ARRANGED IN LOVE : SUKOR FF ; LAST CHAPTERS UPDATED: NOV 30! - Page 11

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Posted: 7 years ago
good update
but sad to note Sashwat has unintentionally paved the MU for Sukor..

Hmmm hope things are sorted before it goes out of control

it was nice to see Chakor smile at the engagement photo

thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 11A

It all was really fast. Suraj couldn't make out why Chakor left. He didn't even called his parents or in laws. And they too couldn't contact him as he broke his phone. Arhaan ( Suraj's PA) couldn't make out what was wrong. He used to get frustrated at the smallest thing. Shouting on him, others, completely different from what he was before. He didn't use to have food, not use to return home. He used to stay at his office room. He missed her alot. Her absence made him vulnerable. But he was egoistic enough to not ask her the reason for leaving.

On the other hand, Chakor who was in family care, still was at her worse. Shashwat used to crack jokes in order to make her feel better...but she didn't even smile. Nor she talked with her parents. She was very angry on what they did. She well knew why Suraj isn't trying to talk to her...but herself never took a step forward.

It's taught to an IAS, that respect your status more than you respect yourself. It happened that in an interview, an interviewer threw a pen when a contender was sitting in front of him. He was selected because instead of picking the pen on his own, he rang the call button to call up the peon who picked up the pen. Although this seems very rude...but believe me..this is what an IAS officer is taught. To never underestimate himself, to never think low of himself, to always respect his post. And our two students, took this lesson to a serious extent. ;) Neither Suraj, nor Chakor were willing to take a step forward and break the ice. And this continued for long 14 days!!!

Thanks to our ARRANGED COUPLE. phew!

It was the 15th day. Since Chakor came from Delhi. And the next day, was there six months anniversary. Chakor woke up with a heavy head. It seemed to her that this day is going to be really long one for her. She was thinking about whether Suraj must have had his morning coffee or not. He must not get late to office as he hates it. He must have wore his pink t-shirt because all others he wanted to replace...all about him when suddenly her mother entered.
Kasturi: Chakor! Child get ready! Today we have a surprise for you.
She took out a dress from the wardrobe and gave it to Chakor.
Chakor: I want to be in my room. I will not go anywhere.
Kasturi: For me!!
Chakor frustrated rose up: "mom! You haven't even given my phone. Don't you know there are things for which I need Phone. Everytime n everything just for u all. Have you ever thought about what I want. You wanted me to be an IAS officer, ok! I made it my ambition...you wanted me to marry Suraj, I accepted him too...and now you want me to wear it...You know what, I am frustrated with all this."
And she took the dress and went in to change.
Kasturi smiled at this.

After changing, Chakor came out to have breakfast and ask for apology from her mother for her rude behavior. All were seated with mysterious expressions on their faces. None could literally tell what was coming up next. Although they tried hard to act normally.

Kasturi pointed to sit her on a seat next to Shashwat's. Chakor composed herself and took her place.
Bhuvan began, " So! Today I will make a special announcement! Hope you all are ready!"
Kamalnarayan, "Obviously we are!"
Looking at Chakor, " Beta! Are you?"
Chakor, "Papa, I am ok!"
Bhuvan, " Seeing the things from all perspectives, I want to announce that it is better for Suraj and Chakor to part their ways. And for Chakor, I have choosen Shashwat!"
Someone's world shattered hearing this from her own father.
Kamalnarayan, "I agree...and for Suraj too...I have a girl ...who he will be properly settled in Suraj's life."
Kasturi, "Yes! You two don't have to live together because of pressure."

This was where Chakor lost all her patience..and even respect for her parents and in-laws. She wanted to say so dreadful to them that they wash off their intentions at once. But no! Her inner conscience never allowed... although she said,
" Are you all mistaken! Thinking am an object! Some days with this person! Other days with another! Don't you all see how much I love Suraj! It's not always needed to indulge in a typical husband wife relation. He gave me time to know him, to accept him just because he never wanted to come in the way of my ambition. And you all took it to such an extreme...Do you all even know what place he holds in my heart. I can never imagine myself without him..and you all want me to marry him( pointing at Shashwat) and you!! You were the only one who brought Suraj in my life...now you pay no heed what this will result in. Let me tell you all, do whatever you want...I will not do anything you want at least this time."
And she went inside banging the door behind her.

