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part 6

part-6

Three of them entered near the dinner setup .that was awesome .sky blue colour little setup with dinning table and three chair with camp fire .They fell they enter into cloud

dinning table contains very heat delicious veg, and non veg foods with wine.

Chakor : wow. .awesome set up .vivaan r u k

Vivaan: I am fine

Chakor : mind voice ..We know vivaan who you this situation I won't leave tejaswini .I will teach her a best lesson We make every thing alright. ... By seeing vivaan

Vivaan : why r u seeing me like this

Adi : nothing .I think she planning next adventure with you

Chakor : let's go guys .she stand on the chair and she sit in the centre of dinning table

adi and vivaan : Ho my god what she is doing? Adi replied to vivaan i told you na she planning for adventure .ddon't get surprise it's usual

Vivaan : why you sit in dinning table .There is 3 chairs for us na

Chakor : you both sit in chair .I will sit here only ..

Adi and vivaan ; both sit in the chair .They are about to touch food

Chakor : she beat both of them fingers .don't touch food .its so hot .you both injured in hands and legs .If you guys touch hot food u will get irritation .she went to bank of Lake and she washes her hands .again she sit in dinning table .I will feed food for u both .so don't touch food

Adi :annapurnai ki jai Ho ..quick I feel hungry

Vivaan : he look at her constantly without blinking his eyes

chakor : she feed both adi and Vivaan

Vivaan :how sweet you .You taking care of frnds like a mother .unknowingly he starts crying ..His eyes filled with tears

chakor : why are you crying Vivaan ? I am ur frnd

adi:who dont he cry?.see me to crying...idiot.u feef to much mirchi...who feed water

Chakor : open ur mouth ..she throws ice cubes on his mouth

Vivaan: I didn't remember anything .I don't know when we are frnds in childhood or not .I insulted u many times .BT u treat me as a good frnd. This was big day in my life ,I got good special frnd in my life .You are too much caring and loving ..will u forgive me and accept me as ur frnd

Chakor : she wipe his tears ..and she feed water to him .She hugs him. And she replied you always be my best friend from childhood to till now and forever ..you also more caring and sweet Vivaan

Adi : I m happy .We have to find another clue here only

Chakor and vivaan : they saw frog in the bottom of the table .vivaan jumped he get stand in table and Chakor too

Adi: for frog you guys scaring .Adi went near to frog it's rubber frog there is a another clue in the frog body and instructions too

Clue : they have to cross forest and reach hill station road and there is another task in that notice placed in hill station road.They reach hill station highway by walk .adi feel more pain in legs but he didn't express .chakor understand his pain .she tie a bandaid by her skarf

They saw the notice board : in some distance there will projector with big screen and cycle too ..that was source and destination of the round there can able to find the treasure

Task is ----one person : can do 100 pushups in the hill station highway . After completion that one will have to climb 20 metre rope .at the end there will be pendrive ..and to play video will his frnds after return in the projector

Another 2 person : to do cycling , ones eyes will be closed with ribbon and by another one instructions to drive the cycle .by belief can able to complete this task .they have to travel hill station to travel and return to projector place is destination

Then 3 of them go and play pendrive video and the end the puzzle will asked .The answer was the treasure of the contest

Chakor : now I will decide ..adi and vivaan you both drive cycle and I will done 100 pushup and rope climbing

adi and vivaan:no its too hard..

Chakor : you both injured in hands and legs .how can I allow u guys too do pushup And rope climbing .no way I will do it .my decision is final ..I m sports person I can do pushup and u guys know I have experience in pipe climbing too .Don't worry

Adi and vivaan : wish Chakor .They both took cycle vivaan eyes closed with black ribbon and he did cycling without seeing .He follow Adi instructions

Chakor : guest enter the destination projection area .suraj, bhaiyaji also she look to them she started her pushups

Suraj : he look her with cruel eyes .He thought how can she complete 100 pushups as a women .its can't possible to her

Adi and vivaan : they both try best to reach the destination and try to reach projection area destination where chakor doing pushups

Chakor : she gave angry look to suraj .she complete 100 pushups ..she climb in rope .she give her best to reach the end of rope

Adi and vivaan : they reach in time they saw Chakor in rope .she got Pendrive .she trying to climb down

Chakor : she climb down in rope ..she is about to slip BT Adi vi vaan hold her in hands without falling .she gave Pendrive. .

