Kidnapped Lover Sukor part 14 pg 29

nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thank you for this amazing update!

I like how Suraj always looks after Chakor, he appears heartless and cruel but he has a soft heart. The scene in the bedroom was nice, I like when one of them pulls the other's leg.

Poor guys they had to eat from Chakor's hand 😆. I felt sorry for Chakor after knowing about their past. It seems both have some scars to hide behind their strong exterior. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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sonali mishra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Interesting update👏

No words for it

Loved how suraj pretended & chakor got scared😆

Chakor's past was terrible but I think there is more to it

Loved suraj's care for chakor😊

Sukor are similar to each other in some way

Waiting for next part

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gibbu

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Really sorry that i forgot about updating this comment. Recalled it only after reading your 4th update.

Loving your plot. Its amazing !! The story is unfolding like a beautiful cascade.👍🏼

Sukor here are so dissimilarly similar- hiding their vulnerabilities behind the facade of roughness. Their physical tension too is intriguing. Hoping that the two turn out to be each others strength in overcoming their respective shortcomings.

Happy about your portrayal of imvaan: selfish idiots !!! Anything less about them even in a FF is a No-No given my hatred for them

It commendable that you are motivated to write superb updates, that too regularly ' despite the crappy track in the show.👏

Keep writing & keep shining!!

❤️

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