chakor vivaan aditya ff friendship (new treat by my friend vinitha)

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Tamanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chakor: feeling bad . that her bestie vivaan doesn't recognise her. Adi:wht Chakor ? Vivaan doesn't recognise me.i think he is angry vivaan ko samjana hoga Adi:everything will became alright .We will sort out his misunderstanding .hi Chakor: we met in dinner ? Bye

Chakor residence

Chakor mom: she feel missed that she can't fed her daughter for 10 yrs. I feel proud of Chakor ..she fed her with love and rooti

Adi :aAdi watch everything in entrance ..maA you can't fed me? She fed both Chakor and adi

Chakor mom:she gave mango slices to Chakor and adi .she is about to eat but can't .she recalls vivaan loves mango slices ..Chakor tie mango slices in her skarf ...maa means mother

Chakor : I will come mai .vivaan like mango slices

Adi :hey wait I will come

Chakor : eat well Adi I will return soon

Haveli timing 8 pm

Chakor mind voice I m going to jump wall for you vivaan .vivaan room light on so he is not sleeped

Chakor jumped into haveli .now how can I reach home ?

Chakor saw pipe going via vivaan room ..I can do any adventure for my cute frnd .why not pipe climbing .she successfully climbed and entered in balcony .she saw he is so depressed and recall sweet moment with vivaan and remind his cute smile .I will make u smile whole heartly vivaan .she entered in his room .

Vivaan .:tum? What are you doing her...He call badi maa memerly

Chakor : shut his mouth .I get something for you Vivaan she opened her skaraf .and show mango pieces it's ur favourite

Memerly mild sound

Vivaan:who are you? I don't like mango pieces .stay away

Chakor :I thought my bestie loves mango lot so I did adventure for my Vivaan. If you saw my Vivaan give this to him

Vivaan : hey stop

Chakor :she hide in balcony door edge

Vivaan : he thought she went .He saw mango slices and recalls childhood moments unknowingly he took mango pieces and taste

There is one voice .:mera Vivaan ko maney pakadleya

Chakor came out from the door that was a eye lock btwn Chakor Vivaan

Tejaswini :I got some sound in your room and Vivaan replied no badi ma and she searched room ..I management they may be rat

Vivaan :shocked where she went ..He locked his room and search chakor .Vivaan hear sound I am here .He saw her in pipe he give little smile and willing to express his smile

Chakor : I saw u smile Vivaan

Vivaan: no

Chakor :yes I saw she losses her grip and she fell in ground comedy type

Vivaan : he went to downstairs r u k

Chakor : I know you care for me vivaan

Vivaan :I don't want any frnd

Chakor : why Vivaan I m sry I can't loose my bestie

Vivaan : teared eyes why are you saying frnd ? Where are you went for 10 yrs .when I m in worst situation .what I feel ? How I miss ? How I let depressed life ? Do you know .now you came .you I can forgive .y I accept I accept you

Chakor .:teared eyes . she hugs him and I don't go away from you ever and forever ..Both crying .I cannot loose you

vivaan: don't give me foolish hophope go ..sstay way ..mmy own mother doesn't love me and I can expect this from u ..

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Adi:it's getting late why chakor didn't return ? I will not anything bad happen to you Adi reaches haveli gate .He tired to climb wall but he hear some sound some body is jumping from the wall he noticed who is thar? Adi give shock reaction ..none other a chakor he hold her and move a side

Chakor:Adi you its not safe for u .y u came

Adi : Adi madam ..r u doing gymnastics .wait a moment chakor

Chakor : what

Adi : do you know there is 7 wonders in the world .today I saw one wonder it will be added .I want to make memorable

Chakor :what do you think?

Adi : smile pls ..He took selfie with her ..

Chakor :for what you took pic in front of haveli adi

Adi : look at you see your condition ..mud in your hair .you rolled in clay and came out .He laughs .I don't know state athlete do this adventure and all .It's wonder of nation

Chakor : are you making fun on me

adi : tell me what happened Chakor tell everthing pipe climbing and all

adi : he laugh .wwhy are you give me surprises to me ..ppipe climber Chakor

Chakor : everything far in frndship

Adi : good Chakor ..This is ur speciality .you touched vivaan heart recalls our frndship in him vivaan will be soon with us

Adi : he drops her home in cycle .at home .Chakor I have surprise for you some body is waiting for your return for u years ..I want to show you to her .They both say good night

Early morning...