Adi and vivaan:they saw kn and suraj .They play Pendrive video in projector screen.Adi chakor vivaan hand each other like chain they saw video.It was great surprise for trios ..video was the edit of contest round 1 ,2,3.They saw lake scenes ,how they save adi from water plants ,dinner moments etc..and all

Puzzle : from this video and moments .you get ur treasure .what is ur treasure? ..

Adi vivaAn chakor :they stunned and admired with video for few minutes ...After few minutes chakor lips to move to say the words " our frndship" "there is no best treasure in the world than a good loving frndship"

the voice from projected screen..yes..u r right..these frnds win the contest with pure frndship supprt,belief trust on each other...

Kn and suraj : got angry ..BT they maintain being happy with fake smile

Percap: why adi hug suraj?...

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Part-7

Adi vivaan chakor win the contest ..They got trophy cup and gift as a smart phone

Adi kept trophy cup as a chakor crown and he make cup as crown of chakor.

vivaan give smart phone to her she give lovely reaction

Adi : he interested to irritating suraj .He ask vivaan we took selfie smart phone

Vivaan :he took selfie .vivaan put hands of chakor shoulder and Adi kept trophy as crown of chakor

suraj : he got more irritation .why she becoming more popular .I will humilate you chakor in front of all .jJust wait baby

organiser :play song for the winner in contest

Chakor : frndship is always loving ..This floor for frnds .so everybody and participate join with us in the wonderful music dance floor

Dance

Song plays disco deewane ..Chakor vivaan adi starts dancing .They enjoy the dance .she gave her expressive dance and smile

Suraj : I can't see you happy Chakor .He reach dance floor act like dance .I will humiliate u in front of all .I am coming baby ..

Adi and Chakor : they enjoy the song .They doesn't notice suraj

Vivaan : he notice suraj .suraj intension is not good .Vivaan give signal to Adi in eyes

Suraj : he about to fall on chakor .He want to destroy the star image and respect of chakor

Adi :Adi understand vivaan signal. ...

Vivaan: suraj is about to fall on chakor .vivaan pull chakor close to him

Suraj : he losses his balance .He about to fall on floor .suddenly

Adi : Adi hug suraj .He hugs him tightly he can't able to move his body ..suraj hands got paining .BT suraj don't express his pain.Adi by hugging ..He didn't allow suraj to see his face he told in suraj ears .be in your limits .you are not having standard and worst to competite with us

Suraj : who are you ? After all u r journalist .you always hidding ur identity ..I will kill you sure

Adi : I am waiting dude ..keep trying machi ..I think you don't know the power of journalists .I know you are illiterate .your father bhayaji became aged but u ...I m ur enemy .r u forget me dude ..I will remember u

Suraj : he tired to find Adi .In crowd Suraj missed to see Adi identity

Adi : he removed his overcoat ..and he joined with dance moment

Vivaan : he hold chakor closed to him .The music plays "sun saathiya" he come close to hear ears he removed her hair band .He told in her ears .Suraj tried to humiliate you in front of all ..so I pulled u close to me.Chakor in free hair ..she dance with Vivaan for sun saathiya song ..adi and Vivaan exchange chakor one to another in dance steps .so that none can dare to touch chakor

Chakor : she went to suraj this time you have saved by us enemy without falling in the ground otherwise u will taste mud of the floor today .next time he will not rescue you .It's warning for you ..see u bye

In jeep

Chatvaan travel in jeep to drop her

Adi : he drive jeep he got a call chakor selected for national marathon .They send invitation to her and also she has give reply for invitation

Vivaan : he teach chakor how to use smart phone like how to send msg ,whtsapp and how to send audio videos and all

Adi : he stop jeep .They ask what hpn .Adi told good news to them .We need to go post office

Post office

Chakor : Adi vivaan stay in jeep .she went inside .Sir if any letter come in my name

Officer : yes ur sister collected ur letter with suraj just now

Chakor : she feel bad .she came out with sad face

Adi and vivaan : what hpn Chakor ..she replied suraj theft my letter .what to do vivaan adi both replied don't worry Chakor .we will get ur letter

Vivaan : I will find your letter in suraj room

Adi and Chakor : no .don't involve directly in this matter ..you will get into trouble ..its not safe .We will make plan .We both come to your haveli to ur room at 8.00 pm today

Vivaan : how?

Chakor : as usual with my technique

Adi and vivaan : give lovely smile on Chakor

Adi home

Adi : he took 3 sleeping tablets and he getting ready .Chakor ask Adi why are you packing sleeping tablets ..

