Kidnapped Lover Sukor part 14 pg 29 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear..loved it..pls update next part ...eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey awesome people , am sorry for updating soo late , i've had an event at school nd i was badly caught up with it , one of the odd perks of schooling!!! but thank you guys sooo much for encouraging my writing and story , it helps to update no matter how busy and caught up i get , also distract me from the not-so-cool sukor track , its soo sad 😭 . Anyhow thank you all commentators and likes

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Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Kaha ho yaar...

Please update naa...


Agar school nahi hoti toh main pakka isse jaldi upload karti :'(
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Chapter 4

He kept on rubbing her cold hands waiting impatiently for the doctor to arrive , his eyes fixed on the unconscious chakor laid on the bed he had always changed turns trying to earn any kind of peaceful sleep.

She looked soo miserable, it seemed that the cheerful, bubbly , strong Chakor they had all witnessed previously din't exist at all, he cursed himself inwardly knowing he was indirectly the reason of her state, he din't have rights to confront her on this topic , out of all people atleast not him , he himself forgot how many people's blood stained his hands. He was surely not the one who was capable to judge her, he wished to hurt something badly as he reminsced her terrified expression , it seemed as if she saw death itself right infront of her eyes.


Soon after the doctor arrived , all were directed to leave the room for him to examine his patient but Suraj completely denied having to leave her alone , he was never good at trusting people , that was one reason he became all suspicious when Chakor insisted to stay under his roof instead of running back home like every kidnapped victim did after being released


"How am i suppose to examine her in your presence???" The doctor insisted placing a cross on his heart wishing he wouldn't trigger suraj's anger


"Do i seem like to give a damn??????" He yelled angrily , removing his gun out of his pocket , gripping the handle tight


Realizing Suraj will do nothing but terrorize him harder if he insist,the doctor started his examination, He pulled his stethoscope out of his bag , checking her heartbeat variation, soon the stethoscope was replaced by a blood pressure checking maching then rubbing a neat alcohol drenched cotton on her arm , he proceeded by inserting an injection

"Whats wrong with her?" Suraj asked concernedly as he watched her flinch at the needle sting inspite of being unconscious.

"It's a case of high blood pressure , probably she's been stressed about something , has she had the issue of high blood pressure a lot lately???" he asked while writing a prescription

"How would i know???" He yelled at the doctor still poundering on the fact by mere discusing okay , perhaps he went ahead of discusing, but her blood pressure increased soo drastically in just a few minutes


Taken aback by suraj's loud tone the doctor fearfully answered , "You should know about your Wife's medical history for future references"


That's it , he almost pulled the trigger aiming at the doctor, "She's not my Wife!!!!" he yelled at the doctor , realization finally hitting the poor man, 'if i stay here any longer i will be the one with a high blood pressure issue' he thought before giving the prescription form to suraj and leaving the room silently

He ordered his men to retire to their respective room and sat on a chair beside his bed still keeping his gaze on Chakor , 'there was more to it' he thought, soon after tiredness took over his eyes and he surrended his mind to it.


The next morning Suraj winced as the sunrays teased his closed eyes, he slowly opened them and became alerted as some whimpering reached to his ears , the last day's event rushed back to him in the form of a single word 'Chakor' , He turned to her watching her whimpering in the sleep , mummuring something unconsciously , tightening her closed eyes , as if trying to erase whatever she was seeing at that very moment

He approached to her sitting on the bed grabbing her shoulders shaking her slowly

"Chakor, wake up" He tried to be as comforting as he could but his tone was nothing but harsh , who could blame him , emotions were just not his domaine


'no...i...din.nt...they lied...no murder...cars..." She kept on mumbling the random words confusing suraj harder


Unable to take in her state patiently , he reached for the glass of water which laid on the table beside of bed , pouring it all harshly on Chakor


"Nooo!!!" She yelled waking up with a jerk , kicking her feeet out of the blanket she was rolled in , least she knew there was someone beside her who would affected by the kick ,but then she heard a loud 'thud'

She confusingly looked around her surrounding , few guys entering the room , perhaps disturbed by the loud sound

They were all greeted by the most shocking scenerio , a drenched quizzical chakor on the bed , and Suraj ...down on the floor, his hands between his leg, his cheeks puffy , face all red and him trying his best holding the muffled groans which slipped between his lips


Following the guys' gaze chakor looked down and winced as she found Suraj in pain holding his groin ,she had mixed feeling at that instant but she realized it was a bad time to display both , she gulped down the fear and laughters down her throat and stood from the bed.


