Sukor SS 'Amend Love That Consumes You' *UPDATED CHAPTER 6

Hello everyone. I'm back with an SS. Hope u all remember me. For the people who don't know me, I'm sumaiya u can call me sumi. I used to watch udaan since suraj married chakor by swapping the brides. I've also wrote an os on sukor 'feeling love'. This SS will be the continuation on that os. Its filled with romance, drama, horror and thriller.
If you have not read that os (feeling love) before don't worry i will post it here again and change the title name. For those who already read the os (feeling love) skip this post and read below this post.

Chapter 1
Desire Of Love

This story starts after 1 year of sukor's marriage. Imli and vivaan are happy with each other. Imli had a miscarriage but vivaan supported her now they are living a happy and peaceful life.

After suraj attempts to rape chakor. They both had a big fight. Chakor did not reveal this to anyone but inside she was totally broken into million pieces. She did not even said to vivaan because he would get more angry and the things could get worse, or maybe because he was too busy in his own life. Chakor sacrificed her love for imli but she did not knew that it was all about attraction and attachment she had with vivaan. She started to pretend that she trusts suraj more than anyone in her life. At start it effected vivaan a bit but then he ignored it by spending time with imli. Chakor was feeling disgusted living with a man like suraj but slowly slowly she started to see the other side of suraj. In that careless ruthless suraj she saw a caring side. How he cared for his unborn child and imli. Somewhere deep down she felt sad and jealous seeing his caring nature towards imli and his child. After they got the news of imli's miscarriage suraj felt very bad he did not spoke properly with anyone for about a week. Then he slowly gradually started to change. Maybe because he realised his mistakes. But he did not changed he was like that its just that he never showed his caring, sweet and protective nature to anyone but slowly he started to show it keeping his rude behavior active. Chakor did not realised when she felt in love with him while pretending to be in love with him. She never felt like this before, not even with vivaan. She loved him more than anything but did not revealed it to him because she thinks that he still loves imli.

Suraj felt worse. He hated himself for the way he bahaved with chakor. He was fully drunked and his anger was at peak. He knew he could not control his anger but he never knew that he would end up doing something terrible like this. First imli and now chakor. He wanted to say sorry to her plead infront of chakor for forgiveness but don't know how he would do that. Suraj started caring for his unborn child but the way imli treated him it made him feel even more worse but he deserves it that's what he thought and never said anything. He pretended to be happy with chakor just to show imli how muck happy he is with her. But he knew imli didn't care, not anymore. He showed that he did not care about them but he cared about them. The only reason why he did not accepted imli because he did not loved imli. The wedding day he swap the brides because he wanted imli to be with vivaan. He thought that vivaan could keep his child and imli happy and safe. Whereas suraj is all in threats and gunda giri. He kept his bad image infront of everyone. But little did he knew that chakor slowly got to know about what he is. He did not even realised when he too fell in love with chakor. After he got the news about imli's miscarriage he felt terrible he thought that it was his punishment and decided that he would change. Change for himself and good.

Both suraj and chakor are in love with each other and are unaware of eachother's feelings.

Chakor was standing infront mirror blow drying her hair humming a song then she heard a knock on door. She looked at the door then kept the hair dryer on table. She went to open the door.

She saw suraj standing there busy looking in his files

Suraj: akhir tum itni der se kar kya rahi thi.? Koi itna time lagata hai door kholne k.. (What were you doing.? Does anyone take so long to open a..)

Before he could complete his sentence he looked at chakor. The droplets of water streaming down from her forehed to her cheeks. She looked so hot. He just wanted to catch her in his arms and kiss her soft cheeks.

Chakor felt his gaze on her and she saw the way he was looking at her. She blushed.

Suraj moved his hand from his file to her face and wiped the droplet of water from her cheek. She felt goosebumps in her stomach at his touch.

