OS: Four Times Suraj Saw Chakor

Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Just a little fic with scenes imagined from Suraj's POV.

For people who tuned in post-leap, the first scene did happen in one of the first few eps (perhaps even the first ep, my memory is a little foggy). I don't remember the specifics though. Suraj was definitely not in it and the first time he saw Chakor in the show was around seven years later.

This was supposed to be five scenes, but I crossed my self-imposed deadline (and got a little tired) 😛.

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Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Namita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Oh Wow! Aradhna, your writing takes my breath away. How beautiful!! I really would like a monologue from Suraj to know what goes on in his head.

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SukiDakanya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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In the serial did he give her a thoughtless apology and a bouquet?!Followed by a plan to exort money from her...?😕

Aru... as always your characterization is so accurate. I love how you leave off open ended with all the possibilities of intelligent conversations and character growth of Suraj...

I love how we can see the change of feelings Suraj has for Chakor👏

Thanks for sharing this!

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ipkrr

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Aradhana...loved loved loved it! So characteristic of Suraj too...and you weaved in his realization of what he'd done to Chakor. THANKS!

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Aru! That was amazing! Good to have an inkling about what goes in Suraj's clever mind!

Did the first scene actually happen? I never watched Udaan that early so I've no clue LOL.

Totally loved all of them!

-Sanu

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Sid

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Brilliant..brilliant..well written piece. 👏 Shows the depth of Suraj's character and particularly the first scene... I am also curious about that one..will look for the scene now..😆

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fan.matsh

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey Aradh! The last one - Surajs thoughts on attempted rape in Chakor - was just like I had thought abt!! I even commented after watching the episode how could he even talk abt Chir Haran on Imli without getting a cross thought abt what he had done with Chakor?!
All of them were awesome!!

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vinlora

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Brilliantly written araadhana. ..loved it...😊

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Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@Siddy and Sanya Arre the scene was in the show, but Suraj was introduced only after the first (seven year) leap. His first scene is his homecoming after flunking out of school. 😆

The bit about Chakor left on the grass as a baby with KNR and Tejju chilling in the background happened. I think KNR flung a piece of meat in her direction which is why the dog ran towards her. I have no memory of how the scene ended though.

And thanks for your comments and likes, everyone! 😃

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