Around 11

Adi : r u ready chakor he wait for her in car

Chakor :I know where are you going to take me .Let's me guess ..Adi says who

Moose ..I miss your mother lot. I m excited to meet her first we go bazaar then your home .I want to purchase

Adi : they reach bazaar .They saw vivaan there chakor give signal to Adi in her eyes to call vivaan with them

Adi: went and talk to vivaan .They talk nicely he saw her and vivaan become silent .Adi told we came to purchase you join with us and ur vehicle repair and I call mechanic

Dress stop

Three of then enter in dress shop

chakor :sshe went to chudi section .sshe ask IsIs it suit moose

Adi: you. .you came her to buy chudi for my mom

Chakor : yes it's my wish. SHE finally select chudi after 2 hrs

Adi and vivaan became tired .Adi told vivaan that you came and wait my home mechanic deliver your vehicle in my home .my mom feel good to see we three of us in same time .vivaan told k .I came for you and ur mom

Adi home

Adi : tie chakor eyes ..vivaan look at each other and feel jealous .They entered in home

Adi mom : pyaare chakor I miss you lot they hug each other emotionally ..I m happy ishwar will be happy to see you

Chakor : I bought something for you lovely moose ...she gift chudi and force her to wear for me

Adi mom : me too bought something for you .You have to wear for me .go and see in that room .I brought for my daughter that was a beautiful deep dark blue and black shaded saree and white stone earing

Chakor: for me saree ..moose took her into room and locked her to get ready ..

Time left for many hrs .Chakor didn't came out from the room ..vivaan and adi don't know anything what's happening. Adi ask mom what hpn .vivaan insists to go Adi mom convinced him to stay till evening

There is sound from Chakor room after 3 hrs ..moose moose ...

Every body runs toward her room ...

She showed only her face from room .everyone ask what hpn? She replied I can't do this ? This is more tough task.adi vivaan blink each other what is happening here

Adi m0m:u both wait in hall we will be back.i prepare vivaan favourite samosa and cake for you all

she wear Saree and earing ..sshe kiss her in forforhead ..sshe looks gorgeous and Adi mom wear chudi for chakor happiness they opened door .ffirst Adi mom entry Adi surprised and chakor entry in Saree ..sshe look vivaan and adi

Adi : adi starts laughing and close his eyes .ma u know chakor s pipe climber .she in this avatar

Chakor : got angry ..jokes apart am I good in Saree .how s it adi and vivaan

Adi : u talk abt this task ha ..He near stop laughing

Vivaan : he mesmerised ..murmuringly I have no words ,words became meaningless in front of u. .He wake up from sofa ..He told in mild voice so no one properly hear ..chakor said what you told Vivaan he told how can I know abt saree

Adi : tum tum...He create excitement and replied you look like Christmas tree ..

Chakor :Chakor get angry and she run to beat Adi and they run whole house ..moose recall childhood moments

Adi: he fall on sofa .Chakor kick his stomach ..Adi call vivaan save me Christmas tree trying to break my bones .where are you going .There is your vehicle keys

Save me...

Moose more happy ...

Next scene Adi home lane

Chakor playing swing and vivaan lying in Adi mom lap. .Adi pushes Chakor swing ..vivaan look at Chakor playing naughty

They have eye lock

Adi get call he move to attend call ..Chakor about to fall and vivaan run and hold Chakor in his hand and they have eyelock ..Chakor replied u care for me vivaan .

Vivaan : give angry look

Chakor: I didn't mention you .I mean my Vivaan care for me .Why are you getting angry ..

