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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
chashmish this was such a potato wali update😉 😆😆😆 -

especially this line " Kya pareshani hai tumhe ? mei koi photo frame hun ?? jab dekho diwaar se chipka dete ho...jane do mujhe ( angrily )n"

Heheheh photo frame 🤣 I was laughing so loudly.

I like that you are bringing the jealously imluu out... Loved the jungle mein mangal and hospital ki pati patni aur bachuaa drama 👏👏👏

Looking forward to your next update and don't forget to save it... so you an put it up faster...

Thanks to Nami Di for posting...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sukiya123

chashmish this was such a potato wali update😉 😆😆😆 -

especially this line " Kya pareshani hai tumhe ? mei koi photo frame hun ?? jab dekho diwaar se chipka dete ho...jane do mujhe ( angrily )n"

Heheheh photo frame 🤣 I was laughing so loudly.

I like that you are bringing the jealously imluu out... Loved the jungle mein mangal and hospital ki pati patni aur bachuaa drama 👏👏👏

Looking forward to your next update and don't forget to save it... so you an put it up faster...

Thanks to Nami Di for posting...



Haha even I love myself for that awesome line..😆 jokes apart...thank you so much for reading and liking my story even though I'm a terrible writer you guys are so kind and sweethearts to comment positive reviews...I've sent the holi update to nami di...I guess she'll post it tomorrow ( or whenever she can ) So please read it and tell me about it...

Thank you so much again..

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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Heya! I am new here.
I just luv sukor n their stories.
U write well. The story is interesting. Please continue soon. And abt that holi, then it doesnt matter if holi is long gone. U can write abt it nw. Aur waise vi i am excited, holi hai, so expecting sum masala in the next updt ;) 😆
Anyway continue soon.


Hi ...Welcome to the forum ..Do join us in our discussions at Sukor and VJ AT's...
Thank you so much for liking my story ...
I'm jasmene btw...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: vinlora

Awesome update...good going dear...waiting for holiday special episode. .update soon. ..


Thank you so much sweetheart...I hope you will like the holi update too...It will be posted tomorrow I guess..coz I've already pm it to nami di...Thank youso much again and please do tell me about holi update when you read it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Isha_201

read 4 chapters in one go...sorry for late comments.the story ia totally awesome...loved SUKOR...


Naah Don't be sorry...You can comment whenever you want 9 Your lapptop/mobile...your fingers..your keyboard ) 😆 #Lamejoke
anyways..Thank you so much for giving your time to read my story...and for liking it too inspit of all the mistake i do...Thank you so much..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaadey" Holi special - Chapter 7

Recap : Chakor and suraj fighting in hospital...nurse assumes them to be husband and wife...suraj teases chakor...Chakor doeas a drama to take imli with her..Suraj is surprised by her childish behavior ...

Night before holi...
Ranjhana calls cchakor to meet her somewhere where chakor informs her about the drugs that've been given to vivaan by tejaswani and shows her the antidote too...

Ranjhana folds her hands : Chakor please tum humare betey ki bachpan ki dost ho humara ek kaam kar do yeh dawai badal do uss drug ki bottle k sath..

Chakor : Ranjhana ji mein apka dard samajh sakti hun or main bhi chahti hun k vivaan thik ho jaye..magar aap toh khud haveli mei rehti hain aap yeh kaam ziada asaani se kar sakti hain bajaye iskey k main haveli main chupte chipate au ..

Ranjhana : Nahi hum kal haveli main hongey..balkey hum kuch hi ghanto mei kn ji k sath lucknow jaa rahey hain ..

Chakor agrees to ranjhana and decides to g to haveli tomorrow ...

In haveli at night ..

Kn : Suraj beta hum apki ranjhana maa k sath jaa rahey hain lucknow parso shaam tak wapas ayenge...Humare janey k baad aap..aap uss bandhua chipkali par nazar rakhiyega..

Suraj : arreey papa aap fikr kyon kartey hain aap jaiyye aram se or uss bandhua billi ko hum sambhaal lenge..

Kn leaves and suraj asks shikhu if everything is ready for holi party...then goes to bed but while going toward his bed he come sin front of mirror and sees the little scar on his cheek and remembers how chakor slapped him...he goes to his bed and before turning off the lights thinks..

