Sukor SS 'Amend Love That Consumes You' *UPDATED CHAPTER 6 - Page 6

Okay i know it was predictable about ragini being the culprit because rather than her who can be such a syco short tempered. Anyways i will try my best to make it unpredictable. Sorry for error i have not rechecked it.

Chapter 5
Failing plans

Wind blew in the room from window. She felt cold. She snuggled closer to suraj.
He was holding her not firmly.

They both were sleeping peacefully in each other's arms.

Tejaswini: suraj

She heard Tejaswini calling for suraj from outside the door.

Tejaswini: suraj beta darwaza kholo.

Chakor slowly opened her eyes, rubbing them. She saw suraj sleeping like a small baby. Snoring softly. Eyes closed, lips twitched. He was adorable. She admired him.

'The way he cares for me, his love, passion, and even the way he sleeps. Everything is just so different about him. Everytime i look at him he gives me another reason to stay with him always, By his side.' She thought. 'Today at morning i was close to getting burn completely, but no he wouldn't let me die. He would die first and i knew that. What if something happened.?' This thought shuddered her from inside

Tejaswini: chakor.?

Chakor again heard her calling for her now.
She felt sad and dejected for leaving him. She did not want to leave him. Even if it's for a mere second. But other than that she had to get otherwise, or else teju will just barge in concerned about us why not answering. Just like the last time she did.
She thought. The bathroom scene with whole family witnessing me. She still felt embarrassed for that situation.

'and waise bhi I don't want to stay close to him' she thought. She was convincing herself telling that she should stay away from him. Their morning encounter was something to never forget. 'How could i be so careless and stupid.?' She mentally asked herself. But she very well knew she wanted him badly. 'But this guy' she looked at sleeping suraj. He would kill me with his torches and the worst part is i could not even fight with him about him.!

urghh

She felt irritated what would she say.? Suraj don't torcher me your touch makes me go insane from inside and outside both.!' She decided cold anger is the best option right now. Acting as if nothing happened and not allowing him to come inch closer. She was determined or maybe she thought she was because deep inside she knew how badly she wanted him. Like look at me even after deciding i would not let him come close here I'm snuggled up in his arms.

She let out a deep sigh.

'Mera kuch naj hosakta' she thought Because she was in hopelessly fallen in love with him and would always wish to stay with him every day and every second of her life.

Tejaswini: chakor beta.?

Chakor: ji maa

Keeping aside her chain of thoughts gearing alot of strength.

She unwind herself from him slowly getting up. He groaned at loss of her presence pouting cutely. She smiled looking at him and went to open the door.

Teju: chakor beta it's 7:30 pm get ready for the party. It has already started and everyone's been asking about you and suraj

'Shit.! I totally forgot about the party' ok now i have to stop thinking and concentrate on other works which i have to do' she decided mentally.

Chakor: sorry maa it slipped out of my mind. I would be ready in 15 mins and don't worry about suraj he will also be ready

She assured her.

Teju: thank you beta don't know how would i handle him without you.

She said and left leaving chakor to get ready.

Chakor went inside. She opened her cupboard and went through some saree's

Chakor: suraj get up you have to get ready for the party.

She said selecting one blue saree with cream colour border and blouse.

Chakor: suraj get up

She said opening suraj's cupboard. She looked at all his jackets and tshirts, passing through some of them she saw a few blazer's and suits. She picked one blue blazer with white bshirt and black pants.

Chakor: suraj

Now she was standing infront on their bed. He was covering his ears with pillow avoiding her calling. She removed the pillow.

Chakor: suraj wake up and get ready for the party

Suraj: no

Was all he said and turned showing his back at her and again sleeping. 'Oh god he is so stubborn'

She took the from side table and walked to other side of the bed.

Chakor: suraj I'm telling you this last time wake up or else i will throw this water on you.

He peeked out of his blanket looking at her. She was hell serious. He could tell it with her look. Now there was no choice left for him. He groaned and got up from the bed. Chakor smiled at him keeping the jug back on table.

He was rubbing his eyes irritated.

Chakor: good now take this clothes.

She handed him the clothes and turned him towards the bathroom pushing him from back.

Chakor: go get ready quickly.

Suraj looked at his clothes

Suraj: no wait why am i going to wear this stupid blazer. I hate them and you know it.