All family members were shocked. They haven't seen Chakor like this before..even not her parents.
Kamalnarayan, " What happened? This is what we expected!"

Now it seemed she would flood her room with tears. Too much it was to bear. She couldn't tolerate it any more. Why is she away from him even when she loves him so much!!! Why? And she decided to call him... searching for her phone. Then suddenly she remembered that she isn't having one. She wiped off her tears and went to get the landline. She picked up the phone but Bhuvan took it saying, "We have cut all the wirings so that Suraj doesn't irritate you!"
Chakor saw him with anger filled eyes and moved to her room.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Now this is called extreme emotions taking up!!
I love it so much.. I loved the way Chakor reacted and can't wait to see what happens next. I want a Suraj view point soon.. but again, let the story go as planned. I am enjoying THOROUGHLY!!

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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update.👏
Chakor's extreme emotions are our😊
Lets see how Suraj will react
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow exciting...Super
this is the real Chakor who does not mess about and mince words!!! ha ha would have been less imagined if Sashwat was wacked by Chakor in her anger ha ha

Would like to know the state of Suraj and how dumbos these parents and in laws are.

very nice update!!!

and thanks for a quick one too!!


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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 11B

Suraj felt very uneasy today...he couldn't get what was actually wrong. Although everything was wrong around him. He couldn't make out what's wrong. His behavior must be the reason...but was it so big that Chakor left him without saying a single word. It hurt him like dagger in his chest. He kept on working... paying no heed to his mind n body. But if not heart, body gives up soon. Today he had a high fever. When everyone in the office knew this, they requested him to go back to home. He couldn't refuse to those employees who were superior in age...so he went home. Home to him seemed hell. No Chakor. Not her feel. Not her voice. Not her fragrance. Nothing. He so wanted to be with her. Not be with her, then just see her.

He went in the kitchen to make a tea for himself. He was thinking what Chakor must be doing right now. He wasn't feeling light. It was more today as compared to the other days. May be because of the fever. He broke his phone and didn't bother to buy another one because he wanted no one to contact him. Only Arhaan n other officials could do related to work on his another phone. On that phone even, Chakor's number was most dialled and at the top of call logs...but he used to only press the disconnect button just after dialling.

He went to bed to take rest but couldn't sleep.

On the other hand, Kasturi knocked Chakor's room door. Chakor didn't open it. Kasturi from outside, "Child! Come out! We have to go to Temple to talk to the priest about your kundalis"
Chakor opened the door. Saw the kundalis in her hand and snatched hers. She picked up a matches from her drawer and put her kundali to fire. Kasturi tried stopping her...but Chakor's rage was far more greater.
In all this, everyone came and saw what happened. Shashwat was terrified at this. He asked Chakor to calm down. But Chakor asked him to get lost from her room and no one should dare come in her room now.
Kamalnarayan, "We know child what you are going through. But remember we always want your right. Kasturi, let's go to Temple...the priest will know Chakor's part by her birth date n time."

Chakor was really disappointed at this. She wanted to stop them anyhow. But not possible. They all left the place and went to Temple including Shashwat. Chakor was now alone.

Feeling complete silence around her, Chakor tried to calm down herself and wiped off her tears. She washed her face and went out of her room in order to search for a way to escape this situation. She looked here and there but found nothing. She wasn't sure what she was actually searching. She checked the landline but none worked as her father said. She was checking behind the sofa pillows, under the table, when suddenly an idea striked her brain.

She went to Kasturi's room to search for her own phone. She checked the dressing table... nothing was there. Then she checked the almirah, where she didn't struggle as it was already unlocked. She looked for her phone and yesss!!! She found it. She smiled after a long time. She took her phone and went to her room, locked it from inside and switched on her phone hoping to find a million of Suraj's missed calls.

Yes! There were missed calls... million of missed calls but not from Suraj. All the random, useless people called her except him. She was shattered at this. But no! She herself never tried to call him. Why should he do?

Keeping everything aside, she dialled his number, "the number you are trying to call, does not exist!"
THUDD!
What happened to him? Her all concern was at function now. He hasn't contacted anyone. Why?? Is he fine...or...no!!! She doesn't want to imagine something dreadful.

At another instance, she looked at the time...it was 11:05 am. Chakor thought he must be in office...yes!! I should call Arhaan.

She called Arhaan.