Today episode over

Percap : adi reporter club function .theme frndship contest party. .adi Vivaan Chakor participate as a frnds team . Will they win ?...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmatanya
Nice ff yar keep it up 😊

thank alot for ur comment...😊

me too loved this ff of her alot...😳😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

great start ... nice one

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chhavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

part 2

Adi: got call from his reporter club dude .where are you Adi ? R u forgot today our club contest party ? Came with ur frnds .today theme frndship strength .team must have both girls and boys it's must ..totally one team must contain 3 member

Timing evening 7 pm

Adi ,vivaan chakor travel in jeep .Adi convinced vivaan that my reporters club party .team must be 3..I need ur support .to win contest

They entered in club

Adi ,vivaan look more handsome with chakor in blue saree .They register there team for contest

First round .to test understanding in frndship .frndship art in floor

Rules of round : one members have to collect things for art and deliver to other 2 member then he s hidden in room. .Other 2 of them put art of floor .art must based on each and every team get a frndship quotes ..art have to indicate quotes

After completing art hidden member find the quote of art ..This round will test ur understanding of frndship ..without words how will you are express urself to ur frnds in art ..

Wait for 10 min

3 of them read all those instructions and then adi vivaan see chakor ...They feel chakor will save them in round ..

They thought she have experience in rangoli and all as girl

Chakor: y are you guys seeing me like this ?

Adi : you and vivaan make art ..I will guess .understand me Chakor vivaan .rangoli and all doesn't suit me .I don't know difference between rangoli powder and holy powder ..

Vivaan : said k.chakor give shocking reaction and blink ...

Adi : I feel safe I m escape .He collect things and he hide in room

Chakor : Adi you escaped .I m in trouble ..I don't know how to hold rangoli powder and how can I make art ? How can tell this to vivaan ..what will he think ? Her mind voice what just manage and pretend y r make art ..vivaan will manage

Chakor and vivaan got theme pyaar dosti hai ...she showed theme to vivaan

Vivaan : we will give best for adi

Chakor: mind voice ..you are talking abt best but I m worst in drawing

They made art in completion state ..chakor face full of colors unknowingly she applied in face too .vivaan smile at her

Chakor : we made a best art .you are super .u completed art with me .She clap and innocently suddenly she slipped into art ...she destroyed

She Start crying and feel guilty .its my fault .she thought vivaan scold her but her ..He closes her mouth .don't cry .There is only ten minutes left .He got idea . by holding her hand and stand behind her ..He told believe me .I will correct art by your hands .don't feel guilty

By her finger and hand prints he corrected art ..now see. ..It became more beautiful

Chakor :Chakor hugs him

Adi : he entered .He saw there art and also Chakor .I know they instruct to put art on the floor .but you make art in face ..

Chakor : laughs well very funny

Adi: judge ask Adi guess ur frndship quotes that your frnds mean in art

Adi think and he saw both Adi vivaan hands and colors ..also finger impression they completed art

Then he ans pyaar dosti hai

judge: correct .How will you know

Adi : it's because of my frnds they showed there love and friendship in art by both chakor vivaan impression of there hands

You guys selected in first round .you guys three of us have strong understanding

Percap :Adi and vivaan are cooking for chakor to impress and prove both of us know her taste .chakor will find frnds dish

part 3

Round 2:each and every time , girls make food .it's time for boys to make frnds favourite dish .by ur dish ,your friend identify yourself .girls must be hidden for 1 hours ..Please wait for your besties surprise dish

Chakor :all the best adi and viva an. .you guys knows too much of ourself .cheerup

Adi and vivaan :entered in kitchen .They saw the kitchen as exhibition hall ..They don't know any idea. .sudden thought

Vivaan : make a mango slices with chilly powder

Adi : make a sandwich. Both guys recall there childhood moments. They smile each other

After time over : they call chakor and eyes where closed with black ribbon

Girl should taste each dish and find his friends

Chakor :ate one by one dish .and she says no..she came near to adi and vivaan table

Adi :he feed to Chakor and she ate and bit and smiling ly and she feed another half piece to adi .its my adi .He always share sandwich to me from childhood to till now