Suraj looked at her beautiful face she was looking like an angel. She closed her eyes. Suraj saw her eyes closing and then he realised what he was doing he quickly straightened up. He did not wanted to make a mistake of touching her and forcing himself on her again.

Chakor quickly opened her eyes realizing her state. Suraj went inside, he threw his file on bed, opened his cupboard, took some more files and sat down on sofa examining them. Chakor just looked at suraj opened the cupboard took her towel and clothes then went inside the washroom to freshen up.

Chakor opened the tap and let the cold water fall on her body. She could feel cold water running down her skin. She thought about the incident. She just wanted to be in his embrace, in his protective arms and forget everything.

Suraj saw chakor going in washroom. When he heard the sound of water he kept his head on sofa and closed his eyes thinking about the incident which just took place few minutes ago. 'How can i be so stupid. Why can't i control my feelings emotions, the feeling of love. Why.?!'.

After few minutes she closed the tap and took her clothes and wore it. She went to open the door.

Suraj got up from sofa and removed his tshirt in frustration. He opened his cupboard to find another tshirt for him when he heard chakor's scream.

Chakor went to open the door and saw a big lizard on the knob of door. She screamed in fear. (I don't know that in serial she is scared of lizards or not but in this TS she is scared)

Chakor: ahhh bachaooo.. Surajj.. Bachaooo mujhe ahhh (ahhh help.. Surajj...help me ahh)

Suraj went running near the washroom hearing her scream.

Suraj: chakor.. Kya hua.. Darwaza kholo. Chakor (chakor.. What happen. Open the door. Chakor)

He tried to open the door

Chakor was so scared that she was moving back and jumping in fear and suddenly the shampoo bottle from the shelve fall down due to her continuous moving and jumping. The sound of bottle hitting the ground scared her even more because she was already scared so she shout in more loudly.

Chakor: ahhh surajj

Suraj got more tensed listening her screams and the things fallings. He now started to push the door with all his force. First he tried and in second the door opened and he saw chakor scared. He went near chakor and asked her

Suraj: chakor kya hua (chakor what happen)

Without saying a word she quickly hugged him tightly. Because of her sudden reaction he slighly moved back and the door closed.

Chakor closed her eyes and hugged him tightly. Suraj was shocked but then he hugged her back . They stayed like that for more than 2 minutes and then parted ways. They both were in a awkward siatuation. Chakor was looking down in embarrassment and suraj was looking everywhere but not her.

Suraj: uhmm.. Ayse koi chilata hai kya.? Haan bandhua biwi. (Does anyone scream like this.? Tell me bonded wife/collateral)

Chakor: dekho suraj iss mai meri koi galti nahi hai. Woh toh woh ek chipkali nazar a gayi isliye mai.. (Look suraj its not my fault. I saw that lizard and i got..)

Suraj: dargayi. (Scared)

Suraj said looking in her which were looking down

Suraj: ek minute ruko.. Chipkali.?! Tum ek chipkali se dargayi aur itna bura chilane lagi
(Wait a minute.. Lizard.?! You got scared because of a lizard and started screaming)

Suraj said and bursted out laughing chakor looked at him in anger and said

Chakor: dekho suraj tum.. (Look suraj you..)

Before she could complete her sentence she saw him standing there shirtless laughing. She quickly turned around and closed her eyes. Suraj slowed down his laughter and looked at chakor confused.

Chakor: suraj tum yeh.. Tum kya meri awaz mai itne madhosh (inebriated) hogaye the ki tum tshirt pehena he bhool gaye (suraj you.. You have got so inebriated with my voice that you forgot to wear your tshirt)

Chakor said to irritate him. Realization hit suraj and he quickly turned. Now both are standing in opposite direction facing eachother's back's. Suraj mentally cursed himself for not wearing his tshirt.

Suraj: dekho woh.. aysa kuch nahi hai woh toh hum bas.. (Listen its like.. Its Nothing like that i was just..)

