Paakhi's poem to Veer : This is who you are

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Posted: 10 years ago
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In response to Anonnee's poem this is my own version...😊

You came into my life
Caused me pain and strife
You took away my AAyan
Forced me to wed another Man...

You have some kind of Jadoo
You worked on my baccha
You made him love you
And gave you his Father's jaga!!!

Then i looked in your eyes
I saw your tears I herd your cries
I tought you to be just like me
I accepted your friendship
I resigned myself to my fate
locked my heart away as you did yours.

You were quirky, you were funny
A nerdy nerd., a quite companion
Things were fine things were quite
But little did I know you lost your mind...

Now you say you love me
I am the one for you
Let me tell you Mr. some one surely fooled you
I am inlove with Anshu...and you had your Kirti
Now you all bur forgot her...and expect me to forget him??

You are here as my sons's ND...
You are here are an overseer to my Anshu's business
Don't you dear say you love me
For that is not part of our countract

My heart is locked tight stopp knocing at the door
I SAID i already was in Love
Why you making me smile for...
Stop it I said Stop being so nice
STOP changing the game plan
STOP being you...
I don't I don't I don't... love you
Hmmm...maybe I do...

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-Romi- thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice poem vinnie !

last para is truly amazing 👏
You said the unsaid in there !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excellent Vinnie
I miss your poetry

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