Adi : wait and watch it's for revenge

vivaan room

Vivaan : nervous in his room time is 8 pm ..He saw chakor climbing in pipe .and he hold her and lifted her

Adi : he tried to climb pipe

Chakor : bijilli kA dabba come fast.They both entered into room

Tejaswini : knock his door .she brought 2 milk glass . one for suraj and another for vivaan

Adi :hide under the bed. Near the table

Chakor : she hide in the side table of cupboard corner

vivaan : open the door

Tejaswini : she spoke loving words to vivaan .she send vivaan to fresh up .She mix drug

Adi and chakor : got more angry .what we will we do see ? My Dr tanker aunty

Adi : by hiding under bed . He put sleep tablets on the drug mixed glass ..by counting one for chakor , another for vivaan and 3rd tablet for me and my satisfaction ..

Chakor : by hiding cupboard .she naughty exchange drug and tablets glass for suraj and normal milk for vivaan

Tejaswini : she thought today I drugged you powerful drug .In ur life u will not get to know abt Chakor ...you will forget ur yesterday happy moment with Chakor .I want to take revenge on rajna ..she went out to with suraj glass with happy face .vivaan had Normal milk because of adi and chakor

Vivaan : he closed the door .adi chakor come out with fun

Adi and chakor : gave hi5 on each other

Vivaan : what hpn ? Have you guys executed any plan

Adi : of course ..I just mixed sleeping tablets on suraj .so he will get rest .now you go to suraj room and bring chakor letter .you will be safe .none doubt u

chakor(mind voice):feed drugged milk to suraj in her own hands...ur drug going to backfire u...she laugh

vivaan : he reach suraj room and he took Chakor letter in cupboard and he give it to Chakor ..sshe hugs vivaan happily and he saw her cute smile

Percap : adi like to play Tejaswini as his football ..Chakor ask gift from adi and vivaan .what they will gift her ? Chatvaan stay in same room why ? Keep watching

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Part-8

Adi and chakor : Adi I want to play tejawini as my football

chakor : surely , she has to pay for her misdeeds

Adi drop her in home ..

Chakor : we will meet in shiv mandir at morning .k come with ur gift

Morning 6

Chakor mom : chakoriya I make a dress for u .wear this go to shiv mandir .pray for ur national success

Chakor : wow maai ..lovely lehanga ..simple white with marron color .I will surely .BT you have to make me ready ...

Imli: she feel jealous ..Chakor is always important to maai ever ...when maai loved me

Temple :

Adi : Adi reach temple in bike .He wore helmet .Chakor knock his helmet open the door

Chakor : she come in lehanga ..see maai present me this dress .how is it ?

Adi : u looking good like a cloud ..maai taste is awesome ..in front of maai u look better

chakor:where is my gift?

Adi : wait I will .He took a small box infront of bike parse ..

Chakor : for me ...give me soon na ...He show pearl set to her ..Chakor for me ha Adi so sweet ...With excitement so wear the pearl set

Adi : he likes her innocence

Chakor : she gave letter to post for sports ministry ..you post it Adi .I will pray with offer letter in shiv mandir .you post this reply letter of mine .I will wait for u

Adi : he salute in bike ..yes madam .I will be back soon stay here

morning 7 ..vivaan room

Vivaan : today I feeling fresh ..no headache .how can I forget that chakor and adi waiting for me in mandir .you have to get gift for her Vivaan .don't forget

Chakor : she wait for adi and Vivaan with pooja plate

Vivaan : he buy mehandi cone and he hide it in pant pocket .He reach near temple ..He goes near to Chakor

Chakor : why are late ? I am waiting for you a hours .adi went to post my letter to post ministry ..childish she give expression .she sweetly hold Vivaan hand where is my gift my dear Vivaan ?

Vivaan : he look at her and give cute smile .wait you forget to wear something

Chakor : what I forget ? Maai present me this dress How is it ?

Vivaan : u look like jasmine flower covered with rose petals ...ur face look like beautiful full moon ...wait I will be back .He make her to sit under the tree .He went to shop .He saw red bangles .He brought whole bangles

Chakor : she was surprised ..Vivaan come with bowl full of red bangles ..For me ha

Vivaan : for you only , u forget to wear bangles this will suits you well..

Chakor : he hold her hands and he wore bangles on her hand soft and smoothly .on both hands .she feel happy .she make bangle sound on Vivaan ears .They both smile on looking each other

Rajna : saw both Chakor and Vivaan .For my son I just digesting this girl Chakor .only make my son normal .soon well I will get my son .

