FF: I want you back in my life...Mrs Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi 9th part - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
It was like seeing flashes of all their past happenings.
Hate Imli here tooo! Imli = Bone!
Love Sukor!

Nice update!

The lady could be Rajini or Ranjana!

Waiting to know what is shown to her!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Interesting update👏
Loved sukor's confession😊
Why imli has to come in middle of the confession😡
Who is the lady, what chakor saw in mumbai😲
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Superb update 😃In d show also,it will be nice if they remember their childhood fb's.Waiting for d next update !
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
I hate imli here also...she us annoying everywhere...
Love chakor's confession...so romantic...Our suraj babu is awww...I think that lady will be Ranjana her evil eye on sukor..
Very nice update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Part 2

Sukor room Suraj was sleeping while Chakor packs her bags and gets ready to leave to Mumbai...suddenly Chakor's phone rings and Suraj wakes up and turns to see Chakor with her bag

Suraj: Chakor where are you going?

Chakor: Oh, Sorry Suraj i forgot to tell you that I'm going to Mumbai with Karan sir he will help me in Mumbai he too want take revenge from Kn that's why he is helping me

Suraj: No Chakor you are not going anywere i don't trust him i think he is lieing to you...i don't know why but I'm feeling like something bad going to happen so i cant leave you alone so I'm coming with you

Chakor: No Suraj you are thinking too much nothing is gone happen to me don't worry he is not bad so plz you stay in haveli and look after ragini and vivaan they can do anything with basti people ok?
After thinking so much he agrees to stay in haveli. Chakor sits in car and starts leaving. Chakor waves bye to Suraj through cars window

Suraj in mind " i don't know why but I'm feeling like you are leaving me forever, like it's our last meeting...No, Chakor plz don't leave me" and starts following Chakor's car calling her name... sanam re song were playing in bg...and unknown to him tears were falling from his eyes...then her car disappeared from his vision

On the other hand In hospital Imli was talking with doctors over phone and he gives her good news saying

Dr: Congratulations mrs Rajvanshi you have 1 week pregnancy

Imli:omg really! thank you so much doctor I'm soo happy i have to tell this good news to my husband and sister they will be happy and to all members too...thank you so much bye doctor and ends call
Imli in mind " i have to tell this news to vivaan he will be very happy and of course to my didi" in leaves in search of vivaan, other side Suraj comes back to haveli with dull face and he sees Imli who was searching vivaan...

Suraj: Imli what happen whom are you searching? Why are you soo happy? If you are searching Vivaan, he is at the factory
Imli starts jumping in happiness with Suraj...he didn't understand anything and were looking at Imli with strange face

Imli: Suraj babu you know what I'm very happy today as dr gave me good news saying that I'm pregnant and was searching for vivaan but he is not here didi too not here so you are the first person who I'm telling this news

Suraj: Really! that's great i'm so happy for you and vivaan and side huges her

Imli: Smiling, thank you Suraj babu, and i wish you and didi too have kids in future and winks
Suraj feels shy thinking about Chakor and having kids with her and smiles

Suraj: yeah Imli thank you for your good wishes, but before that I'm planning to propose Chakor and remmary her, last time when i was proposing to Chakor you come between us and makes angry face

Imli: Yeah, I'm so sorry for that, but i promise i will help you in this time with your plan...

Suraj: ok thank you and congratulations once again, now go to your husband and give him this good news

Imli: Yes you are right i hav to go and she leaves to factory
Suraj too goes torwards haveli...

In Mumbai

Chakor's car stops near Karans house and she gets out from the car with her bag...

Karan: Welcome to my little house plz come give me your bag

Chakor: thanks by the way when we will go to that place where we can take that documents? I want to end with Kn an his team fast and send them to jail...

Karan: Mrs Chakor plz don't worry i will take you to that place tomorrow till then plz take rest i will call my sister she will help you if you want any thing ok?

Karan in mind " Sorry Chakor ji i have to lie to you about that documents my family's life is in danger i i will tell you the truth they will kill my family, i hope you can understand me...and feels guilty for lieing to Chakor and leaves...
After having dinner Chakor sleeps

Next day in the morning

Chakor wakes up and after having breakfast she gets ready to leave with Karan to secret place...Karan comes to Chakor and says

Karan: Good morning Chakor ji how was your night i hope you slept well?