"You morons , give me a hand" he yelled at his men feeling embarassed as chakor's gaze fell on him


She watched him stand with the help of the other guys , she could feel the memory of the previous day rushing back to her , he judged her just like the rest , he just assumed she was the evil one , why wouldnt he ??? She received worst responses from people who knew her from ages , infact she saw doubt , guilt and pity even in her parents eyes ...so how could she blame Suraj???

"Are you crazy???" He yelled at her having stood on his feet , he was only trying to help her from her nightmare , but she just had to repay him with a kick on his balls , a kick which still hurt


"I din't ask you to throw water on me" she mumbled slowly... refusing to meet his gaze, she was afraid to see what his eyes held for her , 'disgust, pity???' just when she thought a new commencement were about to initiate , her past just had to bishslap her back in her face.


He could see ,infact everyone in the room could notice the girl who were yesterday was no where , she was stripped off her powerful strength shield "I was helping you ungrateful girl"

Her neck turned on his own quickly as his words hit her 'helping???'

"You were going crazy in your sleep, as if you aint enough while awake" He glared at her

It was then she remembered her nightmare , it was one which conquered her dreamland and refused adammantly to let go of its reign, those who said she met with a deadly accident once really had to live in her mind and see if it's true, She lives that deadly accident everynight , with the same pain

She raised her face slowly , gathering courage to meet his eyes for once , she was then greeted by a completely new emotion , it was neither , suspicious , nor digust nor pity. His gaze were completely blank


She frowned looking at him closely , why weren't he pushing her away? saying evil words like he did , judging her , why his eyes were still emotionless towards her like the very first time they met ???


"Listen , as per our deal , you're the house servant until your sister's wedding over here so you should really get your butt off , start cleaning and making breakfast" He realized she wanted to know why he wasn't questioning her like he was , but he nowb understood , he was the last person who should think about her past and judge her about it , she was nothing to him , just a random girl who won a bet against him and he counts to keep it like that

"Boss lets keep it on cleaning" A man come from the crowd stated with a painful look plastered on his face


While Chakor pursed her lips together knowing the exact reason why , Suraj frowned upon the statement and insisted the deal should be kept as it were made , forcing her to resume her works

"But boss" Another guy retorted by was shut was the loud "follow my orders" of suraj

Gradually all left the room for their respective work leaving Chakor behind to herself , they were being NORMAL to her , like yesterday never existed , like they din't find such a huge truth about her , she din't know whether she should be happy about it or worry it might be the silence before a storm , but no, as she thought previously , this was a new beginning and she wouldn't do by running away like a coward , she would face it, anyway her Post traumatic stress disorder were breaking her enough

As she thought of her illness , a memory triggered her back , the first time she had her nightmares , nobody had attempted to wake her up from it , she had to live the whole accident again and again till the very end but today it was abruptly interupted by Suraj.