Adi shocked and smiled whole heartly

Chakor: she moves to table it's vivaan table .vivaan feed mango slices to Chakor with chilly powder he recall balcony incident ..and she feed better half to vivaan ..its my bestie vivaan ...she tell child hood memories and they intro by the mangoes ..He feels lovely abt his moment of childhood

Finally ribbon removed by her eyes .I m more confident and my answers suddenly she make a sound ..mirchi. ...adi and vivaan runs to her with the glass of water ..and then she told just for fun guys .she drink water and they give hi5

jumpingly

They selected for final round

Percap : suraj and bhayaji entry as chief guest ...chakor, adi , vivaan will win? Adi nods bad attitude of suraj ..adi sudden hug suraj. Why adi hug suraj ...guess guy's ...keep watching udaan...😊

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part 4

Suraj kn enter as chief guest of the contest party

Chakor adi ,vivaan shocked to them there

Final round : treasure hunt

Trios got excited .This will decide unity of friendship

Suraj : he look at chakor and vivaan cruel .He questioned himself how they became together .who is that another boy

Night 7 pm

Rules : by the rules they have to play ..hints will be in on the way

Chakor : she changed her dress .she wore sports track suits adi vivaan also wore track suits with sleeve less shirt .They tie jerkin in hips ..All final round pair enter into forest side .They search for clues ..nothing happens .They got hungry .They saw guava tree .All try to pick guava

Adi : pipe climber .go head and pick guava

Chakor : I will adi ..why not

Vivaan : night time forest .its dangerous .We have to find clues ..adi and vivaan make themselves as stand so Chakor can climb on the tree branches she keep her leg on adi and vivaan shoulders .They help her to climb tree

Chakor : guys the view is so nice ..adi and vivaan you also come to tree

Adi : idiot ..pick guava and can down .They may snacks can able to be there

Chakor : she picks fruits .There is a notice .she find clue on branches .I got it adi vivaan .because of her over excitement she fall down .adi and vivaan try to hold her .But she fall on both of them

Vivaan recall how she fall in pipe and adi recall selfie moments. ..Chakor slowly rise her neck .I am safe

Adi : u broke my hips

Vivaan : for me too

Chakor : surprise guys ..I got this notice on branches .its clue .adi Vivaan Chakor hugs together ..Vivaan he think badi maa words he think she is lovable and friendly

Clue : they have to cross the forest and search a lake .In lake boat has another clue

Adi Vivaan Chakor : wow .They saw beautiful lake boat and full moon

Chakor : run toward the boat .she jerked into the river

Adi and vivaan : they both shocked .Adi try to lift Chakor .but she make him to fall into river Chakor u always make fun of me na now enjoy cold water in river

Chakor: now you vivaan

Vivaan : no ...Chakor .u guys get cold come on .He lift Adi and Chakor

Chakor : today chaduji enjoying to see our frndship ..from childhood to till now

Vivaan :he recalls how he insult her when she told abt chaduji

Vivaan gave his jerkin to chakor

Chakor : for me ha Vivaan

Adi : now how we can drive this boat .

Chakor: may I

Adi: no way .my Dr jhansi rani Chakor

Chakor : see that sailing stick ..There will be hints .clue is they have to cross the river by this boat and next clue in another end

Percap : Adi hugs suraj . Why ? Chatvaan able to complete the round and win

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sharmatanya

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Posted: 9 years ago

great going yaar😛 loving chakor-vivaan even more 😳

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snehaHCAPK

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow. Already very excited for d next part.

This game is too gud. Aadi will hug suraj hmm seems like an interesting twist. Plz update soon.

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow beautiful ff dear 👍🏼 waiting for next part

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-vinitha-

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi this is vinitha .Thank alot everyone for loving ff. .Thank you Dr chaavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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part 5

Adi vivaan holds stick and sail the boat

Chakor :she look moon and enjoy the lake atmosphere and climate. She spells water on Adi and vivaan

Trios are mesmerised they saw such a beautiful

water lillies white color in the centre of the river

and water plants .They cross the river and there is a notice board .They have

to make flower bouquet .They must collect flowers from the river .Once they makeflower bouquet .They may get into dinner set up area and camp fire in some distance

Chakor :no guys .its night time .reptiles may be there in plants or in near by flowers .We will wait for sunrise .she hold adi and vivaan hands don't go

adi and vivaan : don't worry Chakor .