Chakor: yeah but today is the party and..

Suraj: exactly it's a party not a formal family function

Chakor: suraj. Don't act like a child. It's my choice won't you wear it.

She said pouting which he can't deny or ignore or resist. 'mr. Suraj rajvanshi lost his fight with his beloved wife, again.! This woman knew very well how to persuade me' He thought and went inside like a guy who lost his match.

Chakor got ready but could not tie her back dori (thread) of her blouse because of her burnt hand. She somehow managed to do the plaits of her saree with her fingers carefully but the could not tie the dori. It was at the back, she had to stretch her hand a bit to reach there and then try to tie it but every time she stretched her left palm a pang of pain would rise up and hurt terribly. She winced in pain.

Now she was looking at herself in mirror. She was completely ready only the dori was left. 'I can't even go downstairs like this.' Now only suraj could help her. She tried her best to get ready at her own but now only because of this goddamn dori she had to take his help. This was not the part of her "cold anger plan".

The door creak opened and suraj came out wearing those. He wad looking dapper.

Chakor: Don't look at him. don't look at him.'

She kept telling herself because she knew the time she would look at him she will loose all the stability.

He looked at her. She was wearing a beautiful saree of his favorite colour. She was looking like an angel. His angel which came from sky only for him. He admired her beauty. She was facing the mirror. He looked at her backside.

She was wearing backless blouse. Her luscious half naked back was making him insane. He just wanted to go have her. Her dori was left open. He glanced at her face. Her eyes were tight shut and she was muttering something.

He knitted his eyebrows in confusion.

Suraj: chakor.?

He called her but she ignored him and kept muttering. He was completely unaware of her consciousness. He slowly marched towards her thinking what's wrong with her. He slowly leaned making sure she doesn't knew he was behind her.

Chakor: don't look at him

She whispered and suraj bit his lower lip controling his laughter. She was trying her her best and he could see that through mirror. He mutely chuckled and controlled himself.

'She was trying to ignore me.?' He now was well aware of her plan to stay aways from him.

He slowly picked the threads of her blouse making sure his fingers touched everybit of her back. She gasped and opened her eyes.

He was looking at her. His soft stuble face those dark brown eyes at which she would look at eternity, he was looking dashing in that suit. She checked him out from top to bottom. He was standing beside her.

He moved near her back and tied her thread whispering in her ear.

Suraj: you are looking beautiful

She felt his hot breath on the nape of her neck. He placed soft kiss on her neck and she bit her lower lip to trying her best to not moan.

She collected lot of courage and opened her eyes and rushed out.

Suraj chuckled and went behind her now he will make it more difficult for her. He decided.

Chakor walked through the crowd asking everyone if they need anything.

Sumit: hello miss chakor

One 30 year old guy came to her. She turned and looked at him.

Chakor: hi. Sorry I don't know you

He forwarded his hand for a handshake. She half smiled and handshakes

Sumit: it's ok. Identity is not important for everything

He said massaging her hand. She felt uneasy and tried to get rid of his hold.

Suraj: its good to leave your husband alone.

He said to chakor. He was searching for her and here she is. He then looked at her shaking a hand with someone. He noticed the uneasiness on her face and looked at the man. He smiled at suraj and left her.

Suraj: do you need something or shall i do something

He said in a threatening way.

Sumit: no thanks

He said and disappeared in the crowd.

Ok that's it for today guys. Sorry for any errors i wrote it in a hurry because i promised chotu ji to update today 🤗 (sorry don't know your name) stay tuned more twist and turns are on thier way. please review through your likes and comments.


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awesome upt
loved it
waiting for next part
cont soon

Interesting!

Originally posted by: srividhya68

awesome upt
loved it
waiting for next part
cont soon

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: maithu_

Interesting!

Continue soon!

Loved all Chakor's thoughts and especially: "don't look at him!"

Thank u 😳 yeah tht one was mine favourite too n will try to update soon

Cheeky Suraj. 😆. Good update Sumi.

I'm really sorry for a late update. Apologies from me and a little long part for updating late [:p] Will try to update soon.

Chapter 6
Occurring Problems

Suraj looked at chakor. She gave him one attitude look and went from there leaving smirking suraj to look at her shocked.

Imli: didi where were you.

Chakor: I slept for sometime

Imli: how is you hand.?