Chakor: Yeah Karan sir thank you i slept well thanks to your sister she helped me yesterday and smiles...so can we go i don't want to waste time

Karan: Sure Chakor ji let's leave and leaves

After some time they reaches to broken factory and gets out from the car

Karan: There is the place where we will meet with one person and she will help us

Chakor: Oh, ok and opens the door of factory...
When they enter the place Chakor gets chocked to see the lady's face

Lady's face is shown and she is non other than Ranjana

Chakor: Ranjana ji you? What are you doing here? I don't understand anyting with chocked face turns to Karan...what she is doing here tell me why you lied to me?
Karan: Sorry Chakor ji i was forced to do so otherwise they will kill my family and can't live without my wife and son...plz forgive me...
Chakor gets angry and looks at Ranjana and says

Chakor: So,Ranjana ji what are you want from me? Leave Karan's family we will talk alone

Ranjana: Oh Chakor you are mother India as always ok i will leave his family...

Ranjana's man brings Karan's family and he thanks her and leaves from there

Chakor: I know RAnjana ji why you did this to me...to take revange for telling truth to vivaan about you right.?

Ranjana: absolutely right! You are so smart chakor and smirks...but not only that...i want to tell truth that you didn't knowed before...about your lovely husband and your sister's bachwa...do you wanna know?

Chakor: you are lieing to me i know that you are so cheap as your husband and daughter and i'm not going to fall on your trap did you get that?

Ranjana: Shouting at Chakor who you think of yourself hah? You destroyed my life making Vivaan against me, making my husband mad, and going to send him to jail? And i will not stop you? You are wrong...i too want you to know how feels when your beloved ones betrays you...my son belived you and go against me...i will make you stay all alone all life i will fill your heart with hatred for you beloved ones...

Chakor: All thing that i say to vivaan was not wrong that was truth, you are murder of your husband...and kn deserves that madness and its not my fault understand? By the way how you going to fill my heart with hatred? I'm not going to belive your words...I'm not going to stay alone, i have family with me i'm not alone...
Ranjana: clapping hands wow Chakor you are so innocent like always, the family you talking about one day...wait not one day they are betrayed you not believing to you when bride swap happened? Do you remember? Your first love Vivaan betrayed you falling in love with your sister and your sister lovely Imli without thinking about you fall in love with your Vivaan...poor Chakor actually i want to open your eyes...everything is not like that you think Chakor, They will remember about you when they need some help from you...when you were sacrificing your happines for your family...no one of them didn't thank about you...thy are so selfish
Then Suraj troubled you every fine day...do you remember he too loved your sister and she was pregnant with his child...he is in love with imli now too but he is pretending like he is forgot every thing

Chakor was thinking about Ranjana's words and stays numb...in mind " is that true? My family for whom I'm doing everything is really selfish?...Or Suraj? He still loves Imli? Yes she's right about something in past but now everything is changed they love me so much...they care for me...no she is saying all this to make me think wrong about them...

Chakor: Stop it! What you want to say with this words...past is past, my family is not like before, they are changed, everyone loves me now, they care for me...i tell you again that i don't wanna believe in your words...I changed everything, the person whom i hated before...Suraj i know that he loved my sister before but now i changed him too he is not like before...i filled his heart with love...saying this she starts leaving

Ranjana: stop Chakor i know that you didn't believe me but i have proofs that your lovely sister and Husband are still loves each other...you think that Suraj too loves you right? But no he is just greatful to you and feels guilt for making your life hell thats all...did you remember the day when Imli and Suraj stayed together one night...anything can happen when two ex lovers stays alone whole night that too in cold...they will remember their past day and...
Chakor: Enough now! Ranjana ji i know very well about my husband they are just friends and Imli loves Vivaan only and Suraj too loves me...and stop poisoning my mind...
Ranjana: Wait i will show you something interesting...and bring hand camera and shows Chakor photos where Imli and Suraj sleeping very close to each other...Chakor gets shocked seeing their photos and looks at Ranjana...

Ranjana: Do you believe me know?

Chakor takes phato and throws on the floor and says

Chakor: i don't believe in you you are lieing to me...its fake photos stop your nonsense...
Ranjana: Ok if you think that its all are fake photos...then watch this video and shows her fake edited video from Suraj and Imli's past intimacy scene
Flash back is shown

When Suraj and Imli was drunken their intimacy video was taken and shown to Ranjana and Ragini they thanked to their man

Ranrag: that's good work we will use this video against Chakor and Imli someday and hi fies each other and smirks...
End of flashback
Chakor gets shocked and shattered watching video and starts crying very badly and says

Chakor: noo, that's not true that video too fake i know that Suraj can't betray me and throws phone at Ranjana

Ranjana: I can understand what are you feeling right now...i think you believe me now right?
Chakor was crying collapsing on the floor thinking about Suraj's yesterday's words and their cute romanting moments...
Suddenly Chakor's phone rings and in display was shown Imli's name...composing herself Chakor answers to call...
Chakor: Hello...
Imli: Didi why are you not picking my calls i was trying your phone since morning

Chakor: Woh, Sorry imli i was very busy and didn't hear your call...what happened everything is ok?
Imli: Yeah absolutely i have to tell you some important news...good news
Chakor: Yeah tell me,
Imli: Woh, Didi I'm pregnant and smiles and feels happy

Chakor gets chocked and remembers about Vivaan's impotency report, Ranjana's words about Suraj and Imli's past...
Precap: Not yet decided...