Then suraj again turned to look at her. He was now facing her back. An evil grin formed on his face.

Suraj: mai toh bas tumhari madad karne ki koshish kar raha tha (i was just trying to help you out)

He said taking small steps towards. Chakor could feel him comming closer to her. She got a bit tensed and moved forward then due to some water on floor her foot twisted and she was about to fall she tried to catch hold of a tap beside the door but it broke. Suraj quickly catched her in a twist motion. He saw her face. She closed her eyelids tightly in fear and then she slowly opened her only to look at suraj holding her in his arms. They both share an eyelock. He moved a hair strand from her face which was blocking the view of her left cheek looking at her beautiful face. Chakor was looking lovingly in his eyes. She wanted to freeze that moment then and there.

Suddenly water started comming from shower and they both stood straight. Chakor turned and tried to close the tap but in vain because it broke.

Suraj: tumse nahi hoga (you can't do it)

He said and came close to her. he tried closing the tap. Chakor felt suraj's bare chest touching her back his both hand came from her back. From both sides. She was getting goosebumps all over her body due to the proximity between them. She looked at him mesmerized by his looks. His both hands touching her both hands from their sides. She was looking at his deep dark brown eyes. While he was busy trying to close the tap. He then felt her gaze on him and he looked at her.

They both were so close. Water running down between them. Suraj looked at her. The water running down her soft forehead then her soft cheek then her plumy lips. He just wanted to kiss her. He slowly started moving foward. He planted soft kiss on her cheek. She closed her eyes. She could feel current passing through her spine. He then slowly moved towards her lips..

Tejaswini: suraj beta tum thik.. (Suraj beta are you fin..)

Tejaswini said tensed but was shocked looking at them

Whole rajvanshi parivaar was standing there looking at suraj and chakor who were about to kiss.

Suraj and chakor quickly parted. Imli amd vivaan went away from there in anger.

Chakor was all tomato red. She was blushing. She went from there outside the washroom in their room.

Tejaswini: suraj beta woh maine chakor ki chilane ki awaz suni aur jab hum yaha dekhne aaye toh yaha koi nahi tha toh humne puri haveli chaan maari par tum dono nahi mile. phir jab hum yaha wapis aaye toh humne paani ki awaz suni aur darwaza khol diya. Tum thik toh ho na.? (Suraj. I heard chakor screaming so i came to check but you both were not here so we checked whole bungalow but you both were not there. So when we came back to your room we heard the noise of shower so we opened the door. Are you fine/alright.?)

Suraj thought 'I'm fine maa but my emotions, feeling, ragging hormones are on high and now i can't control them. I just want to tell her that how much i love her' he smiled

(**For those who read this already skip this one and read below**)

Chapter 2
Confessions

It has been few days since the incident happened. Suraj became more alert now he tried his best to not get in any physical contact with chakor. He was scared that he might again force himself on her against her will. However he knew somewhere it was not wrong and chakor also liked him but he was not sure.

'What if I'm wrong and chakor doesn't love me.?' Suraj thought to himself as he was driving to his haveli. Not entirely his. It was also vivaan's. Suraj wanted to share it with him. He did this for imVaan.

It was midnight and suraj was exhausted with the hectic schedule. He kept himself determined and tried his best avoiding chakor, thus he ended up getting all busy in his work and and even executed over time.

Chakor was getting annoyed with suraj's behaviour. He would just come home late night, eat and then sleep ,keeping himself busy in his work completely. Without uttering a single word or even sparing a look at her. She felt completey dejected. But everynight, she stay awake waiting for suraj hoping he would stop avoiding and talk to her. She even tried to cook dinner for him or arrange his clothes, bed.. Etc but it went all in vain. He would just come eat and sleep that's it. That's all what he does.!

Little did she knew that how much hard it was for him to ignore all her efforts towards him. Sometimes he had this sleepless nights, being guilty for avoiding chakor and ignoring her efforts.