Chakor : this is my gift ha Vivaan

Vivaan : no ..BT this bangles too .I brought another gift for u.i will give you later ..After pooja so wait chakoriya

Chakor : k .wait with me .aAfter adi return .we Will do pooja together in mandir

Percap

Vivaan hold chakor legs on his lap what will be rajna reaction ? Why chatvaan stay in same room ? What's reason ...guess

...friends read ff and give ur feedback...keep loving vikor and support chatvaan friendship

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love Vivaan adi chakor bond 👍🏼
Continue.. waiting for vikor romance 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mrityunjay-

Love Vivaan adi chakor bond 👍🏼

Continue.. waiting for vikor romance 😳

enjoy friendship of chatvaan and love blossoms of vikor ...upcoming ff vikor lovely moments to be continued ...
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Originally posted by: -mrityunjay-

Love Vivaan adi chakor bond 👍🏼

Continue.. waiting for vikor romance 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏 Great job, Vinitha!
I wish I could post a reply for each chapter, It was so wonderful. I really loved how you've incorporated ViKor in this fic without belittling the Adi-Chakor and Vivaan-Adi friendship. And the Adi-chakor teasing parts are my favourites besides the Vikor interactions. There's probably dozens of other things I want to point out and appreciate but I'm unfortunately short on time right now. Just know that I really love and appreciate your fanfic and am eagerly waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doomandgloom

👏 Great job, Vinitha!
I wish I could post a reply for each chapter, It was so wonderful. I really loved how you've incorporated ViKor in this fic without belittling the Adi-Chakor and Vivaan-Adi friendship. And the Adi-chakor teasing parts are my favourites besides the Vikor interactions. There's probably dozens of other things I want to point out and appreciate but I'm unfortunately short on time right now. Just know that I really love and appreciate your fanfic and am eagerly waiting for the next part!

it's my pleasure ..I just love vikor lot and chatvaan frndship ...keep giving ur feedback and comments ...
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Part - 9
Adi ,chakor, vivaan done pooja in mandir for chair success ..
Vivaan : he went to buy prasad
Chakor : how can we save vivaan from tejaswini. We have to make tejaswini to stay away from vivaan ..
Adi : we will make plan ..Chakor took Adi cooler , forget this cooler from today it's mine ..He got call from channel .He went off. .He told vivaan you drop chakor in home .
Both chakor and vivaan sit under the tree
Vivaan : I don't know why I didn't remember childhood moments ..but now we create sweet moments of our life chakor.
Chakor : of course vivaan ..sweetly see asked where is my another gift?
VIVAAN: THEY both have eye lock ..He hold her leg and he placed her leg on his lap ..she blushes with shy. .I know you are best athlete ..you get lot of wounds on your legs .I want to be medicine of your every wounds ...I mean mehandi ..He draw mehandi on her both foot. ...
Chakor : she feel amazed .she has no words to say ..then she said so sweet of you my vivaan.
Ranjana: she saw both chakor and vivaan ..I can't see this ..For you vivaan I am tolerating her ..I don't know why you are crazy on chakor from childhood to till now ..chakor only can able to save you from tejaswini ..soon well I will get my son ...she moved from that place .
Vivaan: he complete mehandi for feet ..He draw on her hands ...He draw image of radha krishnan on her hands
Chakor : do you know vivaan ..on your haveli. .u r my krishnan and I am ur radha in childhood ..They both have eye lock.
Vivaan : I know .miss kn show me our radha krishnan pic
Chakor :wow vivaan .mehandi awesome .but how can I go home .If I walk mehandi on my foot will destroy na? What will I do ?
Vivaan : I am with you .Don't worry ..suddenly he lift her on his hands ..They have eye lock with naughty smile on each other face .I will drop you in home .
Chakor : in his hands she replied ..Prince of azaadgaaj today he became my porter ...
He drop her on home .
Chakor : she thank for sweet loving gift ..she give tight hug to vivaan ..she touched his nose with mehandi hands .by saying *hamare vivaan is back *
Percap
In factory Adi in suraj kn hands ..suraj about to kill Adi by knife ..chakor sitting in factory wall ..she call suraj ..hey dude I permit u too kill my reporter frnd ...gohead ..why chakor told like that ? ...
Keep watching udaan ...
Friends give ur comments ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww he carried her! That was so sweet!
Lovely update, dear!

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