SS: Part Time Lovers. (PART 05 UPDATED!)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Kavya

@Kavi.Kapoor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Great update.
Will Chakor ever shut-up about saving the world, so glad Suraj pointed out some truthful facts to her. Maybe in this SS, she'll actually heed his words😆!!

Exciting precap.

Quote

kavya_989

@kavya_989

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Akhi,jabardast update hai,I'm loving this Suraj,loved how he is desperate for chakor and her happy life and future. I agree with his thoughts about villagers 😛 kaash our Suraj was too like that,kya kare In doonon ko mahaan banna padega 😆

Akhi u rocked the precap"zaroorat pade tho hum tumhe mandap se uta le jayenge...dulhan tho sirf tum meri hi banegi" 👏 😳

Edited by kavya_989 - 8 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Naya

@Thahaanfan

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

I loved this update, u write like a professional 👏

Quote

Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Wow!👏

Amazing! Love the Suraj u have put in front of us here! He is the best in analyzing the truth and showing it to Chakor!

I got the answer for my question dear!

Interesting precap! Eagerly waiting for the next part!

I think u can write books with all ur ideas and skills! If u do on day let me know it, so I can read ur writings!

Quote

Esha Singh

@eshasrk

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

This is why I like fanfics, coz they voice out what we actually hope to see...
Amazing update , awesome writing and happy that this Suraj pointed out some facts to Chakor, coz she always wants to save the entire world
I still remember Suraj saying in the show during Yogesh bhai phase: iese hamesha jagat maata bana hota hai...its so true.
I really love this possesive Suraj...another fresh change
Plsss update soon.plsss

Quote

Namita

@Namita-M

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

@Akhila, kya zabarjast update diya.

Yeh line:

Zaroorat pade toh uss mandap se utha le jaayenge tumhe, par dulhan tum hamari hi banogi

Uff main marr jawa!!! I can't wait to see Suraj apni dulhaniya ko uda karr le jaaye!!!

Quote

Tara_Vjian

@Tara_Vjian

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Akhi wat an update...Suraj k dialogues ne hamein

Maar hi daala...ufff❤️

Best sukor story i have read so far..

Update soon

Quote

saiyam

@saiyam

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

hi,can u pls translate this part in english pls pls i request u as i dont know hindi much pls yaar.

Quote

BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-
Great update.
Will Chakor ever shut-up about saving the world, so glad Suraj pointed out some truthful facts to her. Maybe in this SS, she'll actually heed his words😆!!

Exciting precap.

Haha! LOL ikr, she seriously needs to draw the line somewhere! 😆 Hopefully, she'll heed his words here! 😉

Quote

BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: kavya_989
Akhi,jabardast update hai,I'm loving this Suraj,loved how he is desperate for chakor and her happy life and future. I agree with his thoughts about villagers 😛 kaash our Suraj was too like that,kya kare In doonon ko mahaan banna padega 😆

Akhi u rocked the precap"zaroorat pade tho hum tumhe mandap se uta le jayenge...dulhan tho sirf tum meri hi banegi" 👏 😳

Thanks, Kavya! 🤗 Wow I'm seriously replying so late! 😆 Took me so much time to get my hands on the laptop! 😆

Don't worry, after watching the recent OLV's, I'm starting to think our Suraj Babu is gonna be back, with a bang!

Hehe, the next part has me all excited as I'm writing it!