Suraj : Jab jab iss chot ko dekhtey hain humare ander ki aag or barh jati hai...bass ek baar iska media chala jaye aisy saza denge k humare upr haath toh kia humare samne ankh uthaney ki himmat nahi karegi...and doses off...

At chakor's house...

Chakor was thinking how to enter haveli while she was also on her bed...

Cakor : kal kn or ranjhana haveli mein nahi hongey..tejasswani ji ka darr nahi hai humey...girja maasi bhi agar dekh lein hume toh koi masla nahi magar woh kn ka paalt--- she stops herself from saying this and remembers how she insulted suraj by saying this and how he saved her but she slapped him instead...Chakor tried to remove all these thoughts and decided to sleep now and think of going to haveli tomorrow ...she also falls sleep...

Morning ..at chakor's house..

Chakor was wearing white lehnga with white backless blouse with a light yellow colors see through dupatta drapped around her in 'front draped" style...straight open hairs with white colors jhumkas...( in short she was looking hot and beautiful AF ) 😆

Chakor to her maai : maa imli kaha'n hai dikhi nahi ?

Kasturi : bachua oo imli toh haveli gai hai...ooha'n hi holi manawat hai oo toh..

Chakor in her mind..: Uff suraj kam tha abb imli bhin haveli mein hi hai...par jo bhi ho vivaan k liye itna khatra toh mil lena parega...

In haveli...( party was going on as shown in serial ) vivaan was with tejaswani in her room and suraj was outside in party with imli and everyone else...

Chakor came there and saw suraj,imli,shikhi and all the guests outside haveli ( garden or something ) And thought how can she go in ..all the backside windows are shut too...she did't had any choice so she put her dupatta's veil on her head ( although it was kind of useless because the dupatta was see through )

Imli saw chakor going inside haveli and asked her to stop..

Imli : Tu eeha'n kia karath hai ?? kon tanta karey aai hai abb yaha'n ?

Chakor : arrey imlu aisy kia baat krti hai me harr baar hoi tanta karney thori aungi ..aaj holi hai na toh me bura naa maan kar sabko badhai dene ai thi bass...

Suraj saw imli and chakor arguing ( btw he was dressed in ripped blue jeans and white kurti ) hegoes to chakor and imli..

imli : tu jaa yaha'n se kisi ko teri badhai nahi chahiye..
chakor : par me...( imli cut her off in middle and asked her to leave )
Imli : bolaa naa jaa eeha'n...( she was interrupted by suraj )
Suraj : Tujhse kisney keh diya k iski badhai se kisi ko farq nahi parha ?? hume parta hai na...arrey bhai humarii bandhua billi pehli baar aai hai khud chalke ..

Chakor in her mind : Bass isi ki kami thi...iss se pehle k poori dunya bari bari hume dekhle haveli jatey huve nikal jana chahiye yaha'n se iski bakwaas sunney se toh behtar ha...

Chakor gave and angry look to suraj who was looking at chakor and smirking...she was about to leave when suraj hold her arm and pulled her back in front of him...

Imli was getting jealous seeing all this..

Suraj ; arrey kia huva...holi mananey aai ho or nakhre bhi dikhaa rhi ho ?? aisa thori hota hai..

Chakor : (angrily) tumhare saath holi mananey nahi aai thi me...hath chorho mera...

Suraj : arrey nahi mananey aai thi toh abb mana lo...( he was still holding her arm with one hand and from the other he picked some yellow color and threw it on chakor but she moved away immediately ...

Suraj : Yeh kia ?? khel khel rhi ho humare sath ? chalo fir poori trhan se khelte hain na...aaj hum bhi dekhte hain k ace runner 501 kitna tez bhagti hai or humare rang se kaisey bachti hai...after saying this he pick handful of red color and came tpward chakor and she knew that she has to run because suraj is the last person she wanted to celebrate holi with so she started running and suraj was behind her...A song started playing on speakers...
Hey ji re,

Ude ude mann ude,
par lage tere sang jude,
mann ude,
pag badhe, teri ore badhe
jag chhod badhe..

Chakor was running and asking suraj to stop...
Chakor : Kya bachpana hai suraj..mene kaha na tumhare sath holi khelne nahi aai me...
Suraj : Aur humne bhi kaha na k holi toh tumhare sath khel kar rahenge hum...