That all for know thank you guys for reading my Story...sorry if it was not good i will try for better...ANd guys my exams are started and its my last year I'm completing my studies so i can't update till next month i hope you understand me bye for now...thak you once again...😊























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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Nice update...
Feeling bad for Chakor
And all the best for ur exams 😊
Please continue this FF after ur exams are over
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Thanks for the update!
Feeling bad for Chakor!
Will she give a chance to Suraj and her sister to explain the situation or not?

Waiting for the next update!

Best wishes for your examens dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Interesting update👏
Hate ranjhana & ragini😡
Feeling sad for chakor😭
All the best for exam👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Evil ranjhana...
Poor suraj and chakor...
Feeling bad for them...
Nice update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Hi guys how are you all? I missed you soo much thanks for your good wishes i passed my exams with excellent marks
And I'm sooo happy and i want to share this good news with you... So let's start without wasting time...

Part 3


In broken factory

Chakor cuts the call and wipes her tears and gets up wand with anger gives tight slap to Ranjana and says

Chakor: What you think of yourself hah? If you show me that type of video and photos i will believe you? Then listen to me carefully i give you challenge that Suraj will never betray me...

Ranjana stands with chocked face and thinks that her plan get failed and says

Ranjana: You! How dare you to slap me? Alright Your challenge is accepted Chakor...if you fail in proving me wrong then you have to give divorce to Suraj and leave him forever...

Chakor: If i will win challenge and prove Suraj what then?

Ranjana: If you win challenge i will free Suraj and Azadgunje people from bhandwa and never will trouble you
Chakor: Done! Challenge accepted and leaves from there

Ranjana again calls Ragini and tells her that ther plan failed and everything that happened there

Ranjana: Ragini our plan get failed we have to think something and Separate Sukor from each other

Ragini: Don't worry Ranjana maa i have plan b always with me and tells her about next step and smirks
On the other hand In Haveli

Suraj and imli was decorating place with lights, balloons and flowers where Suraj going to propose to Chakor

Imli: Wah Suraj babu! It's soo beautiful i'm sure that Chakor Di will like it

Suraj: Yeah Imli I hope everything will be ok and she likes it I'm very happy and nervious and smiles...i fear that if Chakor comes there i will forget everything and can't say about my feelings

Imli: If you soo much nervious i will help you...let practice your words...think that I'm Chakor di and say what in your heart for my Didi

Suraj: Oh ok and thinks about Chakor and closes his eyes and opens and sees Chakor in front of him and smiles...then he bends down on his knees and says

Chakor today is our marriage anniversary...one year ego i married to you by cheat and forced you to live with me and troubled you...but you change me into good person you supported me when i was broken, in every bad moment in my life, you opened my eyes and showed me what wrong and what's bad...i was selfish and i didn't cared about anyone except me...i relized that being good person is not bad...after all troubles we finally win Chakor i come back to haveli with your help...you win me Chakor i don't know from when i started liking you, i can't see tears in your eyes...i ready to kill that person who tries to harm you...i fall in love with you Chakor, not because I'm grateful to you...because who you are...I love everything in you...I Love You and I will love you forever till my death...and i want to spend all my life with you...Will you Marry me Chakor...will you accept this Pakkandi Suraj and be with me always...

Then Chakor says Yes and Suraj happily hugs her and Kisses her...then he comes to his sense and realizes that He was kissing Imli...and Imli stands with chock
Suraj too gets chocked and jerks her and says sorry and turns to leave...then he Sees Chakor and vivaan watching all this and gets chocked...

There Vivaan with anger comes to Suraj and beats him and says

Vivaan: Suraaj how dare you to kiss my wife! You! i don't leave you and again starts beating

Chakor comes to vivaan and stops him fom beating Suraj and looks at him with teary eyes

Suraj looks at Chakor and tries to explain what actually happenned here and says
Suraj: Chakor Vivaan you are misunderstood us,actually i was practicing with Imli how to propose Chakor today and...

Vivaan: Stop your nonsense! i don't want to listen your lie i knowed that you always wanted Imli back in your life that's why you changed himself with Chakor's help into good person and was proposing Imli in front of us...shame on you Suraj...
Then Imli interrupts Vivaan and says

Imli: No Vivaan you are wrong Suraj loves Chakor Di only...all you watched happened accidently actually i helped him in decoration, after all today is our 1st marriage anniversary and me too want to give you today big surprise plz come with me...