Chakor knew suraj was not doing all this willingly. He did this because he thought he doesn't deserve her. She could see him ignoring and her and acting to sleep but feeling guilty and having sleepless nights. How could she disregard the fact that he was all alone, tossing and turning all night, having a hard time.

'Enough is enough' chakor thought 'today i will tell what i feel about him and this time I won't let him be alone all the time ignoring me and feeling guilty later' she thought and made herself all ready and determined. 'i just hope he don't ignore me again after i propose him.' She was scared, yet determined. It was a worth try. She would do anything to bring suraj out of this mess.

She opened her cupboard and went through some clothes deciding what to wear. She finally pulled out a simple yet elegant backless white anarkali. She quickly wore it with some white crystal bangels and earrings, finishing with a pinch on sindoor in her maang.

She prepped her hair straight, leaving it flowing flawlessly. The dinner was ready. She prepared it today, again, all by herself.

*Tring, Tring*

She heard the bell ring comming from downstairs. She quickly went but again came back to recheck herself. She looked right and left in the mirror and touched her forehead. 'Today will be the best day of my life suraj. I will amend you with the love that will consume you. She smiled.

*Tring, Tring*

The door bell rang again. She quickly went downstairs and opened the door, only to look at the tired and exhausted suraj. She was confused with 'was he exhausted with all the work or being alone.?' Her reverie was broken when she felt a jerk near my right shoulder. He went past her carelessly and as usual avoiding her.

He went and sat on dinning table and flipped the plate. He stretched his hand for rice bowl, before he could reach she went and took it quickly. She placed some rice grains in his plate neatly. She kept it on table and took the another bowl of hot and pipping dal. Suraj's favourite. She poured some dal in his plate with a tablespoon.

She took another bowl filled with freshly made palak paneer. Another favourite dish of him.

Suraj smelled the mouthwatering platter filled with his favourite food and most importantly love. He could see all the hard work she did to make this tempting dishes with all her love and care. A small smile came on his lips but he very quickly suppressed it. It wasn't got unnoticed by chakor.

She smiled 'finally he smiled. My hard work is now paid off. It was worth it.' She thought. She could do this hardwork all her life only for his one charming smile.

She enthusiastically sat on chair beside him smiling. He tried really hard to ignore the excited chakor smiling lovingly at him. He knew if he would spare one look at her, he would melt in a second.

He ate silently, tasting each and everybit of it. It was just delicious. He thought. He quickly ate his food and got up. It was now getting harder for him to ignore her.

He quickly went and kept his plate in the kitchen. She came running behind him and opened the tap for him to wash his hands. He rinsed his hands and went upstairs.

As he left, chakor frowned 'ughh.. Why does he need to do this all the time..?!' She asked herself 'if he does it again i will kill him.!' She thought and kept his plate in the kitchen sink and cleaned the dinning table. She hurriedly went upstairs nervous thinking. he might sleep if i don't hurry.

She opened the door of 'their' room panting. She examined the room and heard a creak. The washroom door opened, he strolled out, carelessly throwing his dirty clothes on bed wearing a black tshirt with white track pants.

She trampled near him, raising a finger him

Chakor: you, how can you throw your clothes on be..

Before she could complete the sentence her leg twisted due to her long heels and she plummeted down crumbling. She let out a whimper.

Suraj was in second beside chakor kneeling down. He looked at her with full of concern and scared.

Suraj: what happened.? Are you ok.?

He asked with disquiet

She nodded at a slow pace whimpering.

He gently grabed her in his arms and placed her tenderly.

He budge towards her leg slowly holding her foot. He smoothly removed her leather sandle and caressed her leg.

He went near the dressing table, opened the wooden desk and took out a can of relief spray. He came back and grasped her foot smoothly spraying, applying the content on her foot.

She looked at him. His eyes were filled with tenderness, worry, concern and most important love.