She asked holding chakor's left hand carefully

Chakor: its fine

Imli: keep dressing. Do it today before you sleep

Chakor nodded

Imli: here have some juice you will feel better.

Imli said taking a glass from waiter.

Chakor took it but a waiter stumbled and bumped on her right hand which was holding the glass. Juice spilled on her blouse.

Waiter: I'm sorry madam. I'm really sorry.

Imli: didi take this

She helped chakor giving her a tissue.

Chakor went towards stairs ascending, trying to wipe away the juice from her dress.

She was busy in her work.

Chakor's POV [point of view]

"God i hate this" she mumbled while walking carelessly.

I bumped into someone due to my clumsiness.

Chakor: sorry

Was all i said all the way looking down and rubbing it off again from my dress hoping the stain would go away.

I glided to the right side slowly continuing my walk but this time a bit carefully and slowly.

I felt a palm hold my elbow stopping me with a jerk and twisting roughly to the side.

Sumit: not so quick miss.

I was shocked. That filthy guy was standing, grasping my elbow tightly, with dirty smirk on his face. "Oh no"

I ignored him wresting my hand away, only his grip got tighten and he was no hell ready to leave.

A jolt of pain passed through my arm. 'Ok now it's hurting'

Chakor: leave me

I said in a stren voice looking down because i was in no mood to look at those scungy eyes ogling at me.

I heard him sniggering at my words. 'First my dress and now this idiot. Great.!' I Smiled at him and bended my right knee hitting him hard on his private part.

He looked at me gaping his eyes. His expression was changed to grimace but was trying his best to maintain that smirk, covering that area with his palms.
Tightening his expression, He looked at me with lour.

I gave him a smirk and again continued my walk to the washroom.

'One down now have to get rid of this stain' strolling on the path there was the common washroom on the right side of path. I let out a sigh of relief and quickly went inside.

After cleaning it with water i looked at myself in mirror. The stain was gone but the cloth was still wet. This is my favourite outfit and there is no other chance of changing it. I love it so much. And waise b this is suraj's favourite colour. That was the actual reason why she loved this outfit. She blushed at the thought and then suppressed her smile trying to ignore the feeling of him. I will jst go in my bedroom and dry it with a hair dryer.

I decided and turned to leave only to bump again into someone. Irritated. i looked at the guy. "Not again" it was him. The look on his face caused a fear of nervousness in me but did not let it manifest on my face.

He clutched my arm tightly. Again. Anger was clearly visible in his eyes.

Chakor: last encounter was not enough for you i guess

He smirked and moved closer to my face

Chakor: let me go

I tired to wrench my arm away from him but his grip was tight making it difficult for me to free my hand. He came more close to my ear. I closed my eyes in disgust. It was getting difficult for me to get out of his grip.

Sumit: last encounter was enough for me to get aroused.

He said in his nasty voice. Feeling of disgust ran in me. I whipped my face to the right avoiding his propinquity.

He was holding my right arm with his left hand. He moved his right hand ahead brushing his fingers on cheek.

I closed my eyes, only one guy came in my mind. Suraj.

'I can't believe she is still angry on me.! Okay i get it i have provoked her but was it such a big thing to get angry.

"Arousing a feeling of sexual desire and fleeing away as if nothing happened.! And that too with your own wife.! Yeah right"

Well i guess that's not a small thing.'

I waggled my head (suraj's POV is going on) in ommision.

I gulped down the sip of coke left in my glass letting the little twinge of pain due to the icy liquid, flow down my throat.

'But what is she doing. She is ignoring me.! Like literally ignoring me.'

I took another glass of coke from the waiter and gulped down the liquid. I was substituting my anger with coke instead of wine.

'Because of her. Yes her. Chakor suraj rajvanshi'

Her name was enough to bring a smile on my face. No matter how much i neglect my feelings and mistakes and my stubbornness. This act won't last more than one minute infront of her.

I would always give up, though behind her back i would motivate myself and act like I won't give up at all but when i look at her face, those beautiful doe eyes, pouty lips and cute little nose make me loose it. I would loose myself thousand times just for her one smile.

'I am insane. Yes I'm insanely in love with her'

I admitted to myself. Again, and took another gulp from my glass putting the glass down roughly.

Getting up from my chair i directly went to imli.