Chakor was running when a table blocked her way...she turned back to see suraj smirking ...
Lahu munh lag gayaa
soya tha nas nas mein ab ye jag gaya
labon ke chhoone se
khwabon ke kone se
bach ke sab se lab se lab ye kab se lag gaya
Suraj ; abb kaisey bachogi...suraj was coming forward and chakor could't move because the table blocked her way...she was unable to keep her balance so she kept both her hands on table to stay balanced...suraj was now very close to chakor...he already had red color in his hand which he kept on her forehead applying the color and then slowly movied it toh her cheek while hse closed her ...

bhatak rahi hai aaj ye malang ang ang ang ang
atak gayi hai saans uske sang sang sang sang...

kal kal behta tha chhal chhal rehta tha
jaan le ke jaane kab gaya
lab se lab ye lab lab se lahu muh lag gaya..

he movied his hand fro her forehead to her cheek and from her cheek to her neck while her eyes were closed ...the feel of his touch made her angry...when he was done applying her color she opened her eyes and they were blood red with anger...
Imli was looking at them from a distance with anger and jealousy while they were having an eyelock..
chakor was looking at him angrily while he was smirking and giving her "I won " Look...

Suraj : kya huva...ace runner 501 haar gai humse ?

Chakor pushed him back and said : Yeh table agar bich me naa ata toh tum saari
zindagi bhi humare piche daurtey tb bhi pakarh na pate

suraj : achaw yeh baat hai toh chalo dekhte hain k kon ser hai aur kon sawa ser..
suraj drags chakor in middle and signs shikhu to play the song...

Go Go Go Govinda
Go Go Go Govinda..
Go Go Go Govinda
Go Go Go Govinda..

(Male Voice)
Att Ke Matt Ke Jhatt Ke Maare Hai
Tu aaj shola toh hum bhi kuhare hai
Tu aasman pe hai
Tu chaad tare hai
Hummm...

Suraj danced on these lines while chakor was giving him "nott good enough" looks...now chakor came in front of him and danced on...

Go Go Go Govinda
Go Go Go Govinda..
Gera bara tera pad raha para
Body kahan humara yara
Gera bara tera..

Oyi hoyi hoyi..(Female Voice)

Chahe dum nikle yeh dum (Ha)
Hai kasam teri kasam (Ha)
Tujhe aaj chodenge na hum.. (Aha)

Go Go Go Govinda..
Oye Oye Oye Oye.. Chakor was dancing on these lines while suraj was looking at her "impressed"

Suraj was about to go to chakor when imli came and started to dance..

Att ke matt ke jhatt ke maare hai
Tu aaj shola toh hum bhi kuhare hai
Tu aasman pe hai
Tu chaad tare hai
Hum...
suraj started to dance with imli and chakor ..but his focus was only on chakor while imli was trying to get his attention but failed...

They all stopped dancing on this line..

Ye matki thod re..
Go Go Go Govinda..
Go Go Go Govinda..
Go Go Go Govinda..
Go Go Go Govinda..
Go Go Go Govinda..
suraj climbs on human pyramid and breaks the matki and looks at chakor ...who was also looking at him and then left from there ..suraj came down and imli congratulated him but he ignored her and watched chakor leaving...

The end..

Pre-cap ...chakor drinks bhaang by mistake...a man tries to take chakor with her...suraj was witnessing everything..

I really hope that you like this chapter...sorry for the mistakes and really sorry if i failed to impress you guys with this chapter ( if you've expected much more than this ) But I could come up with this with my imagination...
The first song is "Lahu munh lagg gaya " from raamleela movie..You should listen to the song while reading the chapter it will definately double the fun...
The second song is "Go Go govinda' from movie Oh My God...
Please do comment and tell me what you think about this chapter and the story ?

Special thanks to Namita Di for posting this...and a hug too 🤗
Love-Jasmene
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love it, Jasmene!! Awesome update. Perfect after the episode we got!! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome awesome episode dear...love sukor and love the way suraj applies holi colour on chakor...waiting for the next episode. ..update soon dear...seems interesting. ..Thank u so much.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Namita_

I love it, Jasmene!! Awesome update. Perfect after the episode we got!! 🤗


Thank you so much...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinlora

Awesome awesome episode dear...love sukor and love the way suraj applies holi colour on chakor...waiting for the next episode. ..update soon dear...seems interesting. ..Thank u so much.


Thank you so much...I was really worried what if I disappoint you guys after building up so much for the holi update...But I'm glad you liked it...Off to write chapter 8 ...😳

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