Adi : u stay here vivaan .its night time there is none .anyone must stay with her

..suraj came here .He try to harm her .His intention is not good .understand vivaan .We have to protect her

Vivaan : I will come with you Adi ..Water plants roots are heavy .It can harm you .I can't allow you to go alone you are right .We should protect her .But I can't let you into trouble

Adi : I will go first .If I get into trouble you guys save me .stay here .If I need help I will make loud sound call guys

Chakor : she feel bad

adi : hey , u already make me wet .I already tasted this lake cold water .ddon't worry .sshe hold his hand and he is about to go .aadi looks vivaan take care of Chakor

Adi : he swim into the lake .He collect water lillies .He got hurted by water lillies plant .but he didn't give sound later unknowingly his legs are rolled in the water lillies root .He can't able to swim .He can't able to come out

Vivaan and chakor : Adi went there is no sound already 40 min left .chakor feels something bad happening to adi.

Vivaan : I will go and pick adi .you will wait here

Chakor: I don't let you to go alone Vivaan .I will comewith you .adi doesn't listen to my words he go alone .For my safety .I can't let you guys into trouble .she hold Vivaan hands ...chakor and Vivaan enter into the lake by holding hands and they make sound adi ..where are you

Vivaan : don't leave my hands .There is no light hold myhands .We swim by one hands ..your safety is also important for me

They reached the centre of river they are shocked ..adi is struggling with the plants and it's root

Vivaan : stay here chakor .leave my hands chakor I need to go and he adi he need my help

Chakor : I don't let you go alone guys .I will come withvivaan .I will never leave your hands .I will come with you to rescue adi

chakor and vivaan :they go near adi .aadi got hurtehurted and wounded his hands are bleeding andhis legs get into plant root .hHe is struggling .tThey both swim into the bottom of water .tThey plug the plant root which holds adi legs so he get free .vivaan hand's also get wounded

adi is so tired and wounded in legs tootoo ..sso vivaan and chakor they hold adi .aadi hold flower in his hand .she took one hand of adi around her shoulder and vivaan hold adi another hand on his shoulder .tThey balance adi and chakor vivaan cross river by swimming one hand and three of them reach ground

Three of them fall in ground

Chakor: she has teared eyes ..she cares for adi wounds and she saw vivaan hands also wounds .because of me adi get into trouble and because of me vivaan hands got hurted by plugging lillies round in one hands

Adi : don't worry Chakor .We are alright

Adi and Chakor shocked and shuttered what happened to vivaan

Vivaan :he got shivering and became unconscious and bodyand his figures are shivering .He doesn't open his eyes and he tells something

Adi : adi shocked what to do .There is none to help us.What to do

Chakor: she remove vivaan shoes and rub his foot to get heat

adi: he rub his hands .He got idea after making bouquet.they instructions and dinner setup in some distance ..He made bouquet .hHe say.Chakor stay with vivaan I will be back

Chakor : rub his hands .vivaan hold her tightly in unconscious state and he start crying .He is trying to say something

Adi: he submit bouquet .He bring wine for vivaan .its will make vivaan body heat .He reached near vivaan and Chakor

Vivaan : he holds Chakor hands in unconscious state .maa...maa don't marry badi pappa .why you let me alone maa .badi maa I wantmagical milk this time every day u feed me otherwise my figures shivering

Adi : we know he is depressed because of his maa .He got shocked .BT there is some mystery behind Vivaan state .I think some one drugging Vivaan so that he get shiver in fingers when didn't had that drug

Chakor : she is shocked .sshe feels bad .tthat means forrevenge tejaswini make vivaAn drug addict .he ditched and torture by his own family

Adi : he feed VIVAAN LITTLE wine .don't feel Chakor. I will act as medicine for his shivering

Adi and Chakor care for Vivaan he wake up normally after hours .three of them reach dinner set up

percap: maha episode no percap keep watching udaan