He sealed the spray can with cap. Chakor placed her palm softly on his cheek and said.

Chakor: suraj

He looked at her confused

Chakor: i love you

Suraj got shocked to wits.

Suraj: no.. Chakor..

Chakor: shh..

She placed her finger on his soft lips, then again on his cheek caressing lovinly.

Chakor: i know suraj. I know what you will say. You will say that you don't deserve me. But its not about what you deserve or what you don't. Its about loving someone and caring about them. Not thinking about yourself but the person you love. Giving all you can or you have. We both know that you made mistakes in you past but now you are changed. Changed for good. Everyone has a past. Nobody is born sweet, caring and humble. Not eveyone in this world does change, but you did, you are changed suraj. Stop punishing your self being alone and avoiding everyone who loves you. If you can care and love me then why not me.? .

Suraj was shocked. 'How does she knew that i love her' he thought'

Chakor: i love you, suraj.

Suraj got up and went to the other side of the bed. He sat on mattress covering his face with palms in confused and shocked. He felt a twinge of pain hit him on his back. He looked back and saw chakor standing stumbling with anger, holding a vase in her hands.

Chako: you stupid..

She said in full anger and threw the vase in his direction. he quickly dodged.

Suraj: what the he..

She again threw a remote and he dodged.

Chakor: how can you be such a jerk.? I proposed you and you again ignored me. You jerk, stupid, idiot

She threw a pillow annoyed at her missing aims. This time he catched the pillow in his hands and went to her. He cupped her face.

Suraj: I'm sorry

She made a puppy face

Chakor: why do you keep doing this to me. I hate you

She said and pummelled on his chest softly with her small fists. He embraced her in a hug. Her pace slowly decreased and she hugged him. She felt comfort and contentment in his arms. He was delighted. After a while he said.

Suraj: i love you too, chakor

She came out of his embrace and looked at him happily. He said thrilled looking at her happiness. She looked like a sweet girl who got all her happiness in this world.

Chakor: really.?!!

He cupped her face smiling and nodded. She bit her lower lip looking at him still feeling happy. He gently moved his face forward in a slow motion. She felt tingling sensation in her whole body feeling him moving closer to her. She got nervous in their proximity and closed her eyes.

Suraj comprehend and stopped in mid way. Their lips were inch closer. He placed a soft kiss on her forehead. She opened her eyes and looked at him confused.

Suraj: we could take it slowly if u wish.

She smiled at the fact that not only he is changed but also understands her in all situations. She hugged him tightly. He hugged her and said

Suraj: chakor, look at me.

She looked at him. He looked in her eyes and said

Suraj: chakor, I'm sorry for everything, I'm sorry for forcing myself on you. I feel terrible. I know I'm a horrible person but i promise i will change. I will change for us, our love. Please forgive me.

Her eyes welled up. She placed her palm on his cheek and said

Chakor: it's ok suraj. You love me that's more than enough for me.

He smiled and they both hugged.

That's it for today guys. Please do like comment and share your view. I will be more than happy if you liked it or comment on it. Hope you love this part. Suggestions are always welcome 😊


Chapter 3 on page 3
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Sumi! It was great! 👍🏼

Sumi, what a beautiful story.
Shower scene was amazing!!!
Update soon.

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Sumi! It was great!👍🏼

How sweet of her to understand his majboori, his reasons. And him being all thoughtful and careful! Awesome! Plz update jaldi ok?😆

And that shower scene☺️

-Sanu

Thank u sooo much sanu sweetie.. 😳 first one to comment.. 🤗 n i will surely try to update soon. But in nxt update again u hve to comment first 😉

great updates
loved it
waiting for next

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

I loved it. Do continue.

Thank u dear

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Sumi, what a beautiful story.
Shower scene was amazing!!!
Update soon.

Thank u nami 😊

The shower scene! ❤️

Awesome update dear...Thank u so sooo much. ..keep writing more...