SS: Part Time Lovers. (PART 05 UPDATED!)

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Namita

@Namita-M

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Akhi, that was hauntingly beautiful.

Sumi, thanks for giving Akhi the idea. This is the beginning of a masterpiece. Looking forward to reading more and soon.

Happy new year!!

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Sumaiya_Scrible

@Sumaiya_Scrible

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: _Namita_
Akhi, that was hauntingly beautiful.

Sumi, thanks for giving Akhi the idea. This is the beginning of a masterpiece. Looking forward to reading more and soon.

Happy new year!!

No it was akhi's idea. I just prompted her to write. All the credit goes to akhi. She did all the hardwork and I'm proud of her 😎 🤗
thanks alot for appreciating it 😳 😳

Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago

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nycgal

@nycgal

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Akhi!!!🤗

So hauntingly beautiful !! childhood sweethearts like SUKOR was meant to be...loved it

I will be eagerly waiting for further updates...

Thankyou!

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Nice story. Looking forward to reading it further.

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Priyanka

@manopriya24

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Nice story dear... First of all thank u so much for an refreshing storyline dear...🥳it was awesome that I can't Express it in words..A big hug to u dear🤗it was so real that I started to have tears and feel sad for our Sukor.. .😭but I was waiting for ur update yaar... pls update as fast as u can... love u yaar...❤️

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Tabsi

@Tabsi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Oh My God. Sweetest Thing Ever!

Waiting for the next update😊

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SofiaIshVeer

@SofiaIshVeer

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Great story... waiting for next part 😊

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Kavya

@Kavi.Kapoor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Great start!!Immensely interesting,do continue it soon.(Very eye-catching title too 😳)

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Okay, this time I am the last one.

Curse my school.

I am so sorry Jaan!

I truly loved the prologue. It was amazing. I dont know what will happen in the next update. But I will be waiting to see if what I am thinking comes true or not.

Loved the sweet SuKor. Its so sweet that from childhood only they are so much attached.

I hope you are gonna update soon.

Eagerly waiting.

I love you jaan!