She setted the bed , cleaning the room and proceeded towards the kitchen , breakfast should be a good way too start the day

She felt a deja vu feeling as she looked around the kitchen wondering what to cook again, she could have made toast and cereals but doubted that would feed a bunch of crazy hungry bulky men

"Gobi ke parathe !!" An idea clicked again in her head , of course , she did see her mom made it , she remembered the ingredients , well most of the ingredients but it'll do

Tying her hairs in an updo , she kned the dough , she struggled hard though , sometimes the dough would be too hard , sometimes too sloppy

Adi , Jagan and few other guys gulped as they peeked by the window watching Chakor cook , after the potato mashed they ate yesterday , they were sure not to endanger their lives again

"Jagan , do something stop this massacre , i suffered from diarrhea whole night" Adi said rubbing his now empty stomach , hearing all the other guys siding him

"can you go against Suraj's orders??? jaane do , jab khayega tab pata chalega , what we have been through while he was busy playing the nurse" Jagan whispered back to them

Cooked and ready to serve!!!! she felt like she won a whole battle as she saw the parathe made , okay, it might be not exact shape and color but it was still parathe , she wanted take a taste of it before serving but was interupted by the yelling of Suraj for food

She carried the food to the dinning table , she was left speechless as she watched the guy who stood infront of her , donned up in a tight jean and a white tight wife-beater, water dripping out of his wet hairs leaving no doubt he's been just out of the shower

He smirked as he watched his effect on Chakor , he's been like that among girls but soon raised his eyebrows as she shrugged walking by him normally placing the plates on the table.

Her lips held its own smirk as Suraj lost his , 'well done Chakor' she patted herself mentally forgiving herself for having even given him the chance to witness her oogling at him , but damn was he handsome!!! That wet wife-beater traced his muscles and built packs out.

All waited for Suraj to eat before cautiously slipping a tiny twitsy bite in their mouth , they weren't rushing like they did yesterday


Chakor bit on her lips as she watched Suraj's dramatical expression as he examined the parathe


"this should be in the musuem , what on earth is it doing in my plate" He taunted trying to break it


"Be grateful you atleast have it on your plate , some children in the world are dying without" Chakor retorted back refusing to accept any insult , she tried her very best to make a decent meal

But as if her words touched him , he attempted to eat the parathe , keyword "attempted" , He spat it as it touched his tongue


"bloody hell this tastes like raw flour" he stood drinking up his water

"Be happy you din't live a night of diaarhea!!!!!" Adi added as they others chuckled much to Chakor's displease

"You know what??? You guys are a bunch of ungrateful jerks , i am starving since two days ,yet i the girl who never tried to cook attempted soo hard to make something for you guys , but well you would never understand" Saying soo she left back to the kitchen knowing they'd be least guilty having hurt her


"Damn we shouldn't have done it" The guys realized except for Sujal who again Shrugged at the whole situation , grabbing his phone and ordering food for all of them


She was in the hall cleaning when she noticed the telephone , immidiatly her mind rushed to her parents , what were they thinking about her absense? were they missing her?? worried for her??? was imli guilty for having distrusted her???

Soo many questions 'perhaps one call' she thought , she reluctantly approached the phone , dialing her home number

Her heart beated the dial tone , she left a sigh as she heard a "hello" the voice of her mother , she smiled unknown someone was watching her every moves


He had never saw such a beautiful smile ever , it was like a bright light among pitch black darkness , he lifted the intercom , all curious about to whom was she talking

"Maa"

He was clueless to why he could feel her voice holding pain and love , he had forsaken both of the emotions long back but this girl managed to stir it back , he wished to disconnect the call having already gotten the answer to his question but somehow he wanted to hear more


"Chakor????How are you??? Imli told us you wanted a break from her ...wed..." realizin what she was ahout to say she changed her words "Your personal issues so you left to live with your friend" As she heard her mother , she got her questions answered , Imli made it perfect so nobody would realize her absense's reason, she knew what she were now in people's eyes , the coward jealous sister who couldn't bear seeing her sister's wedding to her ex boyfriend so she ran away


"I am...fine ma...Imli is right i need a break from it all so i came to my friend's place" She was trying her best not to break down something which din't go unobserved by suraj even by far


"I know Chakor , i realized you were in pain when Imli announced her wedding with Vivaan" she heard her mother confirming her doubts , they were all soo misunderstood , "Just know i and your dad , support you throughout everything , we'll be there for you whenever you need us"