Then Imli takes his hand starts leaving but Vivaan jerks her and says

Vivaan: Oh really surprise what surprise you going to give me...oh! let me think, i got it that you are pregnant with my child right? Plz don't try to make me fool i know that this child is not mine this Suraj's child...again you are pregnant with Suraj's child...

Imli: No vivaan what nonsense are you saying how could you think like that about me i'm pregnant with your child...i know that i loved Suraj in past but now i love only you...
Vivaan: Stop How can you be pregnant with my child...I can't be a father of your child Because I'M IMPOTENT!!! Did you get that?

Imli gets chocked and says
Imli: what are you saying Vivaan? How is that possible you are kidding right and smiles...

Vivaan: Noo Imli I'm not kidding...so tell me the father of your child? Vivaan looks at Suraj then At Chakor

Look Chakor at this two ex lovers...no, no, Too lovers they are lieing to us...ok i can somehow take this betray but you? How can they betray you? After so much good thing you did to them...how could they lie to you? You know what let this two lovers to be one and leave from their life! Suraj don't deserve angel like you...My life is destroyed already...because of His Lovely Mother...I'm telling you Chakor don't ruin your life just go from there!

Chakor gets flashes of rangana and her's conversation and that video clips comes in front of her eyes and Vivaan's words snatched her last hope and her face was showing how she get hurt inside...then she collapsed on the floor and starts crying looking at Suraj

There Suraj bends down and holds chakor's face and tells

Suraj: crying...Plz Chakor don't cry believe me i don't love Imli i love only you Chakor, plz talk with me, beat me, scold me but plz don't truth him he is misunderstanding us...plz Chakor your silence scaring me...plz don't listen him Chakor...plz don't kill me with your silence...
Chakor was not listening anyone she was hurt, feeling bad about herself, she was feeling betrayed...
Chakor in mind " Why god why ? every bad things happening with me? What's my fault? My beloved ones betraying me again and again? "Chakor's eyes turns red in anger and she shoutes on top of her voice...
Chakor: Enough!! I set ENOUGH!

Chakor's stands up and keeps Suraj's collar and jerks him and looks at Vimli saying

Chakor: Stop it! Enough! What all of you think of yourselfs? That i'm fool, that I'm too much stupid? Stop making fool of me, I'm tired plz leave me alone i don't want to see your faces just Go from there and looks at Imli and says

Chakor: i didn't knowed that you are so selfish Imli What type of sister you are? When you needed me i was there for you...but when i needed someone to support me eveyone was against me, no one ready to trust me when bride swap happened i was alone...turning to Vivaan

Chakor: And you vivaan you was my bestfriend from childhood, i loved you but you too didn't trusted me...your so called love for me was false...how easily you forget every good things that i did to you... thank god that bride swap happened with help of this i come to know how selfish you are

And looking at Suraj with tears and keeps his collar and says

Chakor: Suraj why you betray me? What i did to you? I didn't trusted anyone after what happened with me before...you and me were enemyes, but after knowing your good sides i thought that you are not bad as others think...i know that you helped me, we supported each other and become good friends...and I don't know from where i fall in love with you...And i hoped that my love for you was not one sided, if you did all good things for me because you greatfull to me then thak you Suraj! I don't need this love...If you still love my sister then why you gave me hope that you may love me too but...Ranjana ji was right no one loves me, no one care for me,all my beloved ones remember about me when they need anything from me that all...saying all this Chakor goes from there

Suraj Vivaan and Imli stays sillent thinking about Chakor's words with tears and guilt in their faces

Suraj in mind " Plz Chakor forgive me plz I'm so sorry i will do anything for you but plz don't say that i love Imli, i don't love her i love only you Chakor! " then realizing that Chakor may leave her he runs after her calling her name

On the other hand Chakor with teary eyes and with angry face comes to Ranjana and says

Chakor: you were right Ranjana ji, you won and i loose the challenge give me divorce papers i will sign it...actually i thakful to you that you opened my eyes

Ranjana: Smiles looking at Chakor you are welcome Chakor! here is you divorce papers...good that you understand my good wishes for you...

With divorce papers she comes out from haveli and there she sees Suraj in front of her...




Precap: Chakor throws divorce papers at Suraj's face saying "I want divorce from you" be happy with my Sister and your child and leaves from there with anger while Suraj stands with chocked face and shoutes at Chakor saying "You can't leave me like this Chakor plz CHakor don't leave me Hume tumari Saath ki zaroorat hai" and cryes bending down on his knees




That's all for now dears thank you for reding my ff i hope you like it bye for now 😊











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