Arhaan picked up the call. Some relief. She tried to speak normally.
Chakor, "Hello Arhaan! This is Chakor!"
Arhaan, "Hi Chakor! Long time! No see!"
Chakor, " Arhaan I wanted to talk to Suraj! But his phone is not reachable. Can you please give him the call."
Arhaan, "Chakor! Don't you know he broke his phone many days before. Although you can contact him on his office number. Tejaswini aunty too called me yesterday to ask about him. Is everything ok!"
Chakor, "Yes yes! Everything is fine! No problem."
Arhaan, " ok then! I am forwarding your call to Suraj! Talk to him and do disconnect mine" and started laughing.
Chakor, "yes! Thank you!"
He forwarded. The bell was ringing. Suraj picked up the call without seeing who it was.
Suraj, "Hello! DM Suraj Rajvanshi here!" In his feeble voice!
Chakor couldn't utter a word!
His voice made her complete. Suraj too woke up instantly as he could feel a tinge in his heart. He could feel her presence.
To confirm, " Hello! Am I audible!"
Chakor still couldn't say a thing.
Suraj now sure, "Chakor!!"
And she broke into tears!!! He could hear her crying. Tears escaped his eyes also. He so wanted her. He so wanted to stop her tears. He so wanted to feel her beside him.
Now after a lot of struggle, he managed to compose himself and said, " Chakor! Why are you crying? What happened? Is everything fine? Mumma- papa are they all right? Are you alright?"
Chakor couldn't yet speak as she was crying alot! She couldn't speak anything.
Suraj, "Chakor! Calm down! Everything will be fine. Just tell me. I will see. ...ok! First of all stop crying. Go n wash your face. Am calling you after a minute.

This one minute gap was like one year. Although he waited for her to calm down. But as she felt she's ok. She called him.
Suraj picking up the phone, "Are you ok now?"
Chakor, "hmm"
Suraj, " now tell me! What happened?"
Chakor, " please come and take me with you. I don't want to stay here!"
Suraj, " Chakor! I can say now it is something serious! Tell me!"
Chakor began from how Kasturi called her and asked everything on swear. And how they took her away forcefully... asking her to message him about her departure. And now, asking her to part her ways with him and marry Shashwat!
Chakor, "I don't know what happened to them! Suraj it is wrong!!"
Suraj was raged hearing all this. He was so angry that he wanted to hit something hard on Shashwat's head! How could he think so!
His parents! They are acting like his worst enemies! What the hell is wrong with them!!

Thinking much on this topic, he reached a conclusion.
Chakor, "Suraj! What is to be done further?"
Suraj, "Nothing Chakor!!"
Chakor shockingly, "What! Don't tell me you agree with them!!!"
Suraj, "areyy! No!! Never!! Actually I will ask you some questions. Keep your hand on your heart. Close your eyes. Listen to what it says and answer me! Ok! Are you ready?"
Chakor, "ok! I am ready!"
Taking the position, keeping her hand on her chest, closing her eyes, she started hearing him.
Suraj, "Chakor do you want to live with me?"
Chakor, " yes!"
Suraj, "Can you spent your whole life with me?"
Chakor, "yes!"
Suraj, "You are alright with you decision to marry me?"
Chakor, "yes! I am."
Suraj, "You love me?"
Chakor, "Yes! I do!"... suddenly realizing what she said, all blood gushed to her face. She couldn't get, what literally happened. She was lost in her own ecstasy when Suraj's voice interrupted.
"Chakor! Pack your things! I am coming!"
Chakor, "Surr... listen to me!!"
Suraj, "No more words! The next face you are going to see is mine. Just wait."

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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update🤗
You are on roll, back to back update, thanks😊
Suraj's condition was same as Chakor😭
What is wrong with Sukor's parents, can't they see Chakor's pain😡
Finally Sukor talked
Suraj is so angry
Loved the way Suraj made Chakor confess her feelings
Suraj is coming back to take her
Waiting for next
Edited by katheriene - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
VANSHUUU!
Each of the lines and my heart was beating fast. It was as if I could feel it completely.
This is getting on my mind. Want the next update sooo.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Back to back beautiful updates👍🏼
I am loving it !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is truly bonanza...
Lovely i could literally imagine it

Excellent you have coined the words..

Back to back.. Happy

Thanks deary waiting for the dude to blast everyone and take her in style

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