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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi sis..
Tq for the pm..sis
Omg..its sweating here..can't imagine chakor like tat..
Its a very big surprise..mr.lust acts as a mr.gentlemen..
Wat happen btw them?
Sis..y did u stop here..my head s going to blast thinking abt wat happens btw them?
So many suspense..i have a very lil heart..so pls update soon sis..
Luv u sis for tis suspense thriller stories..

Hey dear!

No need to thanks for the PM dear!

Sorry dear for making you wait!

Needed a suspense! LOL

Just 3 days and the next part will be out! :-;

Love you too dear for all your lovely words and amour!

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@appledesire

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Sensuous. .. hotness beyond imagination. ..

In this... I feel.." roles reversal" happened

Chakor doll. . Ur testing.. suraj patience..

Control. . Difficult task..

Bt.. 1 thing I thot.. she shud bombarded suraj with her questions..

Bt shes on anothr track.. she just crave for suraj..
I wish.. she let him know.. how much she loves him bt helpless due to circumstances. .

Chakor... you are such a wild cat.. nt a doll

😆

I wish..I cn read..till end without any wait

*patience issues 😆 *

Enjoyed loadss while reading..

Kaash.. aisa kuch scene serial mei hota

Edited by appledesire - 8 years ago

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Honeymoon in Paris

Kiss in Paris

Now striping

You always surprise me with your writing... Everytime u break ur own records... 😃

Seriously I am enjoying this trip to Paris... Maybe more than them... 😆

About your writing, huh hell I am at lack of words, speechless u see after reading this Paris description and trip 👏

How u portrayed Drunk Chakor was beyond fabulous... It was pleasure reading it...

U took it a good medium to depict Chakor's feelings towards Suraj which were hidden behind curtains of guilt... One amazing way of your writing..

Loved reading it... ❤️

Update soon

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: vk1nonly
According to me, nothing happened between them. Because Suraj well knew that Chakor is not in her senses. She would hate him even more if anything happens or she will die of guilt.
Suraj in your story is portrayed as an intelligent person. He won't do anything so wrong.
That's my opinion. Don't know what happens.
But it was good.
I won't throw any tomatoes on you.
Just chill.
By the way, I am going to follow you on Instagram.
My username is @vijayendrakumeriafanno.1

I won't say anything about your hypothesis and opinions as to not ruin the suspense/shock which could be in the next part!

Thanks for assuring me dear!😛

Glad you find it interesting!

Followed you!

And thanks once again for your lovely words in the comment section of Arranged Marriage!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Sukor moment was so hot & wild😉
Chakor's fantasies are so wild, poor suraj😆
I think nothing happened between sukor as suraj was sober😉
Waiting for next

Thanks yaar!
Chakor's wildcat avatar came in her drunken state. LOL
One more day dear and everything will be clear!
No! I'm not talking about the secret but about the night!😈

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: sumsukor
You make me wonder Maithu...
what a flow

Just was getting hottt but then nice to bring the gentleman in Suraj. Just liked the way you said CONTROL CONTROL!!!! haha well the readers were definitely loosing their contrl...

Chakor was sooo cute... rightly as somebody said Suraj would dare touch her when she is not in her senses as he knows how the wild cat will turn against him... So he is taking cool!!!

Excellent , hope the dots (lots of questions in mind------ sure you will answer in your style) are connected and get to get the real hot scene...

Waiting for the next one!

Thanks for the complement dear!
Those words mean a lot for me!

Finally Suraj is getting goody good comments.

Luckily, you are all not loosing interest in the story as I'm keeping the secret for a long time.
Like it's been more than 3 weeks since I'm saying 'Just wait you will get your answer!'
Thankfully, you are all patient with me.

Thanks once again.

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Awww drunken chakor is treat to watch...
Her wild fantasy and Suraj too hot to handle...
Suraj is perfect gentleman he know she is not in her sense...so keep distance...love this Suraj...
So DDLJ part 2 scene coming soon...chakor misunderstood Suraj and lots of raita phalauing...i would like to see some respect for suraj in chakors eyes apart from love and hate... ..fantastic update Maithu...

I'm so happy that the drunken Chakor has left an impact.
Oh Suraj from CAY, you r turning lucky with all the good comments you get for this post.
I don't know if DDLJ 2 is going to happen or not but sure you will see the respect in Chakor's eyes in her own ways.
Thanks a lot dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Superb!

Drunk Chakor was too wild for Suraj! Who could imagine he'll be the one showing restraint!! I'm happy he was a gentleman and didn't take advantage of her state.

I believe nothing happened between them, but will Suraj tell her the truth or leave her imagination to run wild.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks yaar!

Wow! Suraj is gaining Respect! I'm so happy for him!

Oh Suraj! Lucky man! LOL

Ahaan! That's the question!

Have to wait approximately 1 day, so I can finish that part and post it.

I will be on time!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: appledesire
Sensuous. .. hotness beyond imagination. ..

In this... I feel.." roles reversal" happened

Chakor doll. . Ur testing.. suraj patience..

Control. . Difficult task..

Bt.. 1 thing I thot.. she shud bombarded suraj with her questions..

Bt shes on anothr track.. she just crave for suraj..
I wish.. she let him know.. how much she loves him bt helpless due to circumstances. .

Chakor... you are such a wild cat.. nt a doll

😆

I wish..I cn read..till end without any wait

*patience issues 😆 *

Enjoyed loadss while reading..

Kaash.. aisa kuch scene serial mei hota

Oh dear!

If this is hotness, what would have been if I really go in more details. LOL

You are absolutely right.

That's what I tried to do 'Roles reversal!'

And I think I got successful as few pities him or feels him to be a gentle man... Thank goodness, it clicked.

I wanted to not go on the same track where they discuss their pbms and all, instead wanted to show her inner self.

That's why this Chakor.

Yeah A Wild-Cat in the for of a Doll! :-;

Sorry dear! Have to wait!

I will post it tomorrow morning! Promise!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: J.arora
Honeymoon in Paris

Kiss in Paris

Now striping

You always surprise me with your writing... Everytime u break ur own records... 😃

Seriously I am enjoying this trip to Paris... Maybe more than them... 😆

About your writing, huh hell I am at lack of words, speechless u see after reading this Paris description and trip 👏

How u portrayed Drunk Chakor was beyond fabulous... It was pleasure reading it...

U took it a good medium to depict Chakor's feelings towards Suraj which were hidden behind curtains of guilt... One amazing way of your writing..

Loved reading it... ❤️
Update soon

Thanks for your lovely words dear!

When I think about what to do, I just want to write something that I didn't do expect those kisses which are present in almost every stories of mines.

I feel like I'm obsessed with kisses that I write a story with title KISS! I pity myself! LOL

I'm so happy that you are enjoying this trip.

But sorry to say, it comes to an end in the next part that will be there tomorrow.

Glad you liked the drunken Chakor part, it was a difficult task as each time the orthographe corrector was rewriting my texts.

Thanks a lot once again.

Will be there on time.