No matter misunderstood but atleast they did expressed they were there for her , "It's okay Ma , i will talk to you later , i have to go with my friend out , love you"

Saying soo she disconnected the call , letting the hot tears flow out of her ears to her cheeks , "i am not in pain because of Imli ma" She whispered crying harder

He curled his fingers watching her fall on her knees crying in the empty hall , once there was another person who cried soo much after talking to his mother , but that was the last time before he died , he couldn't help but wish for Chakor not to meet the same end that he did

He then realized she din't eat nothing , going into the kitchen he saw some leftovers of the food ordered, Plating it he walked towards Chakor who was pouting while dusting a cupboard , he shook his head thinking how weird she is , just a few minutes ago she was all broken and crying and now she was pouting like a kid of 1st grade

"Here eat" He said placing the place on a table


She moved her eyes from her dusting cloth to suraj then to the plate , feeling her stomach growl at the sight of food embarassing her

"I don't want it" She said angry at his winning smirk, going back to her dusting cloth , the least she ever wanted was pity from a jerk who made fun of her honest efforts of trying to cook

"Be grateful you have it , some people around the world are yearning for it" He pulled her words right back at her


"If you are trying to be 'me' i suggest you drop the idea, you won't succeed even after a meditation on a single foot" She eyed him challengingly

"Oh Damn the day i'll decide to be you, because that day i'll have to say goodbye to my gang and open a drama company" why couldn't she just give in happily like other girls do smitten by his looks and powers

"I don't care" She gave a look to the food feeling the aroma capturing her nostril..." I am gonna eat because unlike some people i just cant disrespect food" Saying so she pulled a chair and pounced on the food , it was far better to the cheesy menu crap which was offered in imli's engagement party


After the second spoon she realized she could have atleast thanked him for his effort of bringing her the food but as she raised her head to do so he, she saw he was already gone

The night soon fell , she roamed around clueless where she could sleep , she did bump against few guys who refused to talk to her because of their all mighty boss

She angrily walked in Suraj's room stomping her feet


"Where am i suppose to sleep????" she asked angrily


He raised his head looking at her all dusty , hairs up , his t-shirt and sweatpants all wrinkled on her , still she managed to look pretty to him , he moved uncomfortably on his chair at being hit by this thought but then he retained his smug smirk and answered her

"With me"

Two simple word , which shook her world
Edited by Blushy_Auntacid - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for making me smile!
Loved Suraj when Doctor addressed Chakor as his wife.
Liked all the moments between Sukor!
Poor Chakor, she is trying her they could have atleast encouraged her, next time she would have tried something different. His feelings towards Chakor is changing sec by sec with her presence.

Amazing!
The last two words was what is going to happen next? World War 3? LOL
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting update👏
When doctor referred chakor as suraj's wife, suraj's reaction was worth it😆
The gang should have appreciated chakor's hardwork
Loved the changing behaviour of suraj towards chakor😊
The last two words of suraj was bomb, there will be war for sure😆
I also hate current track, just reading wu for not loosing track, hope it get over soon
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Superb..Suraj worrying about chakor and when doctor told chakor as his wife was fabulous...
Chakor kicks suraj that scene made me laugh like a mad..I just imagine tat scene btwn suraj and chakor..😆😆
Eagerly thinking what happened next..Please update soon..
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Fabulous update👏
Imagining Suraj's swag when he said "With me" at the end
Eagerly waiting for next update !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you!

Wonderful update, the story is very interesting. Both Suraj and Chakor have deep hidden wounds. Their scenes together are a treat. He's already treating her differently from other girls and he's surprised that she's immune to his charm. I love mischievous Suraj saying those last two words.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.
Edited by meshmesh - 8 years ago
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Bang on update...
I love this Badass Suraj...Everything was fabulous...
Suraj your charm not work on chakor...aww emotional chakor...Thanks for updating...
You don't have to finished like this...now I'm eagerly waiting for next part coz I want to know what will chakor say and suraj do...

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