earth that time. In almost nine months of their marriage, there were nine million instances when he thought the same.
Chakor was mentally getting ready for what was coming. No matter what but in his arms she felt very comfortable. It seemed as if they were made for her only. She trusted him more than a life. BUT definitely the race was more important.
He neared to her lips and was about to touch when his phone rang! TING TING!...
And the first thing they did was to move and turn away. It was a TIE!
After regaining his senses, Suraj picked up the phone and at once became alert hearing his father's voice! Chakor understood that Kn has called but she knew she won't be able to talk.
While on call, Suraj heard the door open and close. When turned, he saw Chakor nowhere.
After ending the call, he texted her,
"SORRY!
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NEXT TIME! I'LL MAKE SURE THE PHONE IS SWITCHED OFF!"
And she smiled reading this.
Everyone wants to be complete, but there is something more pleasurable about being incomplete. And that's what they loved!


They respected each other alot from the very first day. Obviously, they fought, they flirted, they laughed together but everything had a boundary.
It happened so that one morning Suraj woke up before time and got ready very early. They were to report in the ground at 4 am and it was 3:40 am. He thought to surprise Chakor and so he went to her room.

Without knocking the door, he entered the room and found Chakor no where. Sounds were coming from the washroom and so it was confirmed she is in washroom. He stood at the door and waited for her so that he can surprise her.
Tap closed. Her humming voice. Door opened. She comes out.
But damn! In a bathrobe!
Suraj shouts feeling that she's out, "GOOD MORNING CHAKOR!" and turns towards her.
She was all wet and her hairs flung open. She was shocked seeing him and in a moment held her bathrobe tight making sure she's fully covered!
It was Suraj's turn to go red! He was embarrassed. They lived in the same room but he used to stay out when Chakor was changing. And this was the first time he saw her like this. He immediately turned making sure he could lessen the embarrassment and awkwardness he caused in the room.

Chakor frowned at him, " May I know what are you doing here?!"
Suraj stammering, "Chakor... Chakor..I wanted to give you a surprise!"
Chakor, "Haan! Am very surprised!" and went in the washroom.
From the washroom, she called for him to give her, her clothes. And he did. And then he quietly sat at one corner of the couch preparing himself for a great scolding from Chakor.

She changed into her clothes and came out. Seeing him seated there...she came towards him, doing her hair. And he was avoiding to look at her. He was very ashamed of himself however, Chakor's sight to this was different. She wasn't ashamed because she knew Suraj has complete rights on her and this is normal. If not now, then it will be normal afterwards. Why not get used to it!
For Suraj, he broke his own rules. No matter how friendly he got with Chakor, he respected her the most. May be she herself never kept herself on a pedestal as high as he did.
Chakor sat near him and side hugged him, "It's ok! Suraj!"

After this incident, he didn't come to her room for next four five days. After which Chakor made a lot of efforts and brought him there.


Presently,
Three months for academic preparations were to be followed by three months of ground experience.
As called by Suraj, his batch was assembled in the canteen.
"So everyone! Hope you had your breakfast. Yesterday marked the end of your learning session! Now we will further proceed to some ground zero works."
All were excited and they beemed up with joy.
"We are going for HIMALAYAN TREKKING, tomorrow by bus! Bus because in our way, we have to explore many remote areas, many people and believe me! This is going to be the best experience of your life!So start your packing... we'll meet at lunch! Tomorrow early morning your usual time, we'll depart!"

After all dispersed, he went to Chakor, "BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR FIRST HONEYMOON!"
And she was left smiling, blushing...








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Posted: 7 years ago
Since everyone was busy taking leap...I thought I should also take it! 😆😆😆
But my leap is a bit different...the leads are living at same place and in course of time, their love has evolved! Basically, unlike Ekta Kapoor's leap.😆
I want comments and big one😆.
This chapter dedicated to Shreeti di🤗
Bhagwaan apko sada sukorian banaye rakhe😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful update, no words for it👏
Sukor's almost kiss moment was beautiful & hot😉😳
The morning bathrobe incident was awlwawk for both espicespec Suraj😆
Suraj will not leave a chance to annoy Chakor😆
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
There's beauty in being incomplete. Sounds so gentle yet so pure and beautiful. Vanshu! You have an amazing style of writing. This subtle romance already has me in awe. I m so happy. I always wanted love stories to be this way. Caring!
About being a sukorian, no idea what is in store for me.

But THANK YOU SO MUCH!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful ❤️
Subtle and sweet
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Posted: 7 years ago
First thanks for bringing the solace...
It was like a beautiful river flowing through woods with huzzle.

I loved incomplete and that's serene...

The near kiss and miss was subtle and bliss..

Awwh dude feeling awkward seeing her in bathrobe... So cute he was waiting to take her scolding...

Loving the flow Vanshu... Waiting eagerly what's in store during the honeymoon..

Her wantings of him is beautifully building.

Please update soon... Greedy am I 😳

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