She was engaged in a coversation with some girl which I don't care.

Suraj: where is chakor

Imli turned her face to me slowly still looking at the girl who was infront of her blabbering something.

Imli gave a smile to her after her blabbering was finished and looked at me.

Imli: she went to clean her dress. Actually accidentally because of me, juice got spilled on her dress.

I gave her my usual what the hell look and went from there leaving both of them to continue thier nonsense blabbering.

I wandered the entire hall and she was no where to be seen. I even asked my mom and vivaan and ragini. I sighed heavily at her lost extinct.

'Where is she gone.!' I can't believe she is still angry one me. (Our poor suraj is not smart like chakor he actually thought she is playing the ignoring game by getting disappeared or invisible) he took another glass and sat in a corner on chair from where he got up before.

'Now who is being stubborn' saying this i took one large sip of the icy liquid letting let flow down my throat.

Suraj. Only his name gave me sudden strength and power. I'm not gonna loose hope so quickly. I took advantage of the situation and yanked my hand away pushing him with my left hand and ran to the door. I grasp the knob quickly and before i could twist it i was whacked to the wash basin thrusting with full force. The rim of it caused a severe pain in my back.

I felt throbbing pain in my back dejected with physical pain i sat on my knees wincing.

"Tsk tsk tsk"

Sumit: oh my poor little girl

He said leisurely walking to me bending down on his one knee.

Sumit: why are you making it so difficult for me.

He caressed my cheek with his palm.

Sumit: for us.

He ogled at me.

Sumit: i can give all the wealth you want for this.

He said continuously ogling at me. I slapped him hard on his face though this action caused more throbbing pain in my back. He touched his cheek and looked at me aggrieved.

He again grabbed my right hand and twisted it back causing a high jolt of pain in my back and hand. It was now getting bruised because of his continuous torture

Sumit: you won't change from your antics

I could not even scream due to the continuous pain i was suffering because of him. I looked at him with odium. He smirked at me again coming close to my face.

I was lost. My back was throbbing in pain, my hand was bruised and getting more worse due to his grip and i cannot even move. my left hand was bleeding because it was already injured. Both my hands were weaken due to the injury. I was helpless. I closed my eyes and let the tear fall down from my cheek. I thought about the one guy who was more than important for me. 'Suraj'. He was my love, my last desire and my last hope.

'That's it.!' I jabbed my now empty glass on the table. Irritated. 'Enough is enough'

'This is now getting on my nerves' he was getting impatient it has been an hour now since she is gone. How could she do this to me. It's a mental torture for me to not able to see her for this long.

I roamed my eyes again in hall from my position one last time hoping to see her but she was no where to be seen.

Now he was getting irritated and angry both at the same time. 'I will show her how it feels making someone so restless' he thought and smiled at his plane of teasing her with love.

He got the end cloth of my saree. He smirked and slowly detached the pin before he could remove the cloth from my chest I clutched it with my left hand across my chest.

He was now angry he got impatient and lusty. Now i was scared like hell. I closed my eyes in terror feeling dejected. How am i going to face this situation, face suraj, who is the only one who has full right on me. I clutched the cloth with palm with all the grip left in me.

My continuous refusing and trying to fight for myself was making him more and more aroused and eager for me due to which he teared the cloth of my blouse roughly.

Thankfully only the border this saree teared not the cloth.

I was walking tensed in corridor hoping to see one look of her. Our room, washroom, kitchen i looked everywhere. Even imli couldn't find her. Now feeling of anxiety of loosing her was clearly visible on my face. My pace increased and now i was pounding here and there not sure where to go what to do only one question was going in my mind "where is she.?"

He smirked with anger like beast who got his meal. I closed my eyes and suraj's face came in my mind. 'Hei daak baba please help suraj to find me here. Please help me' I silently prayed and gained all the little strength left in me after his torture.

Chakor: SURAJ

I screamed his name with full strength.

That's it for today guys. Hope u all enjoyed it. Please leave your review through comments and likes. Will try to update the next part soon.

I have a fully loaded imaginary gun right now to kill Sumit. 😡 How dare he!

Great update. ...interesting. ..plzzz upload next part as soon as possible. ..

Superb update dear but stopped at the wrong point! I wanted Suraj to hear Chakor and take his gun